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I think this is an interesting story with an interesting concept. I do like the trope of a master filled with misunderstandings, but in this case the guy can’t even help it. He’s blind and helpless, even though if he knew it, he could probably make nukes everywhere if he had any idea of his surroundings. There’s just one major problem that tickles me down. In the very first few chapters, there is a time skip of 4 years. The synopsis says he restores his vision in 5 years. The point is that the author skipped a long period of time to the point where it is practically the apex of the story, but without the development, and even then it seems the author didn’t notice that so much could happen in such. In the end, there is a place where we see too little of how it was before and jump straight to when it’s already changed because of the protagonist, which kinda of defeats the whole idea (if I am right about the idea). But still, this just means it needs to be fleshed up and explored more, but it is an interesting premise with a glaring issue.
Pros: Decent and interesting fantasy world delves into a magic system that vast majority of world knows about but can’t use. Focuses on a small cast of characters that is slowly expanded upon. Cons: Poor translation with pronouns and plurals constistent throughout, easy fixes that have been ignored makes it confusing at times to attempt to read. MC is somehow completely oblivious throughout even when it’s obvious to the point it’s annoying and makes dumb decisions with his shop system. System not expanded or explained well. Magic wielding elf’s stomp all non magic opponents with ease no sense of damager.
One of the worst thing I have ever read , even when mc knows he has transmigrated he still thinks that there are big companies for moon bell to work in he knows she is drk elf so he should know he is in fantasy world and it's frustrating how story is written in a fast paced manner
After persevering through the first 65 chapters of this novel, I ultimately had to give up. Up until that point, the story had been a rollercoaster of confusion, filled with too many gaps in information and an onslaught of new characters who seemed to materialize out of thin air, leaving the reader without a proper introduction or context. The novel began on a promising note, drawing readers in with a captivating start. However, the sudden and inexplicable time jump, plot gaps, or perhaps even entire chapters missing, marred the reading experience. This abrupt shift in storytelling disrupted the narrative flow, making it challenging to follow the plot and the character developments. While I was disheartened by these issues, if the novel improves significantly towards the end, please do let me know. Despite my frustrations, I'm still hopeful that the story might redeem itself in later chapters. A strong conclusion could potentially salvage the reading experience, and I'd be willing to reconsider my initial assessment.
HAHAHAHHA they couldn't buff the MC's IQ so they nerfed everyone else's instead 🤣
What really disappointed me is that they never explained execution of magic and how they worked. All we know is that English is magic and stronger the caster stronger spell. We have no idea of the incantation or if every sentence is magic. It's was a easy and interesting mechanism to explore. The fls makes fireflies that burn on impact, acid rain, illusions, etc and how they work or the incantation are unknown. I mean even some of the trashiest novel have better explained magic than this novel.
The first arc is good where he is blind because the story development is concise and good but after he cured his eye it felt like the story is been force to continue.. This is also many missing plot... Im sorry if I offended some reader here but I dont think its my liking which looks like the plot is force in the story it felt like putting huge amount salt in your coffee, it doesn't suit at all even a little !
was rather interesting up until he got his sight, then he just ups and dips and starts running around as a student of an academy with a bunch of random people breaking the authors own world lore when it comes to casters. the ending also explains nothing, somehow he gets back to the queen and they live happily ever after, even though he pretty much abandoned her and her people to go not actually teach but help the humans and do their bidding.....
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Honestly, I like the story premise, the character but the loopholes in the plot is too big for me to close one eye. I will usually imagine stuff to fill in the blank but this.. is too trashy. I will like to give 5 star for idea and as for how it progresses its 2.5. In conclusion, 2 star.
While promising and interesting there is quite a bit of time skips across the chapters that break the flow. It's a mess... unless fixed, don't bother wasting your tickets and coins on this one.
