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i'm at chapter 20 currently... The story has a System tag on it, but up until now i haven't seen a system yet. I'm a little disappointed 😫😫😫
Premises in the beginning were interesting, but it gets more chaotic the further it gets. It starts as a transmigration story of a "eastern style" cultivator going to a "western style" mage world. There were beast pets, beast soul absorption, innate abilities and friends. But the more it progresses the more chaotic it becames. Pets are forgotten (even though they could be made stronger as well), friends became accessories, and "boom" there's cultivation again (with the mc creating dantian and meridians in a world where people don't have it). Plus the mc goes to a academy to learn, but already has all the knowledge, plus the so much plot armor that he doesn't even struggle that much. I'm now almost 500 chapters in, and will probably continue to read it as I'm addicted to knowing the stories' end, but leaving my review so everyone can decide if they want to read it or not.
This story is a good premise with a bad execution. It is in bad need of a proper editor, to flesh out the multitude of run on sentences and redundant repetition. The grammatical errors are rampant throughout the story, making it very difficult to concentrate on the story itself. the “descriptive” facet of the story is just the author calling something “so/very” fast or “so/very” beautiful or “so/very” powerful. This way of describing something is frowned upon because it feels amateurish and is a detriment the the quality of a story. The structure of the chapters are just small ”paragraphs”, which are realistically just one long runon sentence, and this continues throughout the entire story. The characters within the story are basically irrelevant. They fade into the background, never to be seen again. The main character acts in ways that are very much contrary to their supposed past life, in which they were a supreme cultivator. All in all this story is a premise that i dearly wish to see succeed, and perhaps with some editing and revision it can truly be the story works so hard to make.
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I've just gotten. started with this work of art. so I expect it to be amazing. my hope are high, and I hope to continue this beautiful story in the next few days.
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This Novel is, while Not bad, is by far not good. It has Plot-holes and it feels like the World, where MC now lives, is missing a Large Part of common Sense. MC shares his "Secrets" left and right, with no through of that one of them will betray him, and i talk about more than hundred People who easily can ran away and MC wont even notice with so many People. Not to mention that his "Secret" isnt very Special. At leasts i would think that People, who live surrounded by Forest, Plants and Animal know at least some of them, as they live directly around it and have almost nothing other than these things. Laters he meets a Snake, that he does not kill, but makes a Contract. Said Snake turns out to be a Dragon Woman from a mighty Clan, who Heals him when he almost dies and must leave, and MC is heartbroken as his Love of Life leaves, even thought he talkes with her 3 times max and knows her not 1 Month. So my Fazit of the Novel, while it is Readable and the Quality, or at least less plot holes, goes up is it not Novel for me. It is a Novel for these who have really nothing to read and are ok with anything.
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I find the novel to be genuinely pretty dang good. My biggest issue is with the author's grammar and the way in which he uses present perfect and past tense as the same thing. However, in comparison to some other novels, it is not bad. I have not read all the way through as of yet, so I can't make a final judgment though.
Read till chapter 50. MC's supposed to be some wise old dude from his last world with alot of techniques and stuff. He doesn't want people to know his secrets, YET, he tells others that he meets about his secrets and valuable stuff that he has. Bruuh..
It's a great book just a couple of spelling errors but the reason I gave it five stars are because it was very attention grabbing in my opinion it's one of the best books I've read and I've read alot of great books.
just started reading and I'm already hooked. I highly recommend this novel the story is well thought out and planned the mc is just op'd right from the start.
Honestly, I'm quite liking the story and the flow so far. There's a few holes here and there, but most of them get covered up when it's time, which is part of the story progress. My complaint is the grammatical and spelling errors that do pop up often. It's not that bad that it makes it unreadable, just enough to be obvious if you read slowly or re-read. Overall: Pretty interesting read with simple flaws.
Well starting is good plot is interesting But Mc goals r messed up his character is good Talk about relationships Mc meets dragon girl only small interaction love at first sight and he says I am gonna defy Heven and look for u my love wait for me what b. S His power grows rapidly and author says she is an op in this region but appears so pathetic and so many pets idk r they trying to build pet kingdom
I really enjoy the novel it has a certain quality that keeps me entertained. Even though it has a few mistakes with words sometimes its not enough to detract from the novel as a whole. Really the only complaint I have is that there is a chapter missing between chapter 56 and 57 and that I don't really see an explanation from the author about why it's missing even though said person knows about the issue. Nothing to say if it really is a missing chapter or if its just a poorly written transition which could cause the misunderstanding.
