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The Primarch of Liberty
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In an alternate timeline of Warhammer 30k, the Emperor of Mankind discovers the Independence Cluster, a group of technologically advanced worlds that have preserved Dark Age of Technology knowledge. Here, He encounters His first found Primarch, Franklin Valorian, known as the Symbol of Liberty.
The charismatic and humorous Valorian, standing 15 feet tall, meets the Emperor with a mix of curiosity and irreverence. Unlike others, Valorian sees the Emperor as a powerful but regular man with a greater purpose, akin to a superhero.
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More Warhammer is always appreciated. Now how in sweet baby liberty are you gonna pull this off
America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh...America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh...America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh......
Freedom and democracy are strong in this one. Just please don‘t drop it, I‘m begging you.
Asmodai!" "INTERROGATE?!" "Our assumptions are confirmed!" "WHAT" "He has written a suspicious book!" "BOOK" "He's in cahoots with the Fallen!" "FALLEN" "Make him repent!" "Repeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnttttttt
Overall not a bad fanfic for how it is written but the number of libertys it takes borders between gary sue and shameless how right everything goes for the mc, but for all this it is still well written I just wouldn't recommend it to anyone that cares about natural development or consistency with the canon version. I am not going to keep reading but I don't regret reading the first 18 chapter this just is not my cup of tea.
Yeah, I know it's not the most accurate towards the Warhammer lore but this is good, I like it, good job author, though you just need 30 more years to fully learn about Warhammer lore
A Gary Sue done right, while others may dislike this fanfiction for it's obvious power scaling and almost lack of struggle, understand that if you look at this fanfiction as an extension of the canon then you've come to the wrong place. This fanfic is not the dark grim future of 40k, but a humourous take on what 30k can entail. It doesn't follow the typical themes of tragedy and horror. It has it's moment and if you're willing to see it through take a chance to read it. It can be slightly awkward at times but It's 4.8/5 in my book.
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The second amandment is strong with this one .........................................................................................................................................
All the awesome characters like the emperor were sent to sit on the golden toilet, and the others couldn't be cooler. This is no joke. People like the emperor are the ones who hold the template of the protagonist. In terms of power and strength, the psychic power is so strong that it can extinguish the stars, and the four gods have to work together to deal with him. In terms of strategy, hang and beat all kinds of aliens, blast all warlords, and complete the great cause of unification. In terms of ideology, he has been a magician, worked on socialism, and later personally carried out the God-killing movement. In terms of achievements, unifying mankind, establishing the Astropaths, and laying the foundation of the empire for thousands of years, it was only a little bit short of completing the ultimate concept of the ascension of the whole people. To be honest, Guilliman has never seen such a powerful protagonist in that game.
Nicely done!! A perfect fanfic!! The story is nice, the pace is perfect for this type of fanfic and most importantly the characters felt alive. Fully recommended!
The problem of this story is that the author doesn't know the source material. He doesn't know that there was no inquisition in the 30 millennium. That's not all but the most glaring one. Basically, he knows a bit about Warhammer 40k and tries to write a story about 30k without knowing that 30k pre heresy and 40k are vastly different.