58Các đánh giá
4.44
- Chất lượng bài viết
- Tính ổn định của các bản cập nhật
- Phát triển câu chuyện
- Thiết kế nhân vật
- Bối cảnh thế giới
Chia sẻ suy nghĩ của bạn với người khác
Viết đánh giá
I will be real with you this is so fxcking boring, the character is so righteous to a point of annoyance, his power is bland not a very good choice to a power, the world build? None its a simply your average bnha fanfic world background, I was willing to give this a chance and I did but you disappointed me. I thought I found a gem but I was wrong.
Author has a thing for fingers. So weird. Most of his powers involves removal of his finger/s. It seems entertaining at first but if you really try to imagine it then, imagine how weird it would seem.
I like this fanfic. The writing quality isn't perfect, it has a few problems here and there, but it's not the worst I've ever seen. The book seems to be dropped so... The story development is really good so far. The character design is fairly good. The world background is also fairly good.
Please updatee, also I would like to see soke forbidden teacher/student relationship inbetween mc and his apprentice hehe. Update author. Bbh
I thoroughly enjoyed the creativity used in this novel. The characters are well written and thought out with a good overall pacing for the story it never feels too slow like it is dragging on or too fast to the point you are re-reading the previous chapters because you have no idea what is going on. All round gud.
Aro you still uploading more? aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
More please, this is amazing. Jebeeuueebeuehebbebsbsbshshshsisjsnsbsbsbsbsbsbsbbsbsbsbssbssbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbshshshhshshshshebevehejehehhhh
More huff hchxlucltzirHdJdHeJrsktakrztkMfzgmzgksktqi5q6odktaotdirTidtkzjraitaue4iRiIrI4aotIrai4aktzjfznznf🙂😞😊✨☺️😊✨😞❤️😊☺️🙂☺️😊✨😁❤️✨☺️❤️☺️😊✨😭😊☺️
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Love it. You have made the ultimate vigilante I would love to see him find a way to maybe take quirk energy from others . I don’t know how you would do that? Maybe when he raids the doctor’s lair in the hospital he takes the equipment with all the quirks drains them somehow? Like a drainage quirk kind of like dementors take souls/emotions in Harry Potter. Thanks for listening Tom my mad ramblings and I’m happy you decided to make this fan fic. Look forward to reading more regardless.
Truly one of the best (if not THE best) MHA novel I've read. Not only is the MC's quirk interesting and somewhat novel, the way he uses it is also very smart imo. Very good read and I anxiously expect more chapters.
gostei................................................................................................................................................
Sério essa fanfic é muito boa, apesar do MC ter uma abilidade muito poderosa o autor vez umas restrições o torna a história mais divertida e uma parte que eu achei muito interessante nela é que o MC se torna um professor kkkkkkkk muito bom
..............................................................................................................................................................................
Tiết lộ Spoiler
One of the best fan fiction about the hero academy on this site. The plot is good, but not without holes, of course, but for the Webnovell site (99% garbage), this can be considered good fan fiction. Up to 30 chapters read with interest, the personality of the main character as a vigilante, well written. The main quirk of the main character is cool, but the choice of further quirks was strange to say the least. The main disadvantage, for me personally, is the personal life of the main character. He was, for 30 chapters, an introverted man who kept the vigilante job on top of his agenda. But suddenly there was a certain girl who turns out to be a GENIUS! Instead of waving at her and going about his business, the main character for some reason decided to take her as an apprentice. Especially it looks naive, in the background where the main character calculates all his moves in advance. After a couple of chapters, this calculating guy just decided to reveal his identity to this girl. What is generally irrational, I would even say the stupidest act. I frankly did not like how the author added a new character to the story and put it in the main role. The main character began to experience love feelings for her, after whole separate chapters devoted exclusively to this girl. Throwing the main character into the background. I don't like this development of my own, I don't like it. Too crookedly added character, I'm not interested in reading about her.
The successor of 'Kakashi the copy ninja '. Dude power is basically same as a uchia copying jutsus .Good idea but too op for me . But still nice .
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Please make more this is so good like not gonna lie this is the best I've read for the last week I've been looking for something to read so thank u for making this.And please make more.
Loving this fanfic, keep up the great work. It's well thought out with a great mc. I love how the lord of the world is seamlessly woven into the story .