I have just started reading it and i dont know about the upcomming chapters, but i think the mc's character development is kind of getting suppressed by the ither companions. Just a personal opinion.
Chapter are very short after some time why ?????????????????????? Chaotic battle +short chapter = we don't understand the plot. The background is good but some time i don't understand some part like the arc when they nuke the forest to do a meat reserve and the girl with the eye something got enlighten that she need to become MC lackey even if she never see him and MC find it normal lol...........................................…..................…….….....…...................................................................................................................
read up to chapters 50, there were some flaws here and there but nothing major and story had a lot of potential except main character thinking which to me does not make sense. he is weak yet expands aggressively by sharing his secrets with any random passerby. this is not an exaggeration, 3 people (absolute strangers) saw him fight in a forest, so they just walked to him and boom he shared his secrets with them and even asked them to invite any of their friends... that's too much for given that he is sharing EVERYTHING and he is weak (it would make sense to create an organization of he could control it or at least have some pyramid setup where not any random joe gets the same goods as the leaders)
Some loopholes here and there but it is okay. Since the story have a lot of points in it. Also loving the story development. The MC also not the stupid type
Review as of chap 50. The story is pretty good with well defined characters. The world however is pretty non existent so far as only a forest and a city is depicted (not very clearly). But the major problem for me is that MC is way too fking stupid. ( I would call him naive but stupid fits better as I'll tell u why). This MC is supposedly hundreds of year old being a genius cultivator in his past life. He frequently puts emphasis on not trusting strangers in their first meeting, acts cautious and what not. BUT BUTT what does he do when not one but 3 STRANGERS ask him about his secrets??? He laughs and spill his beans and the cherry on top promises to gift them as well without even bothering to know them or trying to find their real intentions just like that. all in all a good read with a wannabe mature and cautious MC who has no problem spilling his secrets to strangers
The story was well thoughts, concept of strength and power are well done but I feel like every chapter is a rush, Too many things are happening at once while the plot armor of him having knowledge of strength that arent accessible to others is just pure fantasy since even if he is ahead in terms of knowledge every introduction of new way of gaining power should be a butterfly effect. Can you Imagine 5-10 People with iphones and the rest of the world without them? Delusional, Something Has to Happen, And in no way its Good to either sudes. This feels oddly one sided, extremely so if I may, I also see bo suspense what so ever in the story, I read to chapter 60+ and I dont like I am enjoying it anymore, Since I already know how things will progress, just repeat the prev 60 chapters And paraphrase, Flush, rinse and repeat.
I'm towards chapters 30 at the moment, but i'm a little lost! Reincarnation in the body of another person in another world, the father is happy that his "son" is not dead and the doctor says he must rest. The MC says he weak, but *POF* 5 seconds later in great shape, he go buy a weapon, make companions and go on an adventure without telling anyone, whut?
in my opinion it is predictable and unpredictable. like when you know something will happen but you don't know when. it is amazing in it's own right.
Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
"...strong and ambitious man who will do everything in his power to reach his goal." I expect ruthless MC. Surely he'll be ruthless, right?
Are you sure about the R-18 tag? I read all and still none. It will be nice if you could do a Character Info chapter. It was little confusing sometime but in general it was a good read, waiting for the future chapter :)
Wow! It’s finally over! For almost a year and five months I kept writing in this novel. It seems like a long time but I can feel like I started it yesterday! Thanks to everyone who ever read my novel. Thanks to anyone who wrote any comment, review, and even debated over my novel. And SPECIAL THANKS for anyone who read through all the entire novel and reached this point. Thanks, without your support all this time, I don’t know how I would have accomplished this feat. I faced a lot of hardships thanks to repeated covid attacks, but thanks to readers like you, I managed to survive. So thank you and I hope you like my novel. If you want, feel free to leave a review of what you think about the novel. I’d love to hear all your thoughts about my baby. As for my future projects, there will be two novels branching from this one. The first will be a continuation of Arthur’s journey in the ultimate realm waiting for him. I’ll publish this novel here, continuing after this chapter and will be marked all with Tales 2. As for the second novel, it will be a separate one. It will follow a new tale which will happen ten thousand years after the reform of the universe into the new three realms. This new novel will go by the name: Tales Of The Three Realms. Wait for it, I hope I can publish it in one month's time. So, this is it! I hope you enjoyed the journey so far. And now I deserve a little rest. I’ll resume Arthur’s adventure after taking one week to ten days break. I hope you all stay safe and have a good time. Ranmaro
i'm at chapter 20 currently... The story has a System tag on it, but up until now i haven't seen a system yet. I'm a little disappointed 😫😫😫
Premises in the beginning were interesting, but it gets more chaotic the further it gets. It starts as a transmigration story of a "eastern style" cultivator going to a "western style" mage world. There were beast pets, beast soul absorption, innate abilities and friends. But the more it progresses the more chaotic it becames. Pets are forgotten (even though they could be made stronger as well), friends became accessories, and "boom" there's cultivation again (with the mc creating dantian and meridians in a world where people don't have it). Plus the mc goes to a academy to learn, but already has all the knowledge, plus the so much plot armor that he doesn't even struggle that much. I'm now almost 500 chapters in, and will probably continue to read it as I'm addicted to knowing the stories' end, but leaving my review so everyone can decide if they want to read it or not.
