Tchao707

I gave this a try I keep on coming back hoping it get better but I hate the mc he brash, arrogant and down right unlikable, and the fact the main crew just accept it is weird some weird guy with bipolar behavior sprouting random meta knowledge, is someone I would not trust, he keep on yelling on bronya then after a outburst try to motivate her and being a friend, your mc just fill like a asshole who gaslight people to like him atleast at this point. I really try man I quit and re read like 5 times.In just 8 chapter man here a list of dumb things he did so far, jump sprout out random meta knowledge, call out bronya on her suspicious like that would matter ever heard of being subtle why would she talk about this with a stranger. Next threaten a kid for not being able to sleep,what, acting to friendly to the main crew then being an total asshole the next like I said bipolar,pulling a sword out of his ass using junk, and if your gonna do an amnesiac chracter why start at belebog it make it harder to join the Astral crew a natural way, the way you did he just say trust me and they just say okay, it half ass and feels unearned.,I van go on and go and that just 8 chapter I'm gonna try to continue but I'll most like gonna quit, if it gets better I'll change my reviews otherwise Goodluck

Hello Translator here, I hope I can do this series justice I have only read up to chapter 112 from the original translation of Edgeofsky, and will be starting from scratch hopefully I will finish and thanks to everyone for reading, I'm gonna try to do three a day if I can if not oh well this is mostly a hobby anyway. I'm using a mix of machine translation and my personal editing if anyone is asking how I'm doing this