Simon?
Out of the fourteen Battle Master class bandit heads, Simon had already killed half of them out. What's more all of them were either Six Star Battle Master or Seven, they provided ample experience for his growth.
The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect
Eastern · ViciousPepper
it seems there's a typo in this paragraph
"Well, I know what to do," Reaves concluded, his decision crystallizing in the recesses of his thoughts. "I will keep watching t Selina's eyes flared with anger at the woman's audacious remark. he Russell family for now before choosing whether to draw them in or alienate them." His gaze lingered on the now-empty doorway, the weight of uncertainty settling over the lavish hall.
Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic
Fantasy · Taosnothing
before it was 2 minutes right ?
Bruce checked his watch. Ten more minutes.
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
more chapters please
first of all,I'm no expert.this is just my opinion as a reader.author you are doing a good job writing the scene.but you are dragging this scene across multiple chapters.your description of the situation paints a vivid picture.but i think you should add some sounds as well.like moaning sounds or something.because after a while just readers will lose interest in it.
can you add more details in the character list?atleast add affiliations. It's hard to keep track.and maybe something like a relationship status at least?ex. lover, friend, enemy, etc.
if this is the way the story will keep going, then the author should put the ntr tag.
where's the MC?
please pay more attention to the punctuation marks. if you don't then Readers might lose interest even if the story is good.
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original HP fanfic : It Could Only Happen to Harry
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After defeating Voldemort in his final year, Harry requires a rare ritual to save his life. Luckily, he has friends who are willing to help him. THIS STORY WAS COPY PASTED Author(s) : HoosYourDaddy Story is available on https://archiveofourown.org/9 Chs 61 sưu tầm
this story is awesome!!!!!!
Harry Potter: Ero World
Book&Literature · light_novel_addict