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It has such a good story but you HAD to go and make a time skip to the 41st millennium don't you. YOU HAD TO. i was enjoying the story so much until the time skip happened. disappointing truly, such a gem but alas shit hit it
This book is a masterpiece in my eyes it is just so good and It leave me begging for the next chapter as soon as I finish the most recent chapter. Thank you for this beautiful piece of art.
Overall: good start and the story could have been something good (if you are not that deep into Warhammer lore) but AI WRITING destroys it all for me. First ~10 Chapter. the writing is fine. ~10 - 35 Chapter. Some of the AI writing is seeping through but its still bearable since it fits with the style of WH lingo ~35 - 43 I'm dropping this as of Chapter 43. AI is being used for word count and its blatend, I just read "The Eagle and the Gorgon" and almost had a stroke because the same 6 sentences repeated 7 or 8 times with different wordings. Was a good run we had good reading for all of you who will keep reading.
Absolutely great novel, lately it's been system this system that, but the author captures the readers with how grim the world is while still making it halarious. Can't wait for more chapters
I have quite a lot of experience with AI and either the writer has a very similar writing style or is using AI to write it for them. Not pointing fingers but there is a big similarity and I would like it if the writer could clarify who is writing it. I would be very thankful.
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Love it exactly what i was looking for thanks man looking forward to more
Thoroughly entertaining. Love the development of the characters and how they interact in this universe.
It's a good novel but the author minimized the danger of Chaos And the lore of warhammer 30k and 40k in general.
Yeah, I know it's not the most accurate towards the Warhammer lore but this is good, I like it, good job author, though you just need 30 more years to fully learn about Warhammer lore
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A Gary Sue done right, while others may dislike this fanfiction for it's obvious power scaling and almost lack of struggle, understand that if you look at this fanfiction as an extension of the canon then you've come to the wrong place. This fanfic is not the dark grim future of 40k, but a humourous take on what 30k can entail. It doesn't follow the typical themes of tragedy and horror. It has it's moment and if you're willing to see it through take a chance to read it. It can be slightly awkward at times but It's 4.8/5 in my book.
Absolutely brilliant always wanted to read a fan fic of a primarch of such high quality. The Emperor Bless you.
[img=Feeling it] I really liked this novel! there is something special about it, the plot is interesting, the main characters are alive and they are developing, and most importantly, they are finally developing technologies!! and showed a true mechanic!! they are real morons...
It's great to pass time though somewhat of a crackfic sometimes, it overall good
The second amandment is strong with this one .........................................................................................................................................
The problem of this story is that the author doesn't know the source material. He doesn't know that there was no inquisition in the 30 millennium. That's not all but the most glaring one. Basically, he knows a bit about Warhammer 40k and tries to write a story about 30k without knowing that 30k pre heresy and 40k are vastly different.
All the awesome characters like the emperor were sent to sit on the golden toilet, and the others couldn't be cooler. This is no joke. People like the emperor are the ones who hold the template of the protagonist. In terms of power and strength, the psychic power is so strong that it can extinguish the stars, and the four gods have to work together to deal with him. In terms of strategy, hang and beat all kinds of aliens, blast all warlords, and complete the great cause of unification. In terms of ideology, he has been a magician, worked on socialism, and later personally carried out the God-killing movement. In terms of achievements, unifying mankind, establishing the Astropaths, and laying the foundation of the empire for thousands of years, it was only a little bit short of completing the ultimate concept of the ascension of the whole people. To be honest, Guilliman has never seen such a powerful protagonist in that game.
40k fanfics are rare and non Chinese ones are even rarer. I am loving this to death. FOR MANAGED DEMOCRACY
It has such a good story but you HAD to go and make a time skip to the 41st millennium don't you. YOU HAD TO. i was enjoying the story so much until the time skip happened. disappointing truly, such a gem but alas shit hit it
This book is a masterpiece in my eyes it is just so good and It leave me begging for the next chapter as soon as I finish the most recent chapter. Thank you for this beautiful piece of art.
Overall: good start and the story could have been something good (if you are not that deep into Warhammer lore) but AI WRITING destroys it all for me. First ~10 Chapter. the writing is fine. ~10 - 35 Chapter. Some of the AI writing is seeping through but its still bearable since it fits with the style of WH lingo ~35 - 43 I'm dropping this as of Chapter 43. AI is being used for word count and its blatend, I just read "The Eagle and the Gorgon" and almost had a stroke because the same 6 sentences repeated 7 or 8 times with different wordings. Was a good run we had good reading for all of you who will keep reading.
Absolutely great novel, lately it's been system this system that, but the author captures the readers with how grim the world is while still making it halarious. Can't wait for more chapters
I have quite a lot of experience with AI and either the writer has a very similar writing style or is using AI to write it for them. Not pointing fingers but there is a big similarity and I would like it if the writer could clarify who is writing it. I would be very thankful.
Great warhammer 30k novel and also primarchs novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Love it exactly what i was looking for thanks man looking forward to more
Thoroughly entertaining. Love the development of the characters and how they interact in this universe.
It's a good novel but the author minimized the danger of Chaos And the lore of warhammer 30k and 40k in general.
Yeah, I know it's not the most accurate towards the Warhammer lore but this is good, I like it, good job author, though you just need 30 more years to fully learn about Warhammer lore
We need more warhammer things like that [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙❤️💛💙❤️💛💙💜❤️🧡💛💙❤️💛💙💜❤️🧡💛💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💜🧡💚💜❤️💛💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💜❤️🧡💛💙❤️💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💚
A Gary Sue done right, while others may dislike this fanfiction for it's obvious power scaling and almost lack of struggle, understand that if you look at this fanfiction as an extension of the canon then you've come to the wrong place. This fanfic is not the dark grim future of 40k, but a humourous take on what 30k can entail. It doesn't follow the typical themes of tragedy and horror. It has it's moment and if you're willing to see it through take a chance to read it. It can be slightly awkward at times but It's 4.8/5 in my book.
Absolutely brilliant always wanted to read a fan fic of a primarch of such high quality. The Emperor Bless you.
[img=Feeling it] I really liked this novel! there is something special about it, the plot is interesting, the main characters are alive and they are developing, and most importantly, they are finally developing technologies!! and showed a true mechanic!! they are real morons...
It's great to pass time though somewhat of a crackfic sometimes, it overall good
The second amandment is strong with this one .........................................................................................................................................
The problem of this story is that the author doesn't know the source material. He doesn't know that there was no inquisition in the 30 millennium. That's not all but the most glaring one. Basically, he knows a bit about Warhammer 40k and tries to write a story about 30k without knowing that 30k pre heresy and 40k are vastly different.
All the awesome characters like the emperor were sent to sit on the golden toilet, and the others couldn't be cooler. This is no joke. People like the emperor are the ones who hold the template of the protagonist. In terms of power and strength, the psychic power is so strong that it can extinguish the stars, and the four gods have to work together to deal with him. In terms of strategy, hang and beat all kinds of aliens, blast all warlords, and complete the great cause of unification. In terms of ideology, he has been a magician, worked on socialism, and later personally carried out the God-killing movement. In terms of achievements, unifying mankind, establishing the Astropaths, and laying the foundation of the empire for thousands of years, it was only a little bit short of completing the ultimate concept of the ascension of the whole people. To be honest, Guilliman has never seen such a powerful protagonist in that game.
40k fanfics are rare and non Chinese ones are even rarer. I am loving this to death. FOR MANAGED DEMOCRACY
the best WH40K fic ive read so far,,,,,,,,,,,