I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel

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soLaugustus

Throughout the age of humanity, man has discovered four innermost callings; later generations then referred to such callings as “man's true romance”. Man dreamed to explored the vastness space. Man aspire to pilot mechas and conquer lands and the sky. Man long for a thrilling and exciting battle against fate. And finally, Man discovered their instinctual yearning for the epitome of... coolness. When one thinks of coolness, plenty of things come to mind, but this story is merely one of them. Mafia. Well dressed fancy wiseguys, enormous wealth and beauties, intimidating presence, and a thousand subordinates under his hand. To be a Mafia Boss — a man that conquers people through fear and respect. But this is not a story of being a simple scum. It is not about simply crime. It is about romance, family, redemption and trust... because even among thieves, there is honor to be found. *** The MC is anti-hero not a villain. He's confident, smooth talker, straight forward and ruthless. He would kill and use anyone if needed, but despite that he prefers to not see bloodshed at all as he's traumatized of his past. But if needed, he will do so. He is pragmatic but also emotional. Ask your questions here.

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Rohan_Shinde_2731

It is a good book to read and I am enjoying it very much

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Shivam_Thakur_1883

so basically mc is to become king of underworld but mc following no killing protocol. I am not talking about unneccesory killing- I'm talking about neccessory killing. mc doesn't even killed the villain(done a lot of bad things) who came to assasinate mc... Mostly mc make everyone unconcious even if they could potentially harm him in future or they could become unexpected trouble easily for his plan.. Yeah that is very very annoying and dumb . I don't know what author is thinking but it's already many times happened that mc not kill someone who should be killed to make things easier... It's not as if killing was difficult for him.. and no this is not slice of life- mc have very cruel past of betrayal and fking anihilation of his whole family but still mc following no killing plan .

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Artiankillerfish

in All honesty, there isn't much chapters for me to write a review about it but it does seem promising. the writing is good, great good job author [img=Smitten]but on a serious note I was waiting for u to post on your first work until I realized you're going on a haitus. i really wish it goes well for you because tbh I did enhjoythe novel and it's a great experience to see others mind come to life on paper (screen) in a life and characters of its own.critic is something very common yet destructive to a creators mind, yet it can always build them up and push them higher. i hope it'll brethe latter for you. because despite everything, it's hard to satisfy a human and impossible to satisfy everyone. ik i sometimes nag about stuff that I don't like and I'm sorry. but genuinely just write for yourself. public validation is nice but depending on it is self destructive. enjoy your own craft, and practice and experience is what makes perfect... at least something near it?just seek satisfaction from yourself and past selves. you've came so far. and yk? the moon isn't even a perfect circle nor is the sun but it's their imperfections as a creature that makes their beauty (okay they're just hanging rock in the sky that goes disco but u get me) ahem, I'm not saying not to improve yourself. it just that I can't help but feel it was a heavy blow to you. I'm sorry if my previous review mightv've done u more harm than good. keep up your work and enjoy it man[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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Aady_Shrestha

As of chapter 42, This story is perfect magical mafia fantasy that I never knew I needed. The story telling is wonderfully written with little noticeable grammatical errors. The author updates frequently with every chapter putting the entire story together in an easy to understand way. The background and world-building progresses as the story goes on. The character designs are the only issue I as we are introduced to a big cast early on it’s hard to remember how all of them look like. All in all a very good book with great potential.

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BrycenBeans

Read about 40 chaps and what can I say this story took me by surprise. I was a little worried because I thought the story would drag but no almost every chapter kept my focus and was interesting. I'm really looking forward to the future chaps and academy arc but i'm going to stack for a while tho~

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PattyBu

So far like the plot of the story. MC is average but likable, common MC for me. Characters are ok, some annoying ,some funny and likable. 1 year dead to kill the Ghost king,that killed Original Father.Waiting for the author to make that happened. MC being to forgetful with the events when he suppose the author.(LOL🤣 but the normal for some authors not to remeber all the details😅) curious what is the plan with the original main characters? Still curious how did the MC destory this world.Did everybody dies or was invades by demons. oh well.

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Noirit_K

System Slave................. ...........

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Mhako

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] you are really doing a good job at the book keep it up

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Coin_Master_9395

My favorite novel! I just wish there were more chapters. The character development is great and the backstory of the main character is very intriguing.

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sapient

system slave.............................

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MarkinHotties

Great story ngl, really good story n very in teresting

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Janis_Jeplin

is really interesting. I am interested in how the mc will develop , although I still think that it does not seem so much a mafioso as we started the story there is time for a good development. good job if I don’t explain myself well, English is not my mother tongue, I’m sorry,

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Maltesesk

As of yet, in Chapter 46. Everything has been wonderful.

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Arzoch

I'm really enjoying the story, mc