Why is mc so clueless...
Your first sentence is correct, that's my point. As for the god not doing some things - that's entire author's (yours) interpretation on how he can help him. What you really did is make his position more favorable, like the main character he is - you can't do that, he has to suffer if he wants to change his fate.
The main character is from china. He is rich, handsome, and basically a rapist. He has god level talent and is smart... If you found a single thing that you liked about the main character, I would appreciate it if you could let me know.
Please hit delete button on this fanfic
So mc is a scumbag with no redeemable qualities... Do you want people to hate your main character or something?
Hachiman ruined the story
The inclusion of him in the story is diabolical. You are supposed to make his path harder, not easier. What's the point of this?
Well webnovel has a function called "reviews". It's a place to share fanfic reviews. I read all chapters and I gave proper review with a high rating. I usually rate 3/5 or lower, so your welcome. No need to be but hurt about it.
Read this somewhere already
I mean, I understand, but you can't expect a productive review if you are not planning to change anything in your story and this is what probably what makes you feel it's unfair. All stories have flaws, I enjoyed your story, I just pointed out the flaws. Now that I think about it I rated your story too low, but nvm.
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