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The MC started out as Peter Parker, a genius who was simply born with a weak physique, but when he gained super powers he became Flash Thompson instead of Spider-Man. It started out as a slow and interesting story, with the MC being someone who tries hard but was unlucky and was born with various physical problems. At first the MC was taking months to gradually discover his powers and it looked like it would be an interesting story about an MC who slowly learns magic and uses his intelligence to get the most out of it. I expected him to slowly use magic, perhaps making potions, to cure his birth defects and slowly achieve the physique of a normal person and then become superhuman, while taking risks and using magic intelligently to fight stronger supernaturals beings. Unfortunately around chapter 22 the story completely changed, it doesn't even feel like the same book anymore. The MC who still hasn't learned a single spell instantly becomes a super soldier and a Gary Stu, including instant popularity at school and joining a sport he didn't have any interest in before. The MC changes from an interesting character to one of those generic football players you have in every teen series, he even starts to get revenge on the guy who bullied him once before, even though the MC has already taken his revenge and solved the problem a long time ago. Seriously, he got revenge and blackmailed the guy a long time ago, why is he doing it again after bemcoming a Gary Stu?
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man the story just started a little while ago and it's already one of the best on the site, so good the development of myr, it's very cool, which girl will he be and so exciting, the drama here is very good and it's not boring just like the other story,
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Just started reading this and i love it. Always been a big fan of magic And i thought tje show could use a bit more instead of a new shapeshifter every season. And this does exaclty that. Only reason i didnt give a perfect review is beCause i binged read it in one night.
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the idea was good the grammar was good but sadly the whole weak nerdy kid who get punched in the first day with no reason was just fooking cringe. No seriously the whole interaction of Mc with people and animals is really awkward and some times annoying. Mc just trying to talk smart and funny almost every time with no reason,he can not interact like normal human and is funny how he supposed to be a awkward kid with no friends.but when meet somone he is trying to be a smartass with no reason. i could read only 6.5 chapters and believe me half of them i wanted to dropped it. The story maybe is really good but the way Mc is around People is just plain annoying for me. Give it a try, maybe you like it!
one of the best teen Wolf ff on wn.. just the oc is great, author does a great job at portraying the world.. the mc has personality, the characters are what you could expect them to be and progress is just on point..
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This is a very well written story which unlike a lot of other fanfics has characters keep their personalities that we’ve became accustomed to from the original show/story while still having their characters develop as the story goes on and does a really good job of placing the mc into the story and incorporating him into events without making it seem forced, Can’t wait for more chapters.
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One of the most well thought out, and well written, fanfics that i have ever read. I have read 23 chapters last night staying up till well past 4am. Please keep up the good work.
This is perfect. Perfect MC and históry.This is perfect. Perfect MC and históry. This is perfect. Perfect MC and históry.This is perfect. Perfect MC and históry.
Really good just hope for Lydia to become his mistress and Malia as his wife if you do this author-san I will donate all my stones after every chapter. once you get to the romance of course so yeah I will wait and see.
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Honestly, I really do like this fan-fic. Writing quality is good (not that I really looked for grammatical mistakes). Interesting MC, curious how his character will evolve. Naturally, I like the Story Development because i'm a big fan of the tv series teen wolf. The only question I have is if there is like a set time for updated chapters? if so, what are those times? ps: correct me if I made a grammatical mistake because I wanne better my English.
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It's an amazing story, with a very lovable Mc. You actually want to root for him. He goes through some stuff that is super messed up, but he doesn't stop he keeps on moving. He is a very likeable Mc. And the author has done a good job with the story overall. I hope to see more from this and I hope this only gets better. Thank you
Great plot,doesn't feels like reading "just another" Teen Wolf fic, interaction between characters is very good and very nice story overall so great work !!👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌
Bro i don't know what to say even I just started reading this yesterday and i can't help it but i am addicted to this. This fanfic is really in depth it shows the life of the characters a year before that of the plot and it shows exactly how they were at the begining of the series and your writing is really good and i just want to say I love this fiction and i love you❤. PS: Please make allison the love interest and don't drop this ff...........