If English is the language they use for magic, what would happen if they were taught other languages? Like, maybe say... Latin? a language regularly associated with magic. Would the spells be strengthen at the cost of learning a harder language (and costing more), or something else?
worst book i ever read. i don't know how people can keep Reading this nonsense. the world building and story progression quite good. but the character in the story really make me think the author write this when he drunk. 1. MC suddenly acceptance about multiples race, without any clue. he is blind. .. . and nobody tell him. suddenly knowing and just accept like it normal 2. MC suddenly understood english is forbiden spell in later chapter. but no clue why and when the MC know about this 3.MC always saw all the student as child then suddenly knowing the student actually dark elves while he still blind. again with no clue when, where, why and the story progressed like the MC already know for a long time. 4. author wrote there is only 3 forbidden spellcaster in the world. suddenly in later chapter it become unknown number and a lot. 5. finally the last and the reason i rant here : one forbidden spellcaster that die in early chapter suddenly alive . and thats the reason for me to write this coment and delete this book from my library. the author dont bother to check the world setting he wrote. don't bother to check the character. i like the story and where it gonna go, but i really cannot stomach so many things happen like above
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Interesting concept but the translation is terrible, run on sentences that leave you confused and male and female he and she keep getting mixed up and largely sentences that just don’ work in English very well. If someone could just fine tooth comb the writing to clean up the translation errors it would be a lot better.
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don't bother after chapter 40. the quality of the translation gets too horrible around when you start paying. also the lack of detail in what is being taught to the dark elves is such a missed opportunity. it was done ONCE in the first 50 chapters. afterwards it assumes that the elves simply channel the magic and don't recite english words for spells. it's trash writing. I also don't like how the theme of "dark elf population loss" is forwarding the idea of using ethnic cleansing as "revenge".
It was acceptable until somewhere in the 50s it started talking about an Academy and people like we should know. Chapters were missing or super bad writing at that point. So I stopped reading.
interested with this because the synopsis just the bad point from my experience with this -fatal grammar error (wrong gender {as you expect it's MTL}) -weird idea from MC, make half-elf for continuing and bring more "elf", but at the same time implement "blood purity privilege" -so many(?) hole in plot -maybe more?, idk
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(Read till chapter 65) I picked this novel up because I'm interested in blind MCs and the synopsis was very intriguing. The story was developing well till chapter 55 but after that there seem to be many chapters missing. There is an obvious time-lapse and unintroduced people, skills and situations pop up. Even the MC had some very plot relevant improvements. I was completely lost in the story without knowing further details. It was really unfortunate because the development seemed interesting. Besides this big flaw there isn't much more to say about the novel. The plot is intriguing but it's not particularly well written. Albeit not bad, there is room for improvement on pacing, details and information and also a bit of grammar problems (tho that could be caused by translation). There are also some big loopholes in when the MC finds out about transmigrating and getting his eye sight back. The world background was unclear as well. It's a fantasy world with magic powers and different races but there were contradicting informations about how developed the different races were. Also I would have loved more information about how the forbidden spells (English) were cast because it was possible to just talk in this languages without having an effect. Unfortunately the potential of the plot wasn't used so I don't recommend you to read further than the pay wall. But the biggest point for not recommending the story is the big missing chunk.
hey just letting you know you go from leaving the forest to the town and he apart of a mage academy. what happened it makes no sense.
