Dragon Ball Alternative

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Keyaruga_Tsuki

good story by far the best in terms of Dragon Ball Fan Fics. 1. The main character of this story is a human and I think that's amazing,I'm tired of watching drgaon ball fanfics have the same trope of an overpowered sayain blah blah blah.Its very predictable and this is a new way of going about it and so far so good. 2.Some of you may be worried about him being human because if the fact its dragon ball and their are bigger forces at play like Frieza ect,Yes the Main character knows this and he wishes for an amazing ability throught the earthly dragonballs.Do not believe anyone telling you that the ability is nerfed or underwhelming,They are the same people expecting a fast paced story where the Mc becomes an "ancient legendary God baby big boy sayain" like grow up. 3.The writing quality is amazing so far so good,My only problem with this is the updating schedule, It's very slow but that's just my opinion it's steady I think it's like 1 chapter per week..I'm just addicted and want more...but yeah I did end up giving the updating stability 3 stars it should be 4 stars but I just want more chapters.. 4.World background not much to say on this end, It's a DragonBall fanfic everything is described well so like...idk bro it's DragonBall we know what everything looks like already bit the descriptions are great as well. 5.Story development is amazing.I love how it develops in such a nice pace.Not everything is happening fast and oh my God,The way characters react to his actions is amazing for example when he killed ___ person to forward the plot, Piccolo was questioning him and others looking at him suspiciously or when he let _____ person die,That also raised a few eye brows.His actions affect the reactions if those around him and I think that's great because UT brings more life to the side characters around him. 6.Overall this story is a 4.0 at least for me and I would give it a higher rating If the author just dropped more chapters 😭. The development is nicely done,Writing quality amazing,Sidr characters feel real and not just there for convenience,World background is great but I've already watched the show so I know what things look like but the descriptions can help you picture them better as well. 7.Advice, Moving forward I would like if the author posted images of what he was describing and what the main character did look like, I've seen other novels and fan fics do this and I think it would be a great addition if you just add a text that says image and then posted a picture of what you want us to see as readers by commenting on the image.That would be amazing as well.Please do update more if you can, I think this will help your fanfic grow faster because by all means I think this fanfic is the DragonBall version of Naruto faint smile both stories are peak.

LV 4

QBL

We mourn the loss of a true legend, Akira Toriyama who brought joy and inspiration to millions around the world through his iconic creations. Toriyama's legacy will forever endure, his work will continue to inspire and bring smiles to countless hearts.

LV 4

Qwerttipper

The book starts out well, but all the decisions after he is granted his wish are downright arrogant. His thoughts of preserving the Canon is stupid when he is added into the world. Anyways not the story for me hopefully mc can grow as a person and not treat everyone as pawns.

LV 14

YaBoyChris

This story started off really well. The main character logically laid out good plans, acted on them to the best of his ability, and started progressing. I liked him not having a super strong ability off rip, giving him something to work towards. Unfortunately, the author stated taking this story down the crack route. Between incredibly goofy dialogue and bringing in annoying aspects like characterizations from the Abridged series I’ve lost nearly all enjoyment for this fic. I guess I’ll check it out every once in a while to see where it’s progressed.

LV 12

NunuXD

Okay, that's a really well written story, but that's not a story for me, read about an MC so weak and useless isn't my cup of tea, 20 chapters and the Mc hasn't changed anything in the cannon besides some small "butterfly effects", an mc that have trained for 20 chapters and still got used as a baseball bat for radditz isn't an mc that I wanna keep following. I know that you wanna make some development, and I really like to read some weak to strong, but when the Mc is just weak and you plan make him strong in 200 chapters, that's not a pacing for me.

LV 4

Mad_man13

I have been on this platform for years and I have read thousands of books, for thousands of hours. And I have to say this is a realy high quality story, one of the best I have seen. The only advice I would give you is to keep the quality high, as a lot of times once a story gets into the hundreds of chapters the quality wanes. So please take your time, but don’t drop the story. I really look forward to the next chapter.

LV 3

Beyond_

Even without many chapters to comment on, I like how the characters are portrayed and express their feelings, the protagonist is very weak from the looks of it, which is disappointing but has potential. Let your cover not just be an illustration, but a character.

LV 1

ElPadre

This Fanfic is the best of all Dragon ball's one here. The characters are fun to read and its an AU in a good way ! Goo job Author ! Keep Going ! Give me more !!!!!

LV 1

NeaCambelt

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LV 2

R0B

This is too much out of canon. All characters are rewritten in authors image. The story gets slower with each chapter. At first the story was very fast paced with a lot of time skips and characters you could say were canon, but now... Chapters have so many bulls.... details, that the story barely progresses. At this rate author will need about a thousand or even more chapters just to finish this fic.

LV 10

StarWriting

The lowest form of fanfiction in existence is a canon tag-a-long story. That’s where an OC joins the story and contributes absolutely nothing...they're just there to spectate.

LV 2

Ppsantana_1

This is a great work that portrays the characters perfectly considering their feelings, emotions, memories and even personality. One of the few works where I see this level of depth , in addition to the incredible character who did not receive fingers from another and yet did not give up, incredible determination and created a plan to overcome variables. Honestly this is by far the best DBZ work I've seen

LV 13

HerectGod

By far the best Dragon Ball fanfic. This is the wet dream of any Dragon Ball...

LV 11

KazumaEquality

im being biased here but i enjoy every single chapter❤️

LV 4

Crimson_D3mon

honestly, best dragon ball fanfic ever. even though he's only human, he can contend with others with his creativeness

LV 3

Unfated

Really good story with a nice side of comedy and well written fights, which is a surprise coming from a DBZ ff which their canon is pretty simple. The author expands on the characters by adding some character traits to some who were sorely lacking in personality and depth. I really have nothing to complain about when it comes to this novel as it is exactly what it advertises: an alternate Dragon Ball. At the time of writing this review, the author is at the end of the Namek arc and the OC's involvement, as well as the nuanced character changes, are clearly felt and I for one enjoy them. Definitely give this novel a try, you won't regret it!

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An0nim0

One of the best things I've read in a long time (Muito boa mesmo)[img=atualização][img=atualização][img=atualização][img=atualização][img=atualização]

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youssef_josef

Best novel I've read about Dragon Ball 🤩🤩🤩 This is the first novel I see about a human incarnation in Dragon Ball, where humans are always underestimated, but you've made it fun to read, it's made his power development balanced without exaggeration, and his character development is also fun, and the story development is amazing because the characters have other dimensions not portrayed in the original story. Thanks for this masterpiece.