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New favorite fan fic keep up the good work author and please don’t drop 😀………………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………….
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Not enough chapters 😭😭😭 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The word teen in teen mage for your title is unnecessary. It just sounds a little off and repetitive. ………..…………………………………………………………………………………….
Para todos os Brs: que fanfic foda, bem escrito, e com um desenvolvimento interessante. Minha fanfic favorita atualmente, Podem ler que não vão se arrepender.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Have never seen , teen wolf ? Gave this a shot because i was bored and this is pretty good.Keep it Up!:P~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
his name is unique. *mic drop* ........................................................... ...........................................................
I like the personality of mc the story is building with calm.I enjoy this fan fic like grimm and teen wolf i think that there are just a few ff goods about them and this is one of the nice.
Great writing quality some small errors you wouldn’t be bothered by but story seems great I like that it started before cannon and how it’s not zooming into story or powers like that I just hope that the updates stay consistent
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Very fun to read and original development. Hope they keep updating because I want to see where it goes. Filler, filler, filler, filler.
Noice.........................................................................................................................................................
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DUDE!!!! Its you again!? you fcked me with your 2 TWD and now that I'm trying to find a new fic, you came up yet again with a new one. GOD help me if you drop this one.
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you are a great writer I think this story is great but even Scott was only a loser for half an episode are you trying to make a villain or a main character a main character her that has no friends or even true loved ones because your leading to him being adopted right the dad is distant the mom overbearing and possibly the only really supportive relationship he has since Erica Scott stiles all just pity him you've made a character that's in far succeeds his eq maybe that is a little harsh but honestly ur giving him the social life of a school shooter all you need is Lydia or Jackson to run over the coyote and he becomes a serial killer
I decided to do this review because i expected much more from this fanfic(chapter 11 currently). Very boring reading so far, only thing keeping me from leaving was the mc’s glow up that doesn’t even have a set time to happen. Mc is brave but also very weak(like literally the weakest). Carachters are all anoying including lydia. The moment with the with carval are unreadable(they amount to 3chapters or so) and i just had to skip all of it. Good parts are the perfect grammar And world background the author has built. Sorry for the rant i guess this work just Isn’t for me. For the ones who read this review, don’t get discoraged and give it a try(at least 5 chapter) from there you can tell if you will like it or not.
Cheeky self-review from the author (Doing this so this fanfic will show up in the rankings) I like how this is shaping up. I’m not the smartest person alive, so trying to write an MC that is very smart is a bit difficult. And please comment. It gives me some ideas and causes me to think more in-depth about things I might otherwise not. It also makes my day when people comment on my works
I dont speak english but this fanfic is good 👍👍👍 ...................................................................................................... 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍
New favorite fan fic keep up the good work author and please don’t drop 😀………………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………….
🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖
Not enough chapters 😭😭😭 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The word teen in teen mage for your title is unnecessary. It just sounds a little off and repetitive. ………..…………………………………………………………………………………….
Para todos os Brs: que fanfic foda, bem escrito, e com um desenvolvimento interessante. Minha fanfic favorita atualmente, Podem ler que não vão se arrepender.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Have never seen , teen wolf ? Gave this a shot because i was bored and this is pretty good.Keep it Up!:P~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
his name is unique. *mic drop* ........................................................... ...........................................................
I like the personality of mc the story is building with calm.I enjoy this fan fic like grimm and teen wolf i think that there are just a few ff goods about them and this is one of the nice.
Great writing quality some small errors you wouldn’t be bothered by but story seems great I like that it started before cannon and how it’s not zooming into story or powers like that I just hope that the updates stay consistent
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Very fun to read and original development. Hope they keep updating because I want to see where it goes. Filler, filler, filler, filler.
Noice.........................................................................................................................................................
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DUDE!!!! Its you again!? you fcked me with your 2 TWD and now that I'm trying to find a new fic, you came up yet again with a new one. GOD help me if you drop this one.
Love it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
you are a great writer I think this story is great but even Scott was only a loser for half an episode are you trying to make a villain or a main character a main character her that has no friends or even true loved ones because your leading to him being adopted right the dad is distant the mom overbearing and possibly the only really supportive relationship he has since Erica Scott stiles all just pity him you've made a character that's in far succeeds his eq maybe that is a little harsh but honestly ur giving him the social life of a school shooter all you need is Lydia or Jackson to run over the coyote and he becomes a serial killer
I decided to do this review because i expected much more from this fanfic(chapter 11 currently). Very boring reading so far, only thing keeping me from leaving was the mc’s glow up that doesn’t even have a set time to happen. Mc is brave but also very weak(like literally the weakest). Carachters are all anoying including lydia. The moment with the with carval are unreadable(they amount to 3chapters or so) and i just had to skip all of it. Good parts are the perfect grammar And world background the author has built. Sorry for the rant i guess this work just Isn’t for me. For the ones who read this review, don’t get discoraged and give it a try(at least 5 chapter) from there you can tell if you will like it or not.
Cheeky self-review from the author (Doing this so this fanfic will show up in the rankings) I like how this is shaping up. I’m not the smartest person alive, so trying to write an MC that is very smart is a bit difficult. And please comment. It gives me some ideas and causes me to think more in-depth about things I might otherwise not. It also makes my day when people comment on my works
I dont speak english but this fanfic is good 👍👍👍 ...................................................................................................... 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