I agree that the blue lock is a great place to train but there is no denying that if the mc decides to leave the base categories of a team to go to Japan it would not make much sense even if in the blue lock he would evolve no and how does it stay in Spain it was not going to let him evolve even in the blue lock and it is recognized that the youth categories of professional teams are very important in the evolution of a Neo Egoist League player and I am looking forward to seeing what you will do
It's an interesting story but it's nothing but I've seen a lot of similar stories but that's not a bad thing the biggest problem is Mc has become very annoying and seems super naive. I mean the first thing any reasonable person would do after going to DC is stay as far away from Gotham as possible in short and a good story with a bad mc that honestly stops a super naive kid who makes bad decisions but I think that will make it better in time good luck with your story
thanks for the chapter
the story has many holes like an 8 year old being able to defeat 3 adult fighters and honestly jon's idea turns into an avatar and just laughs but that's just my opinion I wish you good luck with the story
honestly i understand the reason for what happened in the chapter i can't help but be frustrated with mc he knew what was going to happen and even then he didn't do anything trusting that everything would happen like in the original story this really a little annoying so i hope he doesn't keep doing it
honestly the story had a lot of potential but for some reason the author decided to follow a path at least bad since let's be honest being a villain in the dc universe is one of the worst choices and even with his system he will never be as strong as the heroes but strong but other than that the story is average there is nothing very good apart from the idea of the story but there is also nothing too bad
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I was honestly enjoying the story I thought it had a lot of potential but I really didn't understand why the mc revealed that he has a system that's a lot of stupidity if you think a little after he's no longer useful to the league they'll probably kill the mc since it doesn't make sense you let someone with that kind of power stay alive since it's very dangerous I really think that of all the options the author had this was one of the worst but this one is just my opinion I wish the author good luck with the story
thanks for the chapter
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original Reborn in Vkings
Who would have thought that after dying in a car accident a person from our world would end up being reborn in the world of one of his favorite series with only three limited wishes (English is not my first language so don't expect perfect grammar, besides I'm writing it for the first time, I'm just writing this story for fun, so don't expect one chapter a day, I'll try to do two chapters a week)1 Chs 18 sưu tầm
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Teen Wolf: New Life
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