ok some god decide english a forbidden language and the mc teach a bunch of kid that with a system out of nowhere this is not a good novel and why all his students are girl there should be boy and if you want to relax with student tags you could have better novel in webnovel
Teacher - Disciples 🤦🤦🤦 I can't help it but to shake my head. Those novels I've read so far makes me wanna kick the MC's face.🙈😂😂 OP Master = OP Disciples Abnormal Master = Abnormal Disciples Braggart Master = Braggart Disciples Puttui. Here we go again. I think my brain was damaged just thinking the future. 😭😂🤔
it was okay until chapter 56 where it looks like author wrote a new book and said let's start here
I think this is an interesting story with an interesting concept. I do like the trope of a master filled with misunderstandings, but in this case the guy can’t even help it. He’s blind and helpless, even though if he knew it, he could probably make nukes everywhere if he had any idea of his surroundings. There’s just one major problem that tickles me down. In the very first few chapters, there is a time skip of 4 years. The synopsis says he restores his vision in 5 years. The point is that the author skipped a long period of time to the point where it is practically the apex of the story, but without the development, and even then it seems the author didn’t notice that so much could happen in such. In the end, there is a place where we see too little of how it was before and jump straight to when it’s already changed because of the protagonist, which kinda of defeats the whole idea (if I am right about the idea). But still, this just means it needs to be fleshed up and explored more, but it is an interesting premise with a glaring issue.
Pros: Decent and interesting fantasy world delves into a magic system that vast majority of world knows about but can’t use. Focuses on a small cast of characters that is slowly expanded upon. Cons: Poor translation with pronouns and plurals constistent throughout, easy fixes that have been ignored makes it confusing at times to attempt to read. MC is somehow completely oblivious throughout even when it’s obvious to the point it’s annoying and makes dumb decisions with his shop system. System not expanded or explained well. Magic wielding elf’s stomp all non magic opponents with ease no sense of damager.
One of the worst thing I have ever read , even when mc knows he has transmigrated he still thinks that there are big companies for moon bell to work in he knows she is drk elf so he should know he is in fantasy world and it's frustrating how story is written in a fast paced manner
After persevering through the first 65 chapters of this novel, I ultimately had to give up. Up until that point, the story had been a rollercoaster of confusion, filled with too many gaps in information and an onslaught of new characters who seemed to materialize out of thin air, leaving the reader without a proper introduction or context. The novel began on a promising note, drawing readers in with a captivating start. However, the sudden and inexplicable time jump, plot gaps, or perhaps even entire chapters missing, marred the reading experience. This abrupt shift in storytelling disrupted the narrative flow, making it challenging to follow the plot and the character developments. While I was disheartened by these issues, if the novel improves significantly towards the end, please do let me know. Despite my frustrations, I'm still hopeful that the story might redeem itself in later chapters. A strong conclusion could potentially salvage the reading experience, and I'd be willing to reconsider my initial assessment.
HAHAHAHHA they couldn't buff the MC's IQ so they nerfed everyone else's instead 🤣
What really disappointed me is that they never explained execution of magic and how they worked. All we know is that English is magic and stronger the caster stronger spell. We have no idea of the incantation or if every sentence is magic. It's was a easy and interesting mechanism to explore. The fls makes fireflies that burn on impact, acid rain, illusions, etc and how they work or the incantation are unknown. I mean even some of the trashiest novel have better explained magic than this novel.
The first arc is good where he is blind because the story development is concise and good but after he cured his eye it felt like the story is been force to continue.. This is also many missing plot... Im sorry if I offended some reader here but I dont think its my liking which looks like the plot is force in the story it felt like putting huge amount salt in your coffee, it doesn't suit at all even a little !
was rather interesting up until he got his sight, then he just ups and dips and starts running around as a student of an academy with a bunch of random people breaking the authors own world lore when it comes to casters. the ending also explains nothing, somehow he gets back to the queen and they live happily ever after, even though he pretty much abandoned her and her people to go not actually teach but help the humans and do their bidding.....
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Honestly, I like the story premise, the character but the loopholes in the plot is too big for me to close one eye. I will usually imagine stuff to fill in the blank but this.. is too trashy. I will like to give 5 star for idea and as for how it progresses its 2.5. In conclusion, 2 star.
While promising and interesting there is quite a bit of time skips across the chapters that break the flow. It's a mess... unless fixed, don't bother wasting your tickets and coins on this one.
