Yeah, the typical akikan MC. Author keeps forgetting the MC's template and keeps changing it throughout his stories.
Instead of being completed, it's most likely been abandoned by the original author.
There's a difference in a slow paced story vs an indecisive MC. This MC's character is all over the place. No, it's more appropriate to say he's an ultimate coward. He can spout BS inspiring lines but his actions are contradictory. He wants a lazy peaceful life but keeps attracting trouble to himself. If he wanted a lazy peaceful life he would have ran away and lived in the middle of nowhere. Just make up your damn mind MC. Pussyfooting all over the place is simply annoying.
Woot hiding chapters of fanfic in a paywall? Sounds like the copyright lawyers have something to go after to after all. Cease and desist!!!
This story has been big words after another that held no meaning for a couple of arcs now. Story arcs that seem to keep getting recycled. This story seemed to be getting milked for whatever it is worth and is now going nowhere. Ever since the arc with the chronos guy, I seem to be reading a glossary instead of a story. *GASP* There's a bigger enemy out there? Like, are you for real?
Plotholes so abundant you don't know where the plot is. Author keeps having to forced feed villains against the MC. Powerful people that somehow can recruit millions of people while MC retains only a thousand. Introduced a powerful trillionaire ally that treat him as a brother but somehow ended up as a middling side character. Overall an author that makes up stuff out of the air to fit his own narrative. An author that has no respect for his own creation. For people to give this a 5 star is a statement to the current level of the worlds literature.
Now the story makes less sense. So someone powerful can recruit 10 million grunts but the great and merciless ethan can't. Does that mean he's just a poor bloke? What a poor dumb MC, can't even have a sub guild that has millions of people. So that the story doesn't have to force itself keeping the MC group always outnumbered, hence the author bullishly making his way through to "balance" things out.
He went through travelling not thinking on how to save the princess instead thought of it on the spot? This is the inconsistencies in writing that kills many stories. The MC suddenly not thinking ahead of a plan hence being discovered by the AI. While the author is drumming his fingers thinking of his well made "plot". When in actuality he just forced his MC to act out of character to make the "plot" possible.
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As expected of akikan, interesting start then its all downhill from here.
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