A bored Gamer and his budding harem~! (Dropped)

LV 6

4thEmperor

1st: Complain # very few miss spelling. # I fear the Author dropping the story,,, fear ,a lot # no more complain ????? 2nd: Praise # this story is Golddddddddd # this story is Golddddddddd # this story is Golddddddddd # this story is Golddddddddd # this story is Golddddddddd

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

I read only 10 chapters but only thing that I can say is - you mc is not the only one bored here. Like in those 10 chapters we have only :leveling up, slice of life with his unusual family and mc lose mind that actually comes in to when he need to kill threats, means for half a chapter. Then back to a most bland guy in the whole story. Very interesting, right? If you like so much Saitama from one punch man, try to think why he was so intresting for a second. Answer, he wasn't. The only difference he was put in to a situation when he whould be interesting because he doesn't act like other heroes, the story goes from different povs and most of the time Saitama isn't main character. That's why he was working. There we have a long exposition how he level up - I could read original manhwa for that, because at least he choose more interesting way to build himself. And not so fast. Long exposition how he's so different but still love his family dearly - not 5 times in 10 chapters, okay? How he have a condition but still trying to be normal for the sake of his family - again repetitive and smells like someone wanna talk about his gender. But it's have a good point, family harem. Unfortunately we still read a story from boring guy that doesn't want anything perspective. Conclusion :if mc whould be this kind of useless decoration for the rest of the story and you try to suck how his family are so capable ,strong and beautiful - I don't think that whould be fun,but in the end it's mostly subjective review. But speaking objectively, I can't say something else. That's just boring.

LV 14

Fantastic_Spirit

Epic fanfic. Good because its Gamer. Gamer and DxD together make great stories, if you dont force him into a peerage that is. If you force him then bad.

LV 12

comedyisland

good writing quality with utterly terrible decisions that break immersion. mc blabbers on about how if he wields this particular item he will be mathematically invincible- gives it away to his vulnerable sister to make her stronger, which will inevitably put a huge target on her back. tells everyone he knows about the system which completely breaks immersion, this is the thing about reincarnation novels and system novels, once anyone mentions the enxistence of the system or their reincarnation it immediatly breaks immersion. its cause everyone knows these novels arent truly stories but simple fanfictions, once immersion is broken you realise there was nothing to be immersed in anyway. overall i enjoyed the first 7 or so chaptera, physically couldnt read the rest. i think the author has good writinf skills but constantly writes himself into a corner.

LV 1

Neko_Shura

🚮, for future reader, in this novel, mc will always weaker than all of his family, retard MC....[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 14

noobageddon_

This is unexpectedly good. When i saw the tittle and the tags. I half expect it to be an every other shallow harem stories. Fortunately i was wrong. The character has deapth, chapters has an above average length thats you wont be distracted cuz of the short chap, its also immersive to read. There are holes here and there, but it dont matter cuz i saw authoer in one of the paragraph comments thats this is and AU. Soo yah. Its also a w*ncest. hehehe. The gamer system is good. The path he take is also kinda smart. And the best part is what happen to isse. Its good and its kinda unexpected, it caught me off guard and kinda funny. What happen to isse you ask? Try reading it and youll know. This is a harem and an inc*st(look at the tag). So if you dont like that, this is not for you. Its only 11 chapter though. So... Ohh, it also had a decent grammar.

LV 5

Bu_M_Bu_Um

Great story overall, some errors here and there but who doesn't make some? I like the characters and the development is fast paced enough to keep you reading without the boredom of fillers or the author repeating the same things again and again like other stories. But not rushed to the point were MC is a universe destrying force of nature after 2h of training like some others. So... Good job author and continue like that ;)

LV 3

NoHaremPlease

this novel is everuthing wrong with webnovel novels .........................................................................................................

can you add power rank u can post it in auxiliary chapter?.......................................+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

LV 1

ILoveYouAll

Seems great for now! I can't wait for more chapters! =======================================================================================

LV 10

Akira_Costa_0011

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LV 4

ArthurCE10

All I can say is.... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

LV 10

JUST_LAUGH

Want fanfic that is worth reading? Then this is for you. Man, this Fanfic is awesome. I like how the author fits every MC action into his personality. The characters that the author created have a personality, unlike the others that make their characters 1Dimensional doll that obey every MC and/or author wishes. ...... What the only problem is some misspellings, not placing the right punctuation, etc.(it's not a bother though) I'm sure it will become perfect since(if I'm correct) the author didn't have an editor

LV 4

_Artemis69

Interesting~ .......................................................................................................................................................................

LV 5

Count_Azure

This story is going to be inevitably dropped/rewritten since there many plot holes(even if it is an AU) and there will be more in the near future. I even doubt that team DxD will be formed if this story last and there will be no point continuing the story if that happens.

LV 4

89Mouraai98

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LV 5

DandeLion

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Akakushiroku

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