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Tiết lộ Spoiler The MC started out as Peter Parker, a genius who was simply born with a weak physique, but when he gained super powers he became Flash Thompson instead of Spider-Man. It started out as a slow and interesting story, with the MC being someone who tries hard but was unlucky and was born with various physical problems. At first the MC was taking months to gradually discover his powers and it looked like it would be an interesting story about an MC who slowly learns magic and uses his intelligence to get the most out of it. I expected him to slowly use magic, perhaps making potions, to cure his birth defects and slowly achieve the physique of a normal person and then become superhuman, while taking risks and using magic intelligently to fight stronger supernaturals beings. Unfortunately around chapter 22 the story completely changed, it doesn't even feel like the same book anymore. The MC who still hasn't learned a single spell instantly becomes a super soldier and a Gary Stu, including instant popularity at school and joining a sport he didn't have any interest in before. The MC changes from an interesting character to one of those generic football players you have in every teen series, he even starts to get revenge on the guy who bullied him once before, even though the MC has already taken his revenge and solved the problem a long time ago. Seriously, he got revenge and blackmailed the guy a long time ago, why is he doing it again after bemcoming a Gary Stu?
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man the story just started a little while ago and it's already one of the best on the site, so good the development of myr, it's very cool, which girl will he be and so exciting, the drama here is very good and it's not boring just like the other story,
This is perfect, and i need more. This is perfect, and i need more. This is perfect, and i need more. This is perfect, and i need more. This is perfect, and i need more. This is perfect, and i need more. This is perfect, and i need more. This is perfect, and i need more.
Just started reading this and i love it. Always been a big fan of magic And i thought tje show could use a bit more instead of a new shapeshifter every season. And this does exaclty that. Only reason i didnt give a perfect review is beCause i binged read it in one night.
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the idea was good the grammar was good but sadly the whole weak nerdy kid who get punched in the first day with no reason was just fooking cringe. No seriously the whole interaction of Mc with people and animals is really awkward and some times annoying. Mc just trying to talk smart and funny almost every time with no reason,he can not interact like normal human and is funny how he supposed to be a awkward kid with no friends.but when meet somone he is trying to be a smartass with no reason. i could read only 6.5 chapters and believe me half of them i wanted to dropped it. The story maybe is really good but the way Mc is around People is just plain annoying for me. Give it a try, maybe you like it!
one of the best teen Wolf ff on wn.. just the oc is great, author does a great job at portraying the world.. the mc has personality, the characters are what you could expect them to be and progress is just on point..
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This is a very well written story which unlike a lot of other fanfics has characters keep their personalities that we’ve became accustomed to from the original show/story while still having their characters develop as the story goes on and does a really good job of placing the mc into the story and incorporating him into events without making it seem forced, Can’t wait for more chapters.
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One of the most well thought out, and well written, fanfics that i have ever read. I have read 23 chapters last night staying up till well past 4am. Please keep up the good work.
This is perfect. Perfect MC and históry.This is perfect. Perfect MC and históry. This is perfect. Perfect MC and históry.This is perfect. Perfect MC and históry.
Really good just hope for Lydia to become his mistress and Malia as his wife if you do this author-san I will donate all my stones after every chapter. once you get to the romance of course so yeah I will wait and see.
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Honestly, I really do like this fan-fic. Writing quality is good (not that I really looked for grammatical mistakes). Interesting MC, curious how his character will evolve. Naturally, I like the Story Development because i'm a big fan of the tv series teen wolf. The only question I have is if there is like a set time for updated chapters? if so, what are those times? ps: correct me if I made a grammatical mistake because I wanne better my English.
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It's an amazing story, with a very lovable Mc. You actually want to root for him. He goes through some stuff that is super messed up, but he doesn't stop he keeps on moving. He is a very likeable Mc. And the author has done a good job with the story overall. I hope to see more from this and I hope this only gets better. Thank you
Great plot,doesn't feels like reading "just another" Teen Wolf fic, interaction between characters is very good and very nice story overall so great work !!👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌
Bro i don't know what to say even I just started reading this yesterday and i can't help it but i am addicted to this. This fanfic is really in depth it shows the life of the characters a year before that of the plot and it shows exactly how they were at the begining of the series and your writing is really good and i just want to say I love this fiction and i love you❤. PS: Please make allison the love interest and don't drop this ff...........
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