LazyOtaku33

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2020-05-12 đã tham gia Ascension Island
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LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
28 days ago
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"How scandalous," Darkness moaned under his gaze, even as she pulled the yellow overdress off and the armour attached to it, "A noble knight of chivalry like myself, being forced to strip by such a young boy just because he was lucky to be born strong." yet, despite her words, her eyes heavy with lust met his own and she reached down and in one motion relieved herself of her bodysuit, the only part of her outer war she was still wearing, being her boots and arm bracers.

Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World

Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
1 months ago
Replied to Iron_Rose

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Peter Parker, a 16 years old highschool student. Currently, he was locked up in his small room. The walls in the room were filled with lots of superhero posters. Iron Man, Captain America, Grandpa Universe. They were his idols. He wanted to be like them someday.

Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
1 months ago
Commented

honestly Authur you will always have haters but the story and quality are always on point and the ideas that you have are always fresh so just ignore haters, Haters are gonna hate. However, everything you write is great, and good job on being constant with chapter releases

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LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
2 months ago
Replied to BonVoyage

Like have a main form that is a combination of his other forms ex ears of an elf horns of the Kijin wings of the harpy but have all that in one form just an idea

LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
2 months ago
Commented

I really like the rewrite it fixed a lot of the problems I saw in the first one although can you do something for his main form like it will reflect all his subordinates like you did in the previous one. Anyway awesome story you’re totally killing it 😀

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LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
3 months ago
Commented

I think you should outline things you want the MC to achieve in this story and after that try to work toward that goal like do you want to do what Leon did or take the Rimuru route, there is the multiversal route as well if you like but just going on blindly would create a lot of plot holes that you would need to fix. also, it doesn't need a structured goal and outline. Good Luck!!

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LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
3 months ago
Commented

Portfolio? In medieval Europe? Okay🙃

"No, please, we would like to see your entire portfolio," Willas said.

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague

LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
4 months ago
Commented

this would be an amazing idea I hope you can do it

- Harry Potter - Legacy. Waking up as Harry Potter with the power of his character in the game, Hogwarts Legacy.

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33
4 months ago
Commented

The chapter seems to be in a different language