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If I'm not mistaken about the fanfic, I think the author said that there was going to be one or another relationship, so that she would get more out of those relationships I suggested that.

Thanks for the chapter, suggestion, in the future if Uraume becomes immortal, you should show several romances with people over time, also, make the people she has a romance with teach Uraume new things, this to justify her becoming more powerful and not being stuck with a level of power. (translated)

thanks for chapter

gracias por el capitulo

Hi, I think you should watch some Elden Ring lore videos, with the DLC there have been more responses about what's been going on, like why Marika did what she did among others, I also recommend that you finish this fanfic as you want and not follow the lore so you can practice, if you want to rewrite it later, if not, it's fine as is. (translated)

To clarify, I'm not bothered by the age difference, I'm bothered by the fact that he can't accept her rejection, even though he's much older than her. (translated)

let her go, i know it's a fanfic and you need drama, but please let her go or don't make things awkward by making him insist on what they did, do it another way, i don't know how because i don't write, but for a reason you are the author, besides it's not difficult for a teacher to stay with a student in college, after all i've had several teachers who have married one of their students and although it's not normal, nobody says anything because it's supposed that when you go to college you already have to have a degree of maturity and you can make your decisions, and even if you try to justify with the possessiveness of the protagonist the fact that he doesn't accept a rejection, that simply makes him look immature and creepy considering that he lived a life before, and is much older than hina, so the fact that he doesn't accept a rejection from someone younger is weird, but I will continue reading anyway because the fanfic is interesting, removing the thing with hina l, in the end you decide what to do with your story, (translated)