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es una buena historia, simple y entretenida, aunque al principio puede parecer super op después te das cuenta que es parte de la historia y se te pasa, aunque no tiene lemon la imaginación hace su trabajo y aunque el desarrollo de personaje es algo vago es aceptable, buena obra¡¡¡
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This is a cognitohazard, it was okay at the start, a little cheesy, but it was fine, around where MC fights Tiamat it all goes down hill, the writing and grammar is good at least
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I really enjoy It. also it had A really good time line and nothing felt rushed. I kinda Wish It was rewritten without the system in the start of the story.
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Great short read. It was an enjoyable twist on the legendary dxd. There were minor plot holes, but overall would recommend. I don't know how to compare it to the other more recent novels that were made, but yeah it was good. (I hate filling letter count)
What should i say i Read after the completion of the story it was really good if you dont misscount some grammar mistakes but overall it was great wish the system was still here tho but whatever
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This novel is real good the only thing bad about it that the god screwed him over by giving him a ahitty system also, MC doesn't use his powers from.the start is a bad point too , quite a few other fan fics have showed that many things can go wrong because of that but anyway a good read i don't know why this novel has low ratings it is free, its complete and the Author is not so shitty in attitude towards his/her readers which many other authors do.
Can someone spoil me who the current or latest harem members are? And I hope whoever does that is someone who is up-to-date with the story...
when you use sharingan as a wish I already hate this fan fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Sinceramente, fue bastante decepcionante, sobre todo porque al principio fue increíble pero todo se fue al carajo cuando empezó con las relaciones con los personajes, y no solo eso sino que su MC supuestamente casi invencible, se vuelve de peluche en las peleas importantes... enserió es realmente frustrante que pintes a un MC como invencible y en las batallas más importantes casi no hace nada y si hace algo pondrá una excusa de que salen otras personas a salvar a los enemigos o que logran escapar milagrosamente.... E leído otras obras de este autor y fueron muy buenas, pero sinceramente este no me gustó, al menos a mi.
Currently at chapter 26, the story is so-so but could have been worse, the grammar is bad but at least it isn't trash tier. Considering it's the author's first time writing I would say he did ok, but he seriously underestimates the reader's intelligence.
I like this story.......Teasing on vali were my favorite......thank you author. . . .... . ... ... .. .. ..... ... .. ... .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .... .. . .. .... .. .. ... .. ...
Great app but I don’t know what to expect to get the Money to buy the game for a while but it has a lot of money and it is worth the price and I
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at first, the story seemed to be an interesting idea however the author forgot many details, first things instant mastery that was mentioned once or twice never again a completely useless waste of a wish, then the system was deleted when all he had to do was help her get out of a marriage he could've left the peerage right after helping her out, then the mc hating on issei but then helping him get rias, overall the story was meh with some okay mixed in
In the same place and time as the one I have is a phone number for the weekend and I will be attending the interview on Monday at the latest and gr hits safest place
This fanfic had some good things but it was absolute garbage. But the biggest problem is the anti-Rias situation in the whole fanfic. Using this fanfic, you're portrayed Rias as a self serving bitch in the series which she isn't at all. You include literally every girl is utbtere including shitty ones and nobodys into MC's harem bit didn't include literally the main female protagonist and heroine of the actual series. You matched Rias with Issei and then made Vali ntr Issei by taking Rias, to downgrade Issei. From the very beginning you have used this series to stablish an Anti-Issei and Anti-Rias campaign which is absolutely disgusting, especially Issei. If you don't like Issei that's your problem, why do you have to make a literal smear campaign on him? You are a disgusting person and your famifcs are trash because they serve your self serving agenda. You don't deserve to write a Highschool DxD fanfic and neither do you deerve to be a part of it's fan community considering the fact that you literally hate the main male and female protagonists as well as the main hero and heroine of the story.
it was all good some parts contact used a little work character some character could use more work than others I think you got to go to all the world
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can i know how is in the harem pls ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?
Can we please, please stop with writing OP MC, if you people are just going to contrive a reason of weakness because the MC became too powerful. It's like reading a horror story while the author keeps complaining about what he's writing scares him. -_- If you want an MC facing challenges then STOP making OP MC!!! Make him a normal fucking dude in the middle of war.