Okay first off first chapter she literally right infront of the kid said what his quirk number level or whatever is RIGHT MEXT TO HIM TO THE DOCTOR then he goes off and basically repeated it and she said to herself 'I never told him that how tf did he figure that out' it's dumb it needs fixed please also grammar needs work sometimes you've got useless words that could be put better or placed in the wrong spot which has thrown me off like 8 times already, it's really good technically if it's like a second language but you should have someone or yourself proof read it and make corrections if you seem then or ask people to point them out for you so you can go over them like I just did. it seems promising, but the grammar needs work as I said and more thought out into what's happening at that second.
I’ve been wanting to read this for quite some time and I’m glad I got around to it. This is a really nice book. Great job author. MC makes his quirks (that are a little creepy by the way) so useful together. Well done!
Tiết lộ Spoiler
This is one of the best 'My Hero Academia ' fanfiction..... I like how the originality of the story is maintained without diverging too much from canon.. please write more and increase chapter frequency.. .
I just woke up, so i don't really have the brain to write this review, however i can say: it good. Mc op but he trained a lot for it, his quirks weak and useless alone but together they combo and are very useful and op. The love interest being steadily developed and author made mc go an interesting and unique path, vigilante and teacher at U.A. Only complain is update rate.
thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
I like this book, but I stopped reading due to a difference in opinion. The MC hates endeavor for no apparent reason. Sure Endeavor is a bit self centered, but if you read the manga, you'll know the guy has a massive inferiroity complex when it comes to All MIght. He is not a good guy but neither is he a bad guy. He has saved countless people, and did not deserve his faith in this book. He never physically abused his son or wife, they just couldn't handle the mental strain. His wife especially is neither wrong or right. Also, I have yet to see a fanfic of MHA that does not follow plot. I have read so many and was hoping for something different. The MC quirk is too overpowered, rather, it is so underpowered for its level of potential. Fanfic authors make grave mistakes when they give countless abilities. One ability and master it to the apex. Overall, the book is a good read but nothing you haven't read a million times before.
I mean its decent but the mc is a bit too righteous it was a good concept but i think it wouldve been cool if u had him as a villain and go deeper into the villain side of things in mha but thats just my opinion...😄👍
thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
The story comes off as if you’re reading a diary that occasionally has some dialogue thrown in. It doesn’t feel like a story is what I’m trying to say. There’s no character interaction or development. Every time the MC gives himself a new quirk I’m just like “why?” There’s no point. He keeps getting multiple new quirks every chapter and it stopped being interesting a few chapters in.
MORE. Thanks For Bab ...................................................................................................................................................................................................
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Tiết lộ Spoiler I will be real with you this is so fxcking boring, the character is so righteous to a point of annoyance, his power is bland not a very good choice to a power, the world build? None its a simply your average bnha fanfic world background, I was willing to give this a chance and I did but you disappointed me. I thought I found a gem but I was wrong.
Author has a thing for fingers. So weird. Most of his powers involves removal of his finger/s. It seems entertaining at first but if you really try to imagine it then, imagine how weird it would seem.
I like this fanfic. The writing quality isn't perfect, it has a few problems here and there, but it's not the worst I've ever seen. The book seems to be dropped so... The story development is really good so far. The character design is fairly good. The world background is also fairly good.
Please updatee, also I would like to see soke forbidden teacher/student relationship inbetween mc and his apprentice hehe. Update author. Bbh
I thoroughly enjoyed the creativity used in this novel. The characters are well written and thought out with a good overall pacing for the story it never feels too slow like it is dragging on or too fast to the point you are re-reading the previous chapters because you have no idea what is going on. All round gud.
Aro you still uploading more? aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
More please, this is amazing. Jebeeuueebeuehebbebsbsbshshshsisjsnsbsbsbsbsbsbsbbsbsbsbssbssbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbshshshhshshshshebevehejehehhhh
More huff hchxlucltzirHdJdHeJrsktakrztkMfzgmzgksktqi5q6odktaotdirTidtkzjraitaue4iRiIrI4aotIrai4aktzjfznznf🙂😞😊✨☺️😊✨😞❤️😊☺️🙂☺️😊✨😁❤️✨☺️❤️☺️😊✨😭😊☺️
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Love it. You have made the ultimate vigilante I would love to see him find a way to maybe take quirk energy from others . I don’t know how you would do that? Maybe when he raids the doctor’s lair in the hospital he takes the equipment with all the quirks drains them somehow? Like a drainage quirk kind of like dementors take souls/emotions in Harry Potter. Thanks for listening Tom my mad ramblings and I’m happy you decided to make this fan fic. Look forward to reading more regardless.
Truly one of the best (if not THE best) MHA novel I've read. Not only is the MC's quirk interesting and somewhat novel, the way he uses it is also very smart imo. Very good read and I anxiously expect more chapters.
gostei................................................................................................................................................
