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# MAGE # BLIND
Fang Ping was blind. By chance, he transmigrated to another world. Upon his arrival, he was ambushed by a ferocious beast. Fortunately for him, he was rescued by a woman. After being saved, he discovered that this world also used English. However, to his surprise, the denizens of this world had proficiency below that of a kindergartener from his world. Yet alone say an entire sentence, they even fumbled about pronouncing single words.
Coincidentally, he awakened the Master Teacher System. In order to repay them for saving his life, he decided to stay and teach them English.
He began by teaching them to recognize the alphabet and then phonetics and finally began to teach them vocabulary.
However, Fang Ping was unaware that his students were abnormal. They were the famous night elves, and the person who had saved him was the next queen of the night elves clan. She was the daughter of the current queen.
The English that he was teaching was the vocabulary of this world’s magic spells. Hence, the weak night elves began mastering magic spells and their forces grew powerful once again.
Five years later, Fang Ping opened his eyes.
He looked at the people of all races kneeling before him. It was as though a whole country had come to the royal court. There were giants, dwarfs, fox demons etc. Beside him, the sexy, stunning queen of the night elves was looking at him with a worshiping gaze. Fang Ping finally realized that he had taught them some incredible things.
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I can bet that originally the language of magic was definitely Mandarin. The translator changed it to English to attract more international readers.
You had me there, till you said "Sexy Stunning" So I'm guessing it might be harem? I don't know what to expect but I also wish the other Blind novel mentioned in these trials would be here as well. Just to compare.
Really bad. Good interesting concept but the execution is less than lackluster. It's actually amazing how disappointing this was. Not recommended.
underlying premise of the MC's system [Every time you teach an apprentice, you will gain 1 teaching value.], it takes 999 value to restore his eyesight, skip ahead 4 years and he still needs 50 value to restore his eyesight when he is teaching multiple people on an almost daily basis. System(author) can't even keep proper track of his points so I'm not even going to try and continue reading this
Good concept, but the story is all over the place. Contradictory settings, the characters change their decisions from one paragraph to the other without reason or logic, the MC and the FL don't really communicate with each other. Temporal line is a mess, spacial details are nonexistent. Spoilers ahead. When MC arrives to the elven territory, a barren land where nothing grows, there is a famine ongoing and they are in the brink of death. A couple of years later there are forests, food surplus, and it seems the elves are ready to conquer the world. There are no males but there are children. Less than a thousand. So, how is it? The dialogues are ridiculous. The concept behind magic is ignored and goes unexplained. And this is just the start. I guess the early chapters need to engage the readers fast, but everything here is just sloppy.
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Was there not a book basically the same just with Cultivation and demon beasts
When I read the language he was speaking was English it rang warning bells of over westernization.
I read novels with similar concept, but this is definitely one of the best copy (Atleast on the first 20 chap). The MC is interesting and the POV too, it's more on the surrounding than the MC himself (characters have decent exposure not entirely focus to MC) which is good for background building, we can clearly see what's happening around. Definitely a kingdom building.
(Read till chapter 65) I picked this novel up because I'm interested in blind MCs and the synopsis was very intriguing. The story was developing well till chapter 55 but after that there seem to be many chapters missing. There is an obvious time-lapse and unintroduced people, skills and situations pop up. Even the MC had some very plot relevant improvements. I was completely lost in the story without knowing further details. It was really unfortunate because the development seemed interesting. Besides this big flaw there isn't much more to say about the novel. The plot is intriguing but it's not particularly well written. Albeit not bad, there is room for improvement on pacing, details and information and also a bit of grammar problems (tho that could be caused by translation). There are also some big loopholes in when the MC finds out about transmigrating and getting his eye sight back. The world background was unclear as well. It's a fantasy world with magic powers and different races but there were contradicting informations about how developed the different races were. Also I would have loved more information about how the forbidden spells (English) were cast because it was possible to just talk in this languages without having an effect. Unfortunately the potential of the plot wasn't used so I don't recommend you to read further than the pay wall. But the biggest point for not recommending the story is the big missing chunk.
they use English but can't pronounce words let alone sentences. is the author thinking before they write it is it just the typical write yeah someone will read it
It has an interesting premise but i consider it really unrealistic even for fantasy novels and the numbers sre pretty wacky, it has a good world backstory so i liked that but it squeezes each point too much and kinda that i skipped a few chapters and didn't lose anything major
Pretty good. Definitely above average for trial reads. I wish the MC had a larger speaking aand action role during the first 19 chapters, but the kingdom building and scheming aspects of the story were quite satisfying.
worst book i ever read. i don't know how people can keep Reading this nonsense. the world building and story progression quite good. but the character in the story really make me think the author write this when he drunk. 1. MC suddenly acceptance about multiples race, without any clue. he is blind. .. . and nobody tell him. suddenly knowing and just accept like it normal 2. MC suddenly understood english is forbiden spell in later chapter. but no clue why and when the MC know about this 3.MC always saw all the student as child then suddenly knowing the student actually dark elves while he still blind. again with no clue when, where, why and the story progressed like the MC already know for a long time. 4. author wrote there is only 3 forbidden spellcaster in the world. suddenly in later chapter it become unknown number and a lot. 5. finally the last and the reason i rant here : one forbidden spellcaster that die in early chapter suddenly alive . and thats the reason for me to write this coment and delete this book from my library. the author dont bother to check the world setting he wrote. don't bother to check the character. i like the story and where it gonna go, but i really cannot stomach so many things happen like above
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hey just letting you know you go from leaving the forest to the town and he apart of a mage academy. what happened it makes no sense.
After persevering through the first 65 chapters of this novel, I ultimately had to give up. Up until that point, the story had been a rollercoaster of confusion, filled with too many gaps in information and an onslaught of new characters who seemed to materialize out of thin air, leaving the reader without a proper introduction or context. The novel began on a promising note, drawing readers in with a captivating start. However, the sudden and inexplicable time jump, plot gaps, or perhaps even entire chapters missing, marred the reading experience. This abrupt shift in storytelling disrupted the narrative flow, making it challenging to follow the plot and the character developments. While I was disheartened by these issues, if the novel improves significantly towards the end, please do let me know. Despite my frustrations, I'm still hopeful that the story might redeem itself in later chapters. A strong conclusion could potentially salvage the reading experience, and I'd be willing to reconsider my initial assessment.
Always women with these stupid disciple stories. Men can be disciples too for God's sake.