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Great chapter so far Need more chapter Yychcycfuvuyxfygjgiyxychigutxufbjhvfygjfjuffjfudyuffuyftftxrxtxtccyuvyxyfufcyfufuufgugutdyfguydyfguyfydfufhdyfufjfhhdfhfjfhdhydydyffuvjgjhihiohigufyfdyfhjghffjgkkgjfjgjgjfgjgjgj
I don't really know how to put it into words but I really love this fic, it deserves to be on top, the best Dragon Ball fic out of all of them, most of them tend to be dimension jumping and it gets old real fast, this is a marvelous fic, it really saddens me to see that this fic hasn't been updated for more than 2 months now, author if your reading this, I hope you will return to this wonderful story, I can't wait to see what will happen next and see the evolution of Turles and best everyone by becoming a super saiyan God first, that would be awesome to see!
So far I enjoy the novel. The highlight for me is that the main character and the other characters have their own personalities, the quality of the writing is solid and I can easily imagine the scenes from the descriptions, I really am hoping for an update I miss this and can't wait for Turles to exploit the zenkai boost and reap the benefits, Author, if you are reading this, thank you for your time and effort in writing this wonderful story!
I am enjoying the novel so far. The highlight for me is that the main character and other character all have their own personalities, the writing quality is solid and it's easy for me to envision the scenes based on the descriptions, I'm really hoping for an update on this jewel of a story!
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This is one of the best Dragon ball ff out there so you guys should really read it, I'm not gonna spoil how good but believe me it is one of the best
It is a very well written story, and has a nice story background. Hoping twe get even more chapters to read.🔥🔥👌😎😎......................
buen capitulo, espero que lo sigas continuando, una pregunta que personaje de dragon sera tu pareja. Tendras las tranformacion del super saiyan 5 eso seria genial
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This novel is a beautiful masterpiece, I truly enjoy MC's that are not afraid to spill some blood and are always two steps ahead of the game, Author if you are reading this, thank you for taking the time and effort to make this wonderful story, and please don't mind the haters because they're not worth your time.
Excelente fanfic Estou adorando a história até agora Por favor não desista dela, ela possui muito potencial. Toda uma trajetória com treinamento simultaneamente com planos é muito bom
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the novel is good to read and still has lots of potential please don't drop it and specially when it hasn't even reach the best parts on DBZ and DBS also the movies ones too, he just reach SSG so don't drop it
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Oi, eu adorei ler essa história, estou esperando muito empolgado pelos próximos capítulos, eu sou brasileiro e precisei traduzir para poder ler de forma tranquila...mas de fato, sua obra é incrível, gostei de o Turles ter recebido uma nova chance para recomeçar e estou ansioso para saber a trajetória e aproximação que o Raditz pode ter com o Goku. Novamente digo, é um bom trabalho. Espero que a tradução do Google possa lhe ajudar a entender o que eu escrevi, de todo modo, eu estou elogiando seu trabalho.
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Хороший фанфик. Жалко что там мало фанфиков по Драконьему жемчугу, особенно хороший. Продолжай писать, тебя читают даже через гугл перевод.)👍
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If i would say, This fanfic is one of the best not gonna lie, The grammar is good. The characters is not out of characters, Everything is just good, From zero to hero, It's just good give it a try and you will thank me later
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good story so far some mistakes in some sentences and misspelled words could use some editing and proofreading (*just saying no need to take it seriously*) but overall a good dbff to read.
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A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work........... A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work........... A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work...........
A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work........... A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work........... A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work...........
at the moment I'm liking it ,,,,,, we'll see what happens in the future. ..... .........................................................................
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Great chapter so far Need more chapter Yychcycfuvuyxfygjgiyxychigutxufbjhvfygjfjuffjfudyuffuyftftxrxtxtccyuvyxyfufcyfufuufgugutdyfguydyfguyfydfufhdyfufjfhhdfhfjfhdhydydyffuvjgjhihiohigufyfdyfhjghffjgkkgjfjgjgjfgjgjgj
I don't really know how to put it into words but I really love this fic, it deserves to be on top, the best Dragon Ball fic out of all of them, most of them tend to be dimension jumping and it gets old real fast, this is a marvelous fic, it really saddens me to see that this fic hasn't been updated for more than 2 months now, author if your reading this, I hope you will return to this wonderful story, I can't wait to see what will happen next and see the evolution of Turles and best everyone by becoming a super saiyan God first, that would be awesome to see!
So far I enjoy the novel. The highlight for me is that the main character and the other characters have their own personalities, the quality of the writing is solid and I can easily imagine the scenes from the descriptions, I really am hoping for an update I miss this and can't wait for Turles to exploit the zenkai boost and reap the benefits, Author, if you are reading this, thank you for your time and effort in writing this wonderful story!
I am enjoying the novel so far. The highlight for me is that the main character and other character all have their own personalities, the writing quality is solid and it's easy for me to envision the scenes based on the descriptions, I'm really hoping for an update on this jewel of a story!
Good Story ................................................ .....................
This is one of the best Dragon ball ff out there so you guys should really read it, I'm not gonna spoil how good but believe me it is one of the best
It is a very well written story, and has a nice story background. Hoping twe get even more chapters to read.🔥🔥👌😎😎......................
buen capitulo, espero que lo sigas continuando, una pregunta que personaje de dragon sera tu pareja. Tendras las tranformacion del super saiyan 5 eso seria genial
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Tiết lộ Spoiler This novel is a beautiful masterpiece, I truly enjoy MC's that are not afraid to spill some blood and are always two steps ahead of the game, Author if you are reading this, thank you for taking the time and effort to make this wonderful story, and please don't mind the haters because they're not worth your time.
Excelente fanfic Estou adorando a história até agora Por favor não desista dela, ela possui muito potencial. Toda uma trajetória com treinamento simultaneamente com planos é muito bom
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the novel is good to read and still has lots of potential please don't drop it and specially when it hasn't even reach the best parts on DBZ and DBS also the movies ones too, he just reach SSG so don't drop it
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Oi, eu adorei ler essa história, estou esperando muito empolgado pelos próximos capítulos, eu sou brasileiro e precisei traduzir para poder ler de forma tranquila...mas de fato, sua obra é incrível, gostei de o Turles ter recebido uma nova chance para recomeçar e estou ansioso para saber a trajetória e aproximação que o Raditz pode ter com o Goku. Novamente digo, é um bom trabalho. Espero que a tradução do Google possa lhe ajudar a entender o que eu escrevi, de todo modo, eu estou elogiando seu trabalho.
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Хороший фанфик. Жалко что там мало фанфиков по Драконьему жемчугу, особенно хороший. Продолжай писать, тебя читают даже через гугл перевод.)👍
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If i would say, This fanfic is one of the best not gonna lie, The grammar is good. The characters is not out of characters, Everything is just good, From zero to hero, It's just good give it a try and you will thank me later
Keep it coming .............................................................................................................................
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Good Novel. Good job Author 😍. ................................................................. ................................................................. ................................................................. .................................................................
good story so far some mistakes in some sentences and misspelled words could use some editing and proofreading (*just saying no need to take it seriously*) but overall a good dbff to read.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work........... A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work........... A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work...........
A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work........... A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work........... A good story so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue on wards so please keep up the good work...........
at the moment I'm liking it ,,,,,, we'll see what happens in the future. ..... .........................................................................
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