Sério essa fanfic é muito boa, apesar do MC ter uma abilidade muito poderosa o autor vez umas restrições o torna a história mais divertida e uma parte que eu achei muito interessante nela é que o MC se torna um professor kkkkkkkk muito bom
..............................................................................................................................................................................
Tiết lộ Spoiler One of the best fan fiction about the hero academy on this site. The plot is good, but not without holes, of course, but for the Webnovell site (99% garbage), this can be considered good fan fiction. Up to 30 chapters read with interest, the personality of the main character as a vigilante, well written. The main quirk of the main character is cool, but the choice of further quirks was strange to say the least. The main disadvantage, for me personally, is the personal life of the main character. He was, for 30 chapters, an introverted man who kept the vigilante job on top of his agenda. But suddenly there was a certain girl who turns out to be a GENIUS! Instead of waving at her and going about his business, the main character for some reason decided to take her as an apprentice. Especially it looks naive, in the background where the main character calculates all his moves in advance. After a couple of chapters, this calculating guy just decided to reveal his identity to this girl. What is generally irrational, I would even say the stupidest act. I frankly did not like how the author added a new character to the story and put it in the main role. The main character began to experience love feelings for her, after whole separate chapters devoted exclusively to this girl. Throwing the main character into the background. I don't like this development of my own, I don't like it. Too crookedly added character, I'm not interested in reading about her.
The successor of 'Kakashi the copy ninja '. Dude power is basically same as a uchia copying jutsus .Good idea but too op for me . But still nice .
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tiết lộ Spoiler Please make more this is so good like not gonna lie this is the best I've read for the last week I've been looking for something to read so thank u for making this.And please make more.
Loving this fanfic, keep up the great work. It's well thought out with a great mc. I love how the lord of the world is seamlessly woven into the story .
Okay first off first chapter she literally right infront of the kid said what his quirk number level or whatever is RIGHT MEXT TO HIM TO THE DOCTOR then he goes off and basically repeated it and she said to herself 'I never told him that how tf did he figure that out' it's dumb it needs fixed please also grammar needs work sometimes you've got useless words that could be put better or placed in the wrong spot which has thrown me off like 8 times already, it's really good technically if it's like a second language but you should have someone or yourself proof read it and make corrections if you seem then or ask people to point them out for you so you can go over them like I just did. it seems promising, but the grammar needs work as I said and more thought out into what's happening at that second.
I’ve been wanting to read this for quite some time and I’m glad I got around to it. This is a really nice book. Great job author. MC makes his quirks (that are a little creepy by the way) so useful together. Well done!
Tiết lộ Spoiler This is one of the best 'My Hero Academia ' fanfiction..... I like how the originality of the story is maintained without diverging too much from canon.. please write more and increase chapter frequency.. .
I just woke up, so i don't really have the brain to write this review, however i can say: it good. Mc op but he trained a lot for it, his quirks weak and useless alone but together they combo and are very useful and op. The love interest being steadily developed and author made mc go an interesting and unique path, vigilante and teacher at U.A. Only complain is update rate.
thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
I like this book, but I stopped reading due to a difference in opinion. The MC hates endeavor for no apparent reason. Sure Endeavor is a bit self centered, but if you read the manga, you'll know the guy has a massive inferiroity complex when it comes to All MIght. He is not a good guy but neither is he a bad guy. He has saved countless people, and did not deserve his faith in this book. He never physically abused his son or wife, they just couldn't handle the mental strain. His wife especially is neither wrong or right. Also, I have yet to see a fanfic of MHA that does not follow plot. I have read so many and was hoping for something different. The MC quirk is too overpowered, rather, it is so underpowered for its level of potential. Fanfic authors make grave mistakes when they give countless abilities. One ability and master it to the apex. Overall, the book is a good read but nothing you haven't read a million times before.
I mean its decent but the mc is a bit too righteous it was a good concept but i think it wouldve been cool if u had him as a villain and go deeper into the villain side of things in mha but thats just my opinion...😄👍
thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
The story comes off as if you’re reading a diary that occasionally has some dialogue thrown in. It doesn’t feel like a story is what I’m trying to say. There’s no character interaction or development. Every time the MC gives himself a new quirk I’m just like “why?” There’s no point. He keeps getting multiple new quirks every chapter and it stopped being interesting a few chapters in.
MORE. Thanks For Bab ...................................................................................................................................................................................................
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Tiết lộ Spoiler