Beta mc , I want to puke at how worthless and insignificant he is behaving, instead of just spitting in his so-called friends' faces and walking away, he literally licks their shoes
what a cringe ?, the main character turns into an annoying typical beta mc
Raw ? .
Cringe , Can't you make it smarter and less idiotic? Where is his knowledge about the future and his old memories that should make him more mature and smarter?
The same impulsive and emotional fool and idiot like Ace, I don’t see any reason for his reincarnation at all, because he’s just another Ace who will consider Luffy and the others his family and brothers for whom he would be willing to die, cringe
I would like to say that although your main character is not complete trash and an idiot, but he is close to it, I also do not understand his attachment to Wanda and the Ancient One, although I consider them not important, because there are thousands of them and they are not unique, I could understand him if they existed only in one copy, he disgusts me because he is too stupid, an emotional idiot, naive and tearful snotter
The translator did a very good job and the translation is more or less good, also at the beginning the story was very good, but gradually it turned into complete garbage with forced comedy, the idiocy of the main character for the sake of the plot, where he loses to the naked female version of Naruto only for the sake of forced comedy and nothing more more emphasizing his idiocy and proving that he is a submissive
Trash , absolute trash , nah , i have hate this chapter , and now this fic too , 1 star
I liked the fic, but I don't like the fact that it misses so many opportunities and makes the wrong distribution of characteristics when it could first train and only then add
no, why would he even do this? he will only weaken himself and improve others, it is better that instead of giving, he absorbs their strength into himself
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