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in my opinion who never followed highschool dxd but just know about it, this is a good fanfic. at least the author already knows how to finish this novel and there is no dimensional shift.
es una buena historia, simple y entretenida, aunque al principio puede parecer super op después te das cuenta que es parte de la historia y se te pasa, aunque no tiene lemon la imaginación hace su trabajo y aunque el desarrollo de personaje es algo vago es aceptable, buena obra¡¡¡
Tiết lộ Spoiler This is a cognitohazard, it was okay at the start, a little cheesy, but it was fine, around where MC fights Tiamat it all goes down hill, the writing and grammar is good at least
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Tiết lộ Spoiler I really enjoy It. also it had A really good time line and nothing felt rushed. I kinda Wish It was rewritten without the system in the start of the story.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Great short read. It was an enjoyable twist on the legendary dxd. There were minor plot holes, but overall would recommend. I don't know how to compare it to the other more recent novels that were made, but yeah it was good. (I hate filling letter count)
What should i say i Read after the completion of the story it was really good if you dont misscount some grammar mistakes but overall it was great wish the system was still here tho but whatever
Tiết lộ Spoiler This novel is real good the only thing bad about it that the god screwed him over by giving him a ahitty system also, MC doesn't use his powers from.the start is a bad point too , quite a few other fan fics have showed that many things can go wrong because of that but anyway a good read i don't know why this novel has low ratings it is free, its complete and the Author is not so shitty in attitude towards his/her readers which many other authors do.
Can someone spoil me who the current or latest harem members are? And I hope whoever does that is someone who is up-to-date with the story...
when you use sharingan as a wish I already hate this fan fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
nice.............................................................................................................................................................
Sinceramente, fue bastante decepcionante, sobre todo porque al principio fue increíble pero todo se fue al carajo cuando empezó con las relaciones con los personajes, y no solo eso sino que su MC supuestamente casi invencible, se vuelve de peluche en las peleas importantes... enserió es realmente frustrante que pintes a un MC como invencible y en las batallas más importantes casi no hace nada y si hace algo pondrá una excusa de que salen otras personas a salvar a los enemigos o que logran escapar milagrosamente.... E leído otras obras de este autor y fueron muy buenas, pero sinceramente este no me gustó, al menos a mi.
Currently at chapter 26, the story is so-so but could have been worse, the grammar is bad but at least it isn't trash tier. Considering it's the author's first time writing I would say he did ok, but he seriously underestimates the reader's intelligence.
I like this story.......Teasing on vali were my favorite......thank you author. . . .... . ... ... .. .. ..... ... .. ... .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .... .. . .. .... .. .. ... .. ...
Great app but I don’t know what to expect to get the Money to buy the game for a while but it has a lot of money and it is worth the price and I
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at first, the story seemed to be an interesting idea however the author forgot many details, first things instant mastery that was mentioned once or twice never again a completely useless waste of a wish, then the system was deleted when all he had to do was help her get out of a marriage he could've left the peerage right after helping her out, then the mc hating on issei but then helping him get rias, overall the story was meh with some okay mixed in
In the same place and time as the one I have is a phone number for the weekend and I will be attending the interview on Monday at the latest and gr hits safest place
This fanfic had some good things but it was absolute garbage. But the biggest problem is the anti-Rias situation in the whole fanfic. Using this fanfic, you're portrayed Rias as a self serving bitch in the series which she isn't at all. You include literally every girl is utbtere including shitty ones and nobodys into MC's harem bit didn't include literally the main female protagonist and heroine of the actual series. You matched Rias with Issei and then made Vali ntr Issei by taking Rias, to downgrade Issei. From the very beginning you have used this series to stablish an Anti-Issei and Anti-Rias campaign which is absolutely disgusting, especially Issei. If you don't like Issei that's your problem, why do you have to make a literal smear campaign on him? You are a disgusting person and your famifcs are trash because they serve your self serving agenda. You don't deserve to write a Highschool DxD fanfic and neither do you deerve to be a part of it's fan community considering the fact that you literally hate the main male and female protagonists as well as the main hero and heroine of the story.
it was all good some parts contact used a little work character some character could use more work than others I think you got to go to all the world
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can i know how is in the harem pls ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?
Can we please, please stop with writing OP MC, if you people are just going to contrive a reason of weakness because the MC became too powerful. It's like reading a horror story while the author keeps complaining about what he's writing scares him. -_- If you want an MC facing challenges then STOP making OP MC!!! Make him a normal fucking dude in the middle of war.
Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....Xp....
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in my opinion who never followed highschool dxd but just know about it, this is a good fanfic. at least the author already knows how to finish this novel and there is no dimensional shift.