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Overall, it's a good fic. i have a few problems with it, however. 1- Very clearly using ChatGTP to increase word count, which is really frustrating. i just feel like it's an info dump of fluff on every single chapter. 2- I have no idea what's going on in the story. there is no overarching story that's being played out (that i can tell). every single chapter is something completely new, meaning in one chapter he could be in the Warp, and the next he's finding another one of his Primarch brothers with the Emperor. My constructive criticisms would be this. stop using ChatGPT to increase the word count (3000 word chapters would give just as much info as 6000 or more chapters) and start having the story flow in one direction. It's really scattered right now, and it's frustrating to have to skip all the fluff.
Warhammer 40k is a grimdark universe where very little happy stories, it's okay on comedy but somewhat predictable.
Absolutely great story. The starting chapters are rough with simple sentence structure, repeating themes and bland storytelling. But hot damn does it pick up, I’m talking full on comeback season. The author actually brings their writing up to par, has characters have actual personalities and relationships and blends together the chaotic world that is warhammer into something fluid and enjoyable. By far is this the best warhammer fic I’ve read
the story is absolutely amazing the devlopment of the characters is amazing the interaction between them is amazing though my only criticism is how much even the small things are exaggerated
Essa é de longe a melhor história que já li neste site/app. A construção dos personagens, a progressão da história, a forma como ela prende o leitor é algo de nível máximo em termos de qualidade. Gosto da forma como tudo evoluiu, do ritmo, de tudo. É muito inteligente pegar o XI primarca e dar uma personalidade e tudo mais a ele, isso poderia facilmente se tornar cânon. Enfim, autor, sou seu fã e espero que continue essa história por mais 247 capítulos. Se puder entrar na história de 40k em algum momento pra ajudar aquele universo quase perdido, irei achar intrigante.
I really enjoy this fan fic and its direction, Helps me get thru my working day, yes the beginning with the Inquisition was probably an oversight but still a smudge on a pretty good fic is forgivable unlike Erebus
Writing quality - beats 99% of other Warhammer fics while the remaining 0.99% are either too short and the last 0.01% belongs to die-hard fans that write stuff like The Long Night (40k quest) Stability - since I started reading, the author has released chapters daily with few expectations that are either crucial personal life events or when he wants to release a few heavily interdependent chapters together. Story development - What not to like? he flips the grimdark universe on his knees and spanks Chaos ass Character design - Primarch tf2 engineer = party + liberaty + more gun = our mc World background - there is a galactic-sized dick picture formed by a dark age of tech galaxy wide logistic network
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Great book. I was wondering if it was possible that could try and pick up and continue a fanfic called Necron in the Multiverse.
this is the one fanfiction of every story that can be even better then original story
this shit had me crying no cap you don't see stories this good nowadays
All I have to say is wow, just wow, I think this in my top 5 stories, maybe top 3, and I’ve read thousands, AND I MEAN THOUSANDS, of books, and this one takes the cake, I very, VERY rarely see an OC insert so good, along with an author who actually gives a shit about the lore? AMAZING, S+++ tier book, simply fantastic
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fist I world like to say this is not a masterpiece because let's be real nothing is but I got to say Shiro-Cuz I am really impressed at what you have made among heaps of straight gar-boge I found something readable is at least what I thought at first bust the further i red, the more you carves out these characters I found myself transfixed by the story I would go in depth but you should just give a solid 50 you will love it the only thing I'm disappointed in is there are no ogren tin buddies.
The best Warhammer 40k I've read so far, There's nothing I can comment on because I can only enjoy what the author makes. Thank you for making this warhammer 40k fanfic.🔥🔥🔥🔥
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this is the best Warhammer fanfic that I have read and the most impressive aspect is that everything that happens does have a reason it happens and the author uses the more free aspect of the warp and other abilities to enrich the world building
Overall it's a good story One of the flaws is that the author doesn't know the warhammer lore that well so author sometimes makes a mistake the biggest one is probably inquisition existing in 30k I haven't seen any major plotholes The first 9 chapters were annoying and boring to read but after that it got better The story is funny and some of it moments made me genuinely laugh I 'm giving it 5 stars because more warhammer content is always good and it's a high quality for a warhammer fic
Eh I like it well enough, I'm not a warhammer aficionado so I won't really talk about the timeline inconsistencies wich I know little of but even I noticed some. But no; my problem with this is the overuse of jokes every dammed chapter its never ending every time Franklin is involved there is always a stupid joke doesn't matter the circumstance there's a stupid joke or quip.
This is not the Warhammer 40000 we wanted but we actually wanted. Plenty of humour and war crimes
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This is a legitimately great read, there is little to no grammar or sentence structure issues, and contains a lot of worthwhile content. The writing quality is superb, the author updates quite often and consistently, and the story and character development are quite in-depth. The world or should I say liberty development is quite deep and still touches along many of the actual 30K/40K plotlines with a touch of added primarch humor. And sweet liberty does it tell a good story! Hope to see this story continued because Franklin still has much humor to spread to the rest of his brothers in arms.
one of the best Warhammer 40k fanfiction ive ever read. great story creation and build up
It's honestly... Perfect. need i say more? It's everything I've ever wanted in a warhammer 40k fanfic, and more. Perfect, i tell you.
absolutely a great story. I would recommend this story to be share on online so people can enjoy this story right here.