This story is a good premise with a bad execution. It is in bad need of a proper editor, to flesh out the multitude of run on sentences and redundant repetition. The grammatical errors are rampant throughout the story, making it very difficult to concentrate on the story itself. the “descriptive” facet of the story is just the author calling something “so/very” fast or “so/very” beautiful or “so/very” powerful. This way of describing something is frowned upon because it feels amateurish and is a detriment the the quality of a story. The structure of the chapters are just small ”paragraphs”, which are realistically just one long runon sentence, and this continues throughout the entire story. The characters within the story are basically irrelevant. They fade into the background, never to be seen again. The main character acts in ways that are very much contrary to their supposed past life, in which they were a supreme cultivator. All in all this story is a premise that i dearly wish to see succeed, and perhaps with some editing and revision it can truly be the story works so hard to make.
Sorry but I can't read this novel because it is too strange ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff ffffffffff
I've just gotten. started with this work of art. so I expect it to be amazing. my hope are high, and I hope to continue this beautiful story in the next few days.
EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP! EXP!
This Novel is, while Not bad, is by far not good. It has Plot-holes and it feels like the World, where MC now lives, is missing a Large Part of common Sense. MC shares his "Secrets" left and right, with no through of that one of them will betray him, and i talk about more than hundred People who easily can ran away and MC wont even notice with so many People. Not to mention that his "Secret" isnt very Special. At leasts i would think that People, who live surrounded by Forest, Plants and Animal know at least some of them, as they live directly around it and have almost nothing other than these things. Laters he meets a Snake, that he does not kill, but makes a Contract. Said Snake turns out to be a Dragon Woman from a mighty Clan, who Heals him when he almost dies and must leave, and MC is heartbroken as his Love of Life leaves, even thought he talkes with her 3 times max and knows her not 1 Month. So my Fazit of the Novel, while it is Readable and the Quality, or at least less plot holes, goes up is it not Novel for me. It is a Novel for these who have really nothing to read and are ok with anything.
Tiết lộ Spoiler I find the novel to be genuinely pretty dang good. My biggest issue is with the author's grammar and the way in which he uses present perfect and past tense as the same thing. However, in comparison to some other novels, it is not bad. I have not read all the way through as of yet, so I can't make a final judgment though.
Read till chapter 50. MC's supposed to be some wise old dude from his last world with alot of techniques and stuff. He doesn't want people to know his secrets, YET, he tells others that he meets about his secrets and valuable stuff that he has. Bruuh..
It's a great book just a couple of spelling errors but the reason I gave it five stars are because it was very attention grabbing in my opinion it's one of the best books I've read and I've read alot of great books.
just started reading and I'm already hooked. I highly recommend this novel the story is well thought out and planned the mc is just op'd right from the start.
Honestly, I'm quite liking the story and the flow so far. There's a few holes here and there, but most of them get covered up when it's time, which is part of the story progress. My complaint is the grammatical and spelling errors that do pop up often. It's not that bad that it makes it unreadable, just enough to be obvious if you read slowly or re-read. Overall: Pretty interesting read with simple flaws.
Well starting is good plot is interesting But Mc goals r messed up his character is good Talk about relationships Mc meets dragon girl only small interaction love at first sight and he says I am gonna defy Heven and look for u my love wait for me what b. S His power grows rapidly and author says she is an op in this region but appears so pathetic and so many pets idk r they trying to build pet kingdom
I really enjoy the novel it has a certain quality that keeps me entertained. Even though it has a few mistakes with words sometimes its not enough to detract from the novel as a whole. Really the only complaint I have is that there is a chapter missing between chapter 56 and 57 and that I don't really see an explanation from the author about why it's missing even though said person knows about the issue. Nothing to say if it really is a missing chapter or if its just a poorly written transition which could cause the misunderstanding.
