NARUTO : jujutsu template system

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OLD_storage

hi guys Please share any translation errors you encounter with a paragraph comment.Unfortunately, my English is not enough to write a book. For this reason, I get help from translate and AI while translating the original text into English. (don't get me wrong, this is my original work)

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Srinidhi_r_shetty

Why does most of the jjk fanfics have mc who has mental problems or straight out edgy psychopath .......,........,.............................,............................................

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TacetIrae

painful to read, plenty of annoying mistakes but that is not my main problem. for some reason mc is schizophrenic with a lot of hallucinations that don't make him appealing to me. really hard to read about character that I can't like. if you wish you read that novel be warned , there is very little logic in the mind of the mc.

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jaro_onody

the only thing i dont like is how stupid the mc is omg he 20 in mind yet he acts as a dom child without any intellect . you also give him templates to fast in my opnion it doest give the story any progression at this point he wil have every op power in jjk long before minato even becomes hokage ps i like that you take give pols on themplate end all but i can tell from diffriends story good writer regret doing this and give up on there stories becouse its not there vision anymore and become bore of it

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Maluop

One of the better story’s on this app

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ShriNG

Good...........................................................................................................................................................

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Savitesh_Lakra

I am enjoying the series and mc too oyf9f66oyiditddididtdiydiditdididididdiddtidididififififoyfyofyfyoffofofuofoffofofofyofyofyofoydodofofyfofoyfykfgpuuofiyfifofofyoofoudoyydyoyooykggggkckfoufyofofdiddtiddiyxgkxkyxkyyddyxgyyoiydidtdididididtidididididyofkcyoxyifiycyococoyffyfoyfyididtiuriggkgkgkckdkdodidiidiydd

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urnome

it's kinda a little dark and also a little little little little CRINGE 😬

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Shi_Wu

pretty good tho mc is way too op for my likeing

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Luizz_Ricardo

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Murod

this is history has potential , continue ! [img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]

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elpepe

goooooooood

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drunkenBlood

It's a good fic it could become something great .,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,. ..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.., ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,

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Luizz_Ricardo

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Luizz_Ricardo

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Carson_Lodahl

This is one of the greatest fanfics i’ve read.

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Obli790

It has excellent quality. Of course it's a cliché, but a well-done cliché can warm any reader's heart. I hope this work has more chapters and character development.

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Trashconsumer

This is by far the worst fanfic of both naruto and jjk i have ever read. Mc has no personality, no hardwork, acts like a pedo sometimes, very annoying like a chinese manhua mc. The author said his english is bad but i feel like he doesnt even have any intention in improving it, no world exploration, major characters in naruto show up just to disappear forever because they served their use to show how op and amazing the mc is. Just dont read this.

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joe_caa

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