Naruto: The Shattered Eyes

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Error_Uzumaki

This is Honestly such a banger that, I almost wept. The work is so good that they should be paid for gracing us with such god-tier work.

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GodPhaze

Love it so far can't wait for more, want to know if this is a original fanfic if not could you let me know the source so I can beige it. If not that ok to just don't drop it if it's your original I really want to know how everything plays out

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HardenedWood

This is a pretty exceptional story, I don’t really have any major complaints about it, just minor ones that don’t detract from my enjoyment. I like the Dōjutsu, the protagonist is likeable, his actions have been smart and his morality being Chaotic Neutral is great to see since I love Neutral characters. The only real criticism I have would be that his development in a certain Kinjutsu should’ve been expanded upon by showing us his struggles and thought process in developing, it’s a-bit hard to believe even with his resources that he can accomplish that when he has such a poor talent in everything else. His apprenticeship was also hard to believe but I like it and your direction. Add in that it’s not impossible for it to happen and I'm fine with it, that’s all the constructive criticism I’ve got. Keep up the fantastic work, and I’m looking forward to the future of your story!

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CLO2610

This story is awesome cant wait for more

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KingPumpkin3

Ohhh I just love his ability it makes me very happy

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Snoax

Everything is perfect, except for a few plot holes at the start. But still, great quality, frequent updates, etc.

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Trollface

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Atrox_H

Loving this so far, a different take on Naruto from the usual fanfic troops. Really liking the progress so far, keep up the good work Author. Much intrigued to see how far the MC goes and when will he meet his sensei officially. All the best Author !!!

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The_8th_king

Very good, just focus on some character interaction though, a little drama would be nice

Definitely one of the best Naruto fanfic in this platform, unique ability with an MC with IQ higher than room temperature is so rare these days. though there's still some incongruity such as the leap in logic for some plot devices but overall it is a very enjoyable read

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The_8th_king

This is pretty high quality tbh, you should write more stories