Also, jery should have been discovered faster. You can tell how obsessed Rick is with details and his personal space from the episode where he goes to another planet to shit in the toilet.
I'm glad to see another "rick and morty" fanfiction on Webnovel. I really don't understand why there isn't more. Anyway, as for this novel, it's pretty good and readable. The only thing I see as a problem is the too many repetitive monologues and unnecessary repetition of paragraphs of events. It's like they just struggled to complete the word count.
Oh, I see. In other words, it expresses potential, not instant power.
Similarly, Ivan's magic power is 5, but he can only say that he is stronger than the 11-year-old Dumbledore.
Hogwarts' White Lord
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
Physique: 1 (Ordinary)
Hogwarts' White Lord
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
In the early morning in London, the fog was hazy. A boy about 11 years old walked in the wet courtyard. His name was Ivan, Ivan Ambrosius.
Hogwarts' White Lord
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
By splitting it into multiple small slug clones, each person could have one in their hand.
Naruto: The new beginning
Anime & Comics · Iamxeno
Trees pov:
Ten worked on improving sensory ninjutsu and the Flying Thunder God jutsu, ten trained Rasengans to smash trees and stones, and the last ten worked on refining his wind nature transformation.
Naruto: The new beginning
Anime & Comics · Iamxeno
In an instant, the three of them, with their Sharingan activated, looked at each other. The three teenagers in green tights, staring at each other with their Sharingan, created a very strange scene.
Naruto: The new beginning
Anime & Comics · Iamxeno
It seemed that he would have to study hard even before he was born.
Naruto: The new beginning
Anime & Comics · Iamxeno
I hope Orochimaru ends up in this arc. I think it's ridiculous that it survived so long in fanfiction or original.
Naruto: The new beginning
Anime & Comics · Iamxeno