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I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
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I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
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I am loving this fanfic. Just wish there were more chapters. Anyway keep up the amazing work Author-sama and don't drop.....................
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For me, it's been a while since I enjoyed reading a "gamer" fic, the characters are good, the MC is the classic "Emo" but he has his own story, so, i suppose, he has a reason to being like that. He is OP, i like that He is Ruthless, i love that His family are full on yanderes or possible ones, i really like that The author change some things about canon, love that. fk canon Writing 4.5. there is many autocorrect errors but nothing serius Updates 5. 1 chapter per day or two days, is pretty good for me Story Development 5 I like so far what I'm seeing Character Design 5. I love his family Background 5. He changed things that for me make make the story more enjoyable so it aligns with what he wants to do
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good writing quality with utterly terrible decisions that break immersion. mc blabbers on about how if he wields this particular item he will be mathematically invincible- gives it away to his vulnerable sister to make her stronger, which will inevitably put a huge target on her back. tells everyone he knows about the system which completely breaks immersion, this is the thing about reincarnation novels and system novels, once anyone mentions the enxistence of the system or their reincarnation it immediatly breaks immersion. its cause everyone knows these novels arent truly stories but simple fanfictions, once immersion is broken you realise there was nothing to be immersed in anyway. overall i enjoyed the first 7 or so chaptera, physically couldnt read the rest. i think the author has good writinf skills but constantly writes himself into a corner.
One of the better DXD fanfics with just enough fluff and characters development that doesn't seem forced. Some situations may seem weird to people but it's a new refreshing take an gamer type fanfics so continue the good work author.
Want fanfic that is worth reading? Then this is for you. Man, this Fanfic is awesome. I like how the author fits every MC action into his personality. The characters that the author created have a personality, unlike the others that make their characters 1Dimensional doll that obey every MC and/or author wishes. ...... What the only problem is some misspellings, not placing the right punctuation, etc.(it's not a bother though) I'm sure it will become perfect since(if I'm correct) the author didn't have an editor
I read only 10 chapters but only thing that I can say is - you mc is not the only one bored here. Like in those 10 chapters we have only :leveling up, slice of life with his unusual family and mc lose mind that actually comes in to when he need to kill threats, means for half a chapter. Then back to a most bland guy in the whole story. Very interesting, right? If you like so much Saitama from one punch man, try to think why he was so intresting for a second. Answer, he wasn't. The only difference he was put in to a situation when he whould be interesting because he doesn't act like other heroes, the story goes from different povs and most of the time Saitama isn't main character. That's why he was working. There we have a long exposition how he level up - I could read original manhwa for that, because at least he choose more interesting way to build himself. And not so fast. Long exposition how he's so different but still love his family dearly - not 5 times in 10 chapters, okay? How he have a condition but still trying to be normal for the sake of his family - again repetitive and smells like someone wanna talk about his gender. But it's have a good point, family harem. Unfortunately we still read a story from boring guy that doesn't want anything perspective. Conclusion :if mc whould be this kind of useless decoration for the rest of the story and you try to suck how his family are so capable ,strong and beautiful - I don't think that whould be fun,but in the end it's mostly subjective review. But speaking objectively, I can't say something else. That's just boring.
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It's interesting, but I really hope the MC recovers a semblance of emotions. He seems too cold, other than that this fanfic send decent enough ++++++±++++++++++++++++++((+
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your novel is interesting and has potential but I'm temporarily stopping at chapter 4 my reason being you need to describe the family better I don't know who is who and who is talking you need to fix that before you get to far in this story you have no character descriptions you don't say who is talking and you don't say what is the relationship each person has to echo and if you do its so mixed up I cant tell who your talking about so please redo this a little or at least put an auxiliary chapter for character pictures and descriptions Writing Quality 5 stars Stability of Updates 5 stars Story Development 5 stars interesting so far Character Design 2 stars I don't know who is who or what they look like World Background 4 stars stopped at chap 4 The total score 4.2
this novel is everuthing wrong with webnovel novels .........................................................................................................
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Tiết lộ Spoiler I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
It WAS so good.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
🚮, for future reader, in this novel, mc will always weaker than all of his family, retard MC....[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I am loving this fanfic. Just wish there were more chapters. Anyway keep up the amazing work Author-sama and don't drop.....................
