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Its cool, despite mc overly good personality, i like it cuz his doing things better than most hero.... And there are some heroes on MHA that have questionable reason s on being one.. the story has been great so far so please continue doing what ur doing....
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MC can have almost every quirk he wants. He chooses to shoot exploding fingers that he can regrow. The Idea of the story was nice but got ruined by stupidity.
"Years ago, when I was backpacking across Western Europe, I was just outside Barcelona, hiking in the foothills of mount Tibidabo. I was at the end of this path, and I came to a clearing, and there was a lake, very secluded, and there were tall trees all around. It was dead silent. Gorgeous. And across the lake I saw, a beautiful woman, bathing herself. but she was crying... I hesitated, watching, struck by her beauty. And also by how her presence; the delicate curve of her back, the dark sweep of her hair, the graceful length of her limbs, even her tears, added to the majesty of my surroundings. I felt my own tears burning behind my eyes, not in sympathy, but in appreciation of such a perfect moment. She spied me before I could compose myself. But she didn't cry out. Instead our eyes held and she smiled, enigmatically, fresh tears still spilling down her cheeks. I was frozen. I knew nothing about this woman, and yet, as we stood on opposite sides of a pool of water, thousands of miles from my own home and everyone I had ever known, I felt the most intense connection. Not just to her, but to the earth, the sky, the water between us. And also to the entirety of mankind. As if she symbolized thousands of years of the human condition. I wanted to go to her, to comfort her, to probe this feeling of belonging I had never encountered before. But I couldn't. Because I knew that if I spoke, if she spoke, that moment would be ruined. And I knew I would need the memory of that moment to carry me through the inevitable dark patches throughout my life. And so I watched her lower her hand, turn, and slowly walk to the shore opposite me. The rest of her perfect form was gradually revealed to me, and I held my breath as I watched her disappear behind a copse of trees near the water. I didn't follow her, in fact I turned around. I knew there was nothing else we could experience together that would be more perfect than that moment...and it still remains the most profound experience of my life"
This has been so far the best MHA fanfiction for me. MC not some optimistic fool. Willing to work outside the law. And more importantly NOT a student. This brings a complete new outlook to the story as we get to see events from a different POV. I am looking forward to reading more of this. so keep up the good work.
Alright I'm gonna be honest. I read the few first chapters and let me tell you, the writing was terribly done. It was constantly switching between POVs. It was 'he did something' and then immediately followed by 'I did something'. After skipping a few chapters I can say that I'm glad you improved it. The story is much more enjoyable now. If you consider it, edit the few first chapters.
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It's a very good fanfiction to read and it don't heavily influenced by the plot line .......... ..............................................
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I will be real with you this is so fxcking boring, the character is so righteous to a point of annoyance, his power is bland not a very good choice to a power, the world build? None its a simply your average bnha fanfic world background, I was willing to give this a chance and I did but you disappointed me. I thought I found a gem but I was wrong.
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Fantástica esta novela la recomiendo 100% espero de todo corazón que la disfruten y esperen como lo hago yo cada día que se actualiza el autor es lo máximo, poder publicar cada dia si quiera un episodio es fabuloso......🤩🤩😎
This is one of the best My Hero fanfics I’ve seen. Keep it up Author! I really hope you continue to work hard on this series!
As described by the tags. No ROB or Morgan Freeman celestial, technically has a bare bones system that makes sense given the universe, Batman beyond nostalgia but without Grand Papi Bruce and I think thats a WIP, and finally regular author interactions with us in the comments. Bakugo may or may not be a violent potato and Nezu may or may not sleep in a jumbo Hello Kitty cat bed with a Puka and Garo stuffed toy set. I enjoy the story a lot even if my ADHD goes nuts from time to time. I digress a lot.
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Obligatory 5 stars author review! I’ll post 7 chaps/week maybe more if I’m in a good mood. I really think that my novels synopsis is ****, so if anyone has better ideas I’m open for them. Also, before saying his quirk choice is sh*t, please read to at least chapter twelve, the quirks aren’t meant to be strong individually, so that they’re less expensive. If you got any ideas, suggestions, insults of something you want to say to me, feel free to comment on this review and I’ll do my best to answer you.