Overall, it's a good fic. i have a few problems with it, however. 1- Very clearly using ChatGTP to increase word count, which is really frustrating. i just feel like it's an info dump of fluff on every single chapter. 2- I have no idea what's going on in the story. there is no overarching story that's being played out (that i can tell). every single chapter is something completely new, meaning in one chapter he could be in the Warp, and the next he's finding another one of his Primarch brothers with the Emperor. My constructive criticisms would be this. stop using ChatGPT to increase the word count (3000 word chapters would give just as much info as 6000 or more chapters) and start having the story flow in one direction. It's really scattered right now, and it's frustrating to have to skip all the fluff.
Warhammer 40k is a grimdark universe where very little happy stories, it's okay on comedy but somewhat predictable.
Absolutely great story. The starting chapters are rough with simple sentence structure, repeating themes and bland storytelling. But hot damn does it pick up, I’m talking full on comeback season. The author actually brings their writing up to par, has characters have actual personalities and relationships and blends together the chaotic world that is warhammer into something fluid and enjoyable. By far is this the best warhammer fic I’ve read
the story is absolutely amazing the devlopment of the characters is amazing the interaction between them is amazing though my only criticism is how much even the small things are exaggerated
Essa é de longe a melhor história que já li neste site/app. A construção dos personagens, a progressão da história, a forma como ela prende o leitor é algo de nível máximo em termos de qualidade. Gosto da forma como tudo evoluiu, do ritmo, de tudo. É muito inteligente pegar o XI primarca e dar uma personalidade e tudo mais a ele, isso poderia facilmente se tornar cânon. Enfim, autor, sou seu fã e espero que continue essa história por mais 247 capítulos. Se puder entrar na história de 40k em algum momento pra ajudar aquele universo quase perdido, irei achar intrigante.
I really enjoy this fan fic and its direction, Helps me get thru my working day, yes the beginning with the Inquisition was probably an oversight but still a smudge on a pretty good fic is forgivable unlike Erebus
Writing quality - beats 99% of other Warhammer fics while the remaining 0.99% are either too short and the last 0.01% belongs to die-hard fans that write stuff like The Long Night (40k quest) Stability - since I started reading, the author has released chapters daily with few expectations that are either crucial personal life events or when he wants to release a few heavily interdependent chapters together. Story development - What not to like? he flips the grimdark universe on his knees and spanks Chaos ass Character design - Primarch tf2 engineer = party + liberaty + more gun = our mc World background - there is a galactic-sized dick picture formed by a dark age of tech galaxy wide logistic network
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Great book. I was wondering if it was possible that could try and pick up and continue a fanfic called Necron in the Multiverse.
this is the one fanfiction of every story that can be even better then original story
this shit had me crying no cap you don't see stories this good nowadays
All I have to say is wow, just wow, I think this in my top 5 stories, maybe top 3, and I’ve read thousands, AND I MEAN THOUSANDS, of books, and this one takes the cake, I very, VERY rarely see an OC insert so good, along with an author who actually gives a shit about the lore? AMAZING, S+++ tier book, simply fantastic
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
fist I world like to say this is not a masterpiece because let's be real nothing is but I got to say Shiro-Cuz I am really impressed at what you have made among heaps of straight gar-boge I found something readable is at least what I thought at first bust the further i red, the more you carves out these characters I found myself transfixed by the story I would go in depth but you should just give a solid 50 you will love it the only thing I'm disappointed in is there are no ogren tin buddies.
The best Warhammer 40k I've read so far, There's nothing I can comment on because I can only enjoy what the author makes. Thank you for making this warhammer 40k fanfic.🔥🔥🔥🔥
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ this is the best Warhammer fanfic that I have read and the most impressive aspect is that everything that happens does have a reason it happens and the author uses the more free aspect of the warp and other abilities to enrich the world building
Overall it's a good story One of the flaws is that the author doesn't know the warhammer lore that well so author sometimes makes a mistake the biggest one is probably inquisition existing in 30k I haven't seen any major plotholes The first 9 chapters were annoying and boring to read but after that it got better The story is funny and some of it moments made me genuinely laugh I 'm giving it 5 stars because more warhammer content is always good and it's a high quality for a warhammer fic
Eh I like it well enough, I'm not a warhammer aficionado so I won't really talk about the timeline inconsistencies wich I know little of but even I noticed some. But no; my problem with this is the overuse of jokes every dammed chapter its never ending every time Franklin is involved there is always a stupid joke doesn't matter the circumstance there's a stupid joke or quip.
This is not the Warhammer 40000 we wanted but we actually wanted. Plenty of humour and war crimes
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This is a legitimately great read, there is little to no grammar or sentence structure issues, and contains a lot of worthwhile content. The writing quality is superb, the author updates quite often and consistently, and the story and character development are quite in-depth. The world or should I say liberty development is quite deep and still touches along many of the actual 30K/40K plotlines with a touch of added primarch humor. And sweet liberty does it tell a good story! Hope to see this story continued because Franklin still has much humor to spread to the rest of his brothers in arms.
one of the best Warhammer 40k fanfiction ive ever read. great story creation and build up
It's honestly... Perfect. need i say more? It's everything I've ever wanted in a warhammer 40k fanfic, and more. Perfect, i tell you.
absolutely a great story. I would recommend this story to be share on online so people can enjoy this story right here.