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The main character is just a cruel idiot with an inflated ego and classic 8th grader syndrome. . ....,,,,,,,,,....................
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It’s a well done translation, you just have to keep remembering it’s a translation so every time you think ‘why is this guy so stupid?’ You just have to remember that.
Translator did a good job . It is very readable and has minimal chineese shit It feels boring once you get to 180+ chapters... He unnecessarily put too much bs in the name of world background and i don't find myself liking it I personally don't like character of protagonist .He seems like an edge lord and his reaction to most things are cheesy and lame.
Fire I just wise he could have stayed more on earth . Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z A Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z
Good translation, my friend... Although the story has some good ideas, the shitty MC ruins any desire to read the rest of the story. I can't describe how irritating I found this MC.
You will enjoy this if you just accept everything and turnoff your brain. Cause if not you will die of brain cancer. Read at your own risk.
Good translation, bad story. Too many monologues that aren't connected to the story where it gets is only one conversation in a single chapter and the rest are monologues. And about his system power is kind of useless he doesn't use it that much and it becomes even more useless for the later chapters. The character of the mc is your typical young master ching chong so good luck with that.
well let's give it a go and see what's happening. I am feeling very positive about this novel.
Great translation, shitty story. Add the villain tag, Mc is a hypocrite lunatic. Genocide is considered heroic now eh?
Although the author will not see this comment, I will write it. I don't even know how many sessions of psychiatry I have to go to to clear this shit from my mind. I only read fifteen chapters, and my brain was dying. I give 3 stars for the translator's efforts.
I really like this ff and cannot understand that it does not get the hype it deserves. For the people who read the reviews before Starting a new novel, this novel is really entertaining and you should read it😋
I have zero complaints regarding the Webnovel translation. They are doing a splendid job. I know the original writer wouldn't be seeing this review but this fanfic would be a great read if unnecessary fluffy romance wasn't pushed in between. To the readers: if you can tolerate the usual Chinese trope of a rich young master giving shelter to a poor and illiterate beautiful girl who later becomes his wife/girlfriend/mistress then carry on.
Noice. The Translation quality is just superb. As I am a translator too. I can relate the hard work and effort put into this work. Appreciate it a lot.
Warning guys chapter 84 until 164 he never gonna get a ticket like no matter how op the enemy like not even a quest the system literally disappeared
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I like the MC isn't a hero or a villain he does what he wants for profit or to get new abilities he'll massacre an entire city/country (depends what u classify wakanda as) and felt guilt but he isn't bound by his guilt he'll just do what he wants to get stronger
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at the moment when the skill of changing appearance appeared, I immediately realized that this was not for me, I hate hiding my identity,unfortunately this has become a fetish for many fanfic authors
turn your mind off and enjoy. if you try to use logic it'll fry your brain, try at your own risk.
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I really liked this translation, I hope it doesn't drop. To this point, 30 chapters have been posted, I won't say much about the development of the story, but I really liked how the plot is unfolding and the MC's relationship with Polares, if he can recruit Emma Frost that would be great. Thank you for the translating work, the grammar is OK, take my 5 stars here! P.S: I didn't like this arc of the Largado. If it was to take care of the villain, it should eliminate evil in its cradle and not leave the city in chaos and people dying for nothing, even more so our MC, who broke Spider-Man's fate.
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Shameless 5* review from the translator. I am doing my best to improve the readability of this story. But if there are still some errors, please bear with them.
The main character is just a cruel idiot with an inflated ego and classic 8th grader syndrome. . ....,,,,,,,,,....................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It’s a well done translation, you just have to keep remembering it’s a translation so every time you think ‘why is this guy so stupid?’ You just have to remember that.
Translator did a good job . It is very readable and has minimal chineese shit It feels boring once you get to 180+ chapters... He unnecessarily put too much bs in the name of world background and i don't find myself liking it I personally don't like character of protagonist .He seems like an edge lord and his reaction to most things are cheesy and lame.
Fire I just wise he could have stayed more on earth . Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z A Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z
Good translation, my friend... Although the story has some good ideas, the shitty MC ruins any desire to read the rest of the story. I can't describe how irritating I found this MC.
You will enjoy this if you just accept everything and turnoff your brain. Cause if not you will die of brain cancer. Read at your own risk.
Good translation, bad story. Too many monologues that aren't connected to the story where it gets is only one conversation in a single chapter and the rest are monologues. And about his system power is kind of useless he doesn't use it that much and it becomes even more useless for the later chapters. The character of the mc is your typical young master ching chong so good luck with that.
well let's give it a go and see what's happening. I am feeling very positive about this novel.
Great translation, shitty story. Add the villain tag, Mc is a hypocrite lunatic. Genocide is considered heroic now eh?
Although the author will not see this comment, I will write it. I don't even know how many sessions of psychiatry I have to go to to clear this shit from my mind. I only read fifteen chapters, and my brain was dying. I give 3 stars for the translator's efforts.
I really like this ff and cannot understand that it does not get the hype it deserves. For the people who read the reviews before Starting a new novel, this novel is really entertaining and you should read it😋
I have zero complaints regarding the Webnovel translation. They are doing a splendid job. I know the original writer wouldn't be seeing this review but this fanfic would be a great read if unnecessary fluffy romance wasn't pushed in between. To the readers: if you can tolerate the usual Chinese trope of a rich young master giving shelter to a poor and illiterate beautiful girl who later becomes his wife/girlfriend/mistress then carry on.
Noice. The Translation quality is just superb. As I am a translator too. I can relate the hard work and effort put into this work. Appreciate it a lot.
Warning guys chapter 84 until 164 he never gonna get a ticket like no matter how op the enemy like not even a quest the system literally disappeared
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I like the MC isn't a hero or a villain he does what he wants for profit or to get new abilities he'll massacre an entire city/country (depends what u classify wakanda as) and felt guilt but he isn't bound by his guilt he'll just do what he wants to get stronger
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at the moment when the skill of changing appearance appeared, I immediately realized that this was not for me, I hate hiding my identity,unfortunately this has become a fetish for many fanfic authors
turn your mind off and enjoy. if you try to use logic it'll fry your brain, try at your own risk.
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I really liked this translation, I hope it doesn't drop. To this point, 30 chapters have been posted, I won't say much about the development of the story, but I really liked how the plot is unfolding and the MC's relationship with Polares, if he can recruit Emma Frost that would be great. Thank you for the translating work, the grammar is OK, take my 5 stars here! P.S: I didn't like this arc of the Largado. If it was to take care of the villain, it should eliminate evil in its cradle and not leave the city in chaos and people dying for nothing, even more so our MC, who broke Spider-Man's fate.
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Shameless 5* review from the translator. I am doing my best to improve the readability of this story. But if there are still some errors, please bear with them.