I have just started reading it and i dont know about the upcomming chapters, but i think the mc's character development is kind of getting suppressed by the ither companions. Just a personal opinion.
Chapter are very short after some time why ?????????????????????? Chaotic battle +short chapter = we don't understand the plot. The background is good but some time i don't understand some part like the arc when they nuke the forest to do a meat reserve and the girl with the eye something got enlighten that she need to become MC lackey even if she never see him and MC find it normal lol...........................................…..................…….….....…...................................................................................................................
read up to chapters 50, there were some flaws here and there but nothing major and story had a lot of potential except main character thinking which to me does not make sense. he is weak yet expands aggressively by sharing his secrets with any random passerby. this is not an exaggeration, 3 people (absolute strangers) saw him fight in a forest, so they just walked to him and boom he shared his secrets with them and even asked them to invite any of their friends... that's too much for given that he is sharing EVERYTHING and he is weak (it would make sense to create an organization of he could control it or at least have some pyramid setup where not any random joe gets the same goods as the leaders)
Some loopholes here and there but it is okay. Since the story have a lot of points in it. Also loving the story development. The MC also not the stupid type
Review as of chap 50. The story is pretty good with well defined characters. The world however is pretty non existent so far as only a forest and a city is depicted (not very clearly). But the major problem for me is that MC is way too fking stupid. ( I would call him naive but stupid fits better as I'll tell u why). This MC is supposedly hundreds of year old being a genius cultivator in his past life. He frequently puts emphasis on not trusting strangers in their first meeting, acts cautious and what not. BUT BUTT what does he do when not one but 3 STRANGERS ask him about his secrets??? He laughs and spill his beans and the cherry on top promises to gift them as well without even bothering to know them or trying to find their real intentions just like that. all in all a good read with a wannabe mature and cautious MC who has no problem spilling his secrets to strangers
The story was well thoughts, concept of strength and power are well done but I feel like every chapter is a rush, Too many things are happening at once while the plot armor of him having knowledge of strength that arent accessible to others is just pure fantasy since even if he is ahead in terms of knowledge every introduction of new way of gaining power should be a butterfly effect. Can you Imagine 5-10 People with iphones and the rest of the world without them? Delusional, Something Has to Happen, And in no way its Good to either sudes. This feels oddly one sided, extremely so if I may, I also see bo suspense what so ever in the story, I read to chapter 60+ and I dont like I am enjoying it anymore, Since I already know how things will progress, just repeat the prev 60 chapters And paraphrase, Flush, rinse and repeat.
I'm towards chapters 30 at the moment, but i'm a little lost! Reincarnation in the body of another person in another world, the father is happy that his "son" is not dead and the doctor says he must rest. The MC says he weak, but *POF* 5 seconds later in great shape, he go buy a weapon, make companions and go on an adventure without telling anyone, whut?
in my opinion it is predictable and unpredictable. like when you know something will happen but you don't know when. it is amazing in it's own right.
Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
"...strong and ambitious man who will do everything in his power to reach his goal." I expect ruthless MC. Surely he'll be ruthless, right?
Are you sure about the R-18 tag? I read all and still none. It will be nice if you could do a Character Info chapter. It was little confusing sometime but in general it was a good read, waiting for the future chapter :)
Wow! It’s finally over! For almost a year and five months I kept writing in this novel. It seems like a long time but I can feel like I started it yesterday! Thanks to everyone who ever read my novel. Thanks to anyone who wrote any comment, review, and even debated over my novel. And SPECIAL THANKS for anyone who read through all the entire novel and reached this point. Thanks, without your support all this time, I don’t know how I would have accomplished this feat. I faced a lot of hardships thanks to repeated covid attacks, but thanks to readers like you, I managed to survive. So thank you and I hope you like my novel. If you want, feel free to leave a review of what you think about the novel. I’d love to hear all your thoughts about my baby. As for my future projects, there will be two novels branching from this one. The first will be a continuation of Arthur’s journey in the ultimate realm waiting for him. I’ll publish this novel here, continuing after this chapter and will be marked all with Tales 2. As for the second novel, it will be a separate one. It will follow a new tale which will happen ten thousand years after the reform of the universe into the new three realms. This new novel will go by the name: Tales Of The Three Realms. Wait for it, I hope I can publish it in one month's time. So, this is it! I hope you enjoyed the journey so far. And now I deserve a little rest. I’ll resume Arthur’s adventure after taking one week to ten days break. I hope you all stay safe and have a good time. Ranmaro