If English is the language they use for magic, what would happen if they were taught other languages? Like, maybe say... Latin? a language regularly associated with magic. Would the spells be strengthen at the cost of learning a harder language (and costing more), or something else?
worst book i ever read. i don't know how people can keep Reading this nonsense. the world building and story progression quite good. but the character in the story really make me think the author write this when he drunk. 1. MC suddenly acceptance about multiples race, without any clue. he is blind. .. . and nobody tell him. suddenly knowing and just accept like it normal 2. MC suddenly understood english is forbiden spell in later chapter. but no clue why and when the MC know about this 3.MC always saw all the student as child then suddenly knowing the student actually dark elves while he still blind. again with no clue when, where, why and the story progressed like the MC already know for a long time. 4. author wrote there is only 3 forbidden spellcaster in the world. suddenly in later chapter it become unknown number and a lot. 5. finally the last and the reason i rant here : one forbidden spellcaster that die in early chapter suddenly alive . and thats the reason for me to write this coment and delete this book from my library. the author dont bother to check the world setting he wrote. don't bother to check the character. i like the story and where it gonna go, but i really cannot stomach so many things happen like above
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Interesting concept but the translation is terrible, run on sentences that leave you confused and male and female he and she keep getting mixed up and largely sentences that just don’ work in English very well. If someone could just fine tooth comb the writing to clean up the translation errors it would be a lot better.
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don't bother after chapter 40. the quality of the translation gets too horrible around when you start paying. also the lack of detail in what is being taught to the dark elves is such a missed opportunity. it was done ONCE in the first 50 chapters. afterwards it assumes that the elves simply channel the magic and don't recite english words for spells. it's trash writing. I also don't like how the theme of "dark elf population loss" is forwarding the idea of using ethnic cleansing as "revenge".
It was acceptable until somewhere in the 50s it started talking about an Academy and people like we should know. Chapters were missing or super bad writing at that point. So I stopped reading.
interested with this because the synopsis just the bad point from my experience with this -fatal grammar error (wrong gender {as you expect it's MTL}) -weird idea from MC, make half-elf for continuing and bring more "elf", but at the same time implement "blood purity privilege" -so many(?) hole in plot -maybe more?, idk
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(Read till chapter 65) I picked this novel up because I'm interested in blind MCs and the synopsis was very intriguing. The story was developing well till chapter 55 but after that there seem to be many chapters missing. There is an obvious time-lapse and unintroduced people, skills and situations pop up. Even the MC had some very plot relevant improvements. I was completely lost in the story without knowing further details. It was really unfortunate because the development seemed interesting. Besides this big flaw there isn't much more to say about the novel. The plot is intriguing but it's not particularly well written. Albeit not bad, there is room for improvement on pacing, details and information and also a bit of grammar problems (tho that could be caused by translation). There are also some big loopholes in when the MC finds out about transmigrating and getting his eye sight back. The world background was unclear as well. It's a fantasy world with magic powers and different races but there were contradicting informations about how developed the different races were. Also I would have loved more information about how the forbidden spells (English) were cast because it was possible to just talk in this languages without having an effect. Unfortunately the potential of the plot wasn't used so I don't recommend you to read further than the pay wall. But the biggest point for not recommending the story is the big missing chunk.
hey just letting you know you go from leaving the forest to the town and he apart of a mage academy. what happened it makes no sense.
ok some god decide english a forbidden language and the mc teach a bunch of kid that with a system out of nowhere this is not a good novel and why all his students are girl there should be boy and if you want to relax with student tags you could have better novel in webnovel
Teacher - Disciples 🤦🤦🤦 I can't help it but to shake my head. Those novels I've read so far makes me wanna kick the MC's face.🙈😂😂 OP Master = OP Disciples Abnormal Master = Abnormal Disciples Braggart Master = Braggart Disciples Puttui. Here we go again. I think my brain was damaged just thinking the future. 😭😂🤔
it was okay until chapter 56 where it looks like author wrote a new book and said let's start here