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Yes I have always thought about this quirk but never had the courage to wright about it keep it up 😁😁😁😁👍👍👍
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Its cool, despite mc overly good personality, i like it cuz his doing things better than most hero.... And there are some heroes on MHA that have questionable reason s on being one.. the story has been great so far so please continue doing what ur doing....
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MC can have almost every quirk he wants. He chooses to shoot exploding fingers that he can regrow. The Idea of the story was nice but got ruined by stupidity.
"Years ago, when I was backpacking across Western Europe, I was just outside Barcelona, hiking in the foothills of mount Tibidabo. I was at the end of this path, and I came to a clearing, and there was a lake, very secluded, and there were tall trees all around. It was dead silent. Gorgeous. And across the lake I saw, a beautiful woman, bathing herself. but she was crying... I hesitated, watching, struck by her beauty. And also by how her presence; the delicate curve of her back, the dark sweep of her hair, the graceful length of her limbs, even her tears, added to the majesty of my surroundings. I felt my own tears burning behind my eyes, not in sympathy, but in appreciation of such a perfect moment. She spied me before I could compose myself. But she didn't cry out. Instead our eyes held and she smiled, enigmatically, fresh tears still spilling down her cheeks. I was frozen. I knew nothing about this woman, and yet, as we stood on opposite sides of a pool of water, thousands of miles from my own home and everyone I had ever known, I felt the most intense connection. Not just to her, but to the earth, the sky, the water between us. And also to the entirety of mankind. As if she symbolized thousands of years of the human condition. I wanted to go to her, to comfort her, to probe this feeling of belonging I had never encountered before. But I couldn't. Because I knew that if I spoke, if she spoke, that moment would be ruined. And I knew I would need the memory of that moment to carry me through the inevitable dark patches throughout my life. And so I watched her lower her hand, turn, and slowly walk to the shore opposite me. The rest of her perfect form was gradually revealed to me, and I held my breath as I watched her disappear behind a copse of trees near the water. I didn't follow her, in fact I turned around. I knew there was nothing else we could experience together that would be more perfect than that moment...and it still remains the most profound experience of my life"
This has been so far the best MHA fanfiction for me. MC not some optimistic fool. Willing to work outside the law. And more importantly NOT a student. This brings a complete new outlook to the story as we get to see events from a different POV. I am looking forward to reading more of this. so keep up the good work.
Alright I'm gonna be honest. I read the few first chapters and let me tell you, the writing was terribly done. It was constantly switching between POVs. It was 'he did something' and then immediately followed by 'I did something'. After skipping a few chapters I can say that I'm glad you improved it. The story is much more enjoyable now. If you consider it, edit the few first chapters.
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It's a very good fanfiction to read and it don't heavily influenced by the plot line .......... ..............................................
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I will be real with you this is so fxcking boring, the character is so righteous to a point of annoyance, his power is bland not a very good choice to a power, the world build? None its a simply your average bnha fanfic world background, I was willing to give this a chance and I did but you disappointed me. I thought I found a gem but I was wrong.
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Fantástica esta novela la recomiendo 100% espero de todo corazón que la disfruten y esperen como lo hago yo cada día que se actualiza el autor es lo máximo, poder publicar cada dia si quiera un episodio es fabuloso......🤩🤩😎
This is one of the best My Hero fanfics I’ve seen. Keep it up Author! I really hope you continue to work hard on this series!
As described by the tags. No ROB or Morgan Freeman celestial, technically has a bare bones system that makes sense given the universe, Batman beyond nostalgia but without Grand Papi Bruce and I think thats a WIP, and finally regular author interactions with us in the comments. Bakugo may or may not be a violent potato and Nezu may or may not sleep in a jumbo Hello Kitty cat bed with a Puka and Garo stuffed toy set. I enjoy the story a lot even if my ADHD goes nuts from time to time. I digress a lot.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Obligatory 5 stars author review! I’ll post 7 chaps/week maybe more if I’m in a good mood. I really think that my novels synopsis is ****, so if anyone has better ideas I’m open for them. Also, before saying his quirk choice is sh*t, please read to at least chapter twelve, the quirks aren’t meant to be strong individually, so that they’re less expensive. If you got any ideas, suggestions, insults of something you want to say to me, feel free to comment on this review and I’ll do my best to answer you.
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Yes I have always thought about this quirk but never had the courage to wright about it keep it up 😁😁😁😁👍👍👍
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