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This novel went from 5 stars to 1 star in a single Arc, so many things went wrong in Greece that it is difficult to list them, I will not say not to read it, but get ready for the Arch of Greece, I will drop this.
It seems like everything is interesting but confusing ! I threw it on page 37, I still didn't understand what kind of power it has? the magician himself looks like a robot without a mission , he does nothing to save the Uchiha ? he didn't need to save everyone , only those who are worthy, he dined at their house, talked with Mikoto, but watched Itachi kill everyone? Like it can't be changed? then why is there in this plot at all? why would the Uchiha keep an eye on the paines if everything is clear anyway? in short, I'm sorry, I still didn't understand his powers, and I don't like the poppy itself, it looks like a sick boy why do I need such a poppy)))
(English from Google translator) It went from a good novel to getting worse until the Grail War arc, there I screwed up everything and nothing made sense anymore, then I read until I lost my memory and I gave up
Add a cover to the novel and be sure to add the long ones on the successful MC's harem. Harem... Harem. ... Harem .... Harem. ...Harem. ... Harem. ....
I story is good at the start. Recommend reading it. though i dropped it after the Greece Arc.It is the worst arc in the novel . It became unreadable after that
Spoiler below Honestly this story was going great and was quickly becoming one of my favorites but like @TheAngels said the greece arc ruined this story beyond repair (mc loses memory in a bs way, some hero wannabe takes over his body and now mc as a spirit can only watch as said body snatcher pipes his friend while he can only watch if that doesn’t say how far this story has fallen idk what else will )
Before i get into the novel can someone tell me max numbers of girls he has or going to have ?
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Writing a bit complicated at first but gets better with time. Interesting and captivating story especially the past of the protagonist.
This novel went from 5 stars to 1 star in a single Arc, so many things went wrong in Greece that it is difficult to list them, I will not say not to read it, but get ready for the Arch of Greece, I will drop this.
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I dont know what is a proper review but im gonna say what ever comes to mind, Im not native english speaker and im not an editor or a writer but this fic need some edit here and there because so many spelling mistake from chapter 1 and its already 100 chap still so many random spelling mistake, i hope author fix it.
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The story is good so far, but there are a lot of typos, and messing words, and I don’t think the Author is willing to correct anything after uploading the chapters.
to gostando da novel, mas os mundos são muito misturado! bem que podia ser um mundo por vez, seria uma história muita mais fluida. vou continuar lenda por gostar da novel, mas tô ficando desinteressado por tropa de mundo toda hora..😐🙃
the story is good but the problem is there's some grammar errors, but it's still a fun book to read.
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Just some ummm i mean comment there no chapter 88 i think wrong number given.So sorry just to say but [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update].Thank you and I enjoy it.
Interesante ihistoria, espero que sigas publicando y no abandones este fanficc !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE it. TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE best.
Good job author.I hope you dont drop this novel[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Food Job author Really a good gamer fic and when mc goes in fate have him create his own noble phantasm and reality marble and if possible get true magic not from the start but at later down the line and training with shishou is must those primodial runes and her spearmanship is just too op to be passed out upon
this novel is one of the best fanfiction I have ever seen pls don't drop it 😎✌️
This novel went from 5 stars to 1 star in a single Arc, so many things went wrong in Greece that it is difficult to list them, I will not say not to read it, but get ready for the Arch of Greece, I will drop this.
It seems like everything is interesting but confusing ! I threw it on page 37, I still didn't understand what kind of power it has? the magician himself looks like a robot without a mission , he does nothing to save the Uchiha ? he didn't need to save everyone , only those who are worthy, he dined at their house, talked with Mikoto, but watched Itachi kill everyone? Like it can't be changed? then why is there in this plot at all? why would the Uchiha keep an eye on the paines if everything is clear anyway? in short, I'm sorry, I still didn't understand his powers, and I don't like the poppy itself, it looks like a sick boy why do I need such a poppy)))
(English from Google translator) It went from a good novel to getting worse until the Grail War arc, there I screwed up everything and nothing made sense anymore, then I read until I lost my memory and I gave up
Add a cover to the novel and be sure to add the long ones on the successful MC's harem. Harem... Harem. ... Harem .... Harem. ...Harem. ... Harem. ....
I story is good at the start. Recommend reading it. though i dropped it after the Greece Arc.It is the worst arc in the novel . It became unreadable after that
Spoiler below Honestly this story was going great and was quickly becoming one of my favorites but like @TheAngels said the greece arc ruined this story beyond repair (mc loses memory in a bs way, some hero wannabe takes over his body and now mc as a spirit can only watch as said body snatcher pipes his friend while he can only watch if that doesn’t say how far this story has fallen idk what else will )
Before i get into the novel can someone tell me max numbers of girls he has or going to have ?
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Writing a bit complicated at first but gets better with time. Interesting and captivating story especially the past of the protagonist.
This novel went from 5 stars to 1 star in a single Arc, so many things went wrong in Greece that it is difficult to list them, I will not say not to read it, but get ready for the Arch of Greece, I will drop this.
Top tier work Wverjjjjjjjjjjjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkikiiiiiiiiihhgfuhdujfrhhhjjjjjjuiijjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjuuhjjwjududhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjddiidjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjsjskdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkjdjdjdjsjdjdjdjdiidididjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjdkdjdjdjdjjddikskskdkdkdkdksididiidkdjdjdjdjdkdkdkdkkdkdkskdkskskskskjdkskskskdkdkdkdkdkdkdkskskkskskskskskskksskkskskskskskskskdkskkskskskskskskskskskskskkskskskskskskskskskkskskskisisizozosoosososizizozoizozozizosozoizzoozozizizozozozozizozoozozizixoxododooxoxozixixozidozoododidkdkdjdkdkjkdkdkdididididididididididiididididididod
I dont know what is a proper review but im gonna say what ever comes to mind, Im not native english speaker and im not an editor or a writer but this fic need some edit here and there because so many spelling mistake from chapter 1 and its already 100 chap still so many random spelling mistake, i hope author fix it.
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The story is good so far, but there are a lot of typos, and messing words, and I don’t think the Author is willing to correct anything after uploading the chapters.
to gostando da novel, mas os mundos são muito misturado! bem que podia ser um mundo por vez, seria uma história muita mais fluida. vou continuar lenda por gostar da novel, mas tô ficando desinteressado por tropa de mundo toda hora..😐🙃
the story is good but the problem is there's some grammar errors, but it's still a fun book to read.
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Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright Its alright
Just some ummm i mean comment there no chapter 88 i think wrong number given.So sorry just to say but [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update].Thank you and I enjoy it.
Interesante ihistoria, espero que sigas publicando y no abandones este fanficc !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE it. TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE best.
Good job author.I hope you dont drop this novel[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Food Job author Really a good gamer fic and when mc goes in fate have him create his own noble phantasm and reality marble and if possible get true magic not from the start but at later down the line and training with shishou is must those primodial runes and her spearmanship is just too op to be passed out upon
this novel is one of the best fanfiction I have ever seen pls don't drop it 😎✌️
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