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Tiết lộ Spoiler For me, it's been a while since I enjoyed reading a "gamer" fic, the characters are good, the MC is the classic "Emo" but he has his own story, so, i suppose, he has a reason to being like that. He is OP, i like that He is Ruthless, i love that His family are full on yanderes or possible ones, i really like that The author change some things about canon, love that. fk canon Writing 4.5. there is many autocorrect errors but nothing serius Updates 5. 1 chapter per day or two days, is pretty good for me Story Development 5 I like so far what I'm seeing Character Design 5. I love his family Background 5. He changed things that for me make make the story more enjoyable so it aligns with what he wants to do
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good writing quality with utterly terrible decisions that break immersion. mc blabbers on about how if he wields this particular item he will be mathematically invincible- gives it away to his vulnerable sister to make her stronger, which will inevitably put a huge target on her back. tells everyone he knows about the system which completely breaks immersion, this is the thing about reincarnation novels and system novels, once anyone mentions the enxistence of the system or their reincarnation it immediatly breaks immersion. its cause everyone knows these novels arent truly stories but simple fanfictions, once immersion is broken you realise there was nothing to be immersed in anyway. overall i enjoyed the first 7 or so chaptera, physically couldnt read the rest. i think the author has good writinf skills but constantly writes himself into a corner.
One of the better DXD fanfics with just enough fluff and characters development that doesn't seem forced. Some situations may seem weird to people but it's a new refreshing take an gamer type fanfics so continue the good work author.
Want fanfic that is worth reading? Then this is for you. Man, this Fanfic is awesome. I like how the author fits every MC action into his personality. The characters that the author created have a personality, unlike the others that make their characters 1Dimensional doll that obey every MC and/or author wishes. ...... What the only problem is some misspellings, not placing the right punctuation, etc.(it's not a bother though) I'm sure it will become perfect since(if I'm correct) the author didn't have an editor
I read only 10 chapters but only thing that I can say is - you mc is not the only one bored here. Like in those 10 chapters we have only :leveling up, slice of life with his unusual family and mc lose mind that actually comes in to when he need to kill threats, means for half a chapter. Then back to a most bland guy in the whole story. Very interesting, right? If you like so much Saitama from one punch man, try to think why he was so intresting for a second. Answer, he wasn't. The only difference he was put in to a situation when he whould be interesting because he doesn't act like other heroes, the story goes from different povs and most of the time Saitama isn't main character. That's why he was working. There we have a long exposition how he level up - I could read original manhwa for that, because at least he choose more interesting way to build himself. And not so fast. Long exposition how he's so different but still love his family dearly - not 5 times in 10 chapters, okay? How he have a condition but still trying to be normal for the sake of his family - again repetitive and smells like someone wanna talk about his gender. But it's have a good point, family harem. Unfortunately we still read a story from boring guy that doesn't want anything perspective. Conclusion :if mc whould be this kind of useless decoration for the rest of the story and you try to suck how his family are so capable ,strong and beautiful - I don't think that whould be fun,but in the end it's mostly subjective review. But speaking objectively, I can't say something else. That's just boring.
Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work-
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It's interesting, but I really hope the MC recovers a semblance of emotions. He seems too cold, other than that this fanfic send decent enough ++++++±++++++++++++++++++((+
Tiết lộ Spoiler your novel is interesting and has potential but I'm temporarily stopping at chapter 4 my reason being you need to describe the family better I don't know who is who and who is talking you need to fix that before you get to far in this story you have no character descriptions you don't say who is talking and you don't say what is the relationship each person has to echo and if you do its so mixed up I cant tell who your talking about so please redo this a little or at least put an auxiliary chapter for character pictures and descriptions Writing Quality 5 stars Stability of Updates 5 stars Story Development 5 stars interesting so far Character Design 2 stars I don't know who is who or what they look like World Background 4 stars stopped at chap 4 The total score 4.2
this novel is everuthing wrong with webnovel novels .........................................................................................................
love it. continue the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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Why dropping this??? why?!?....... ... .......... ......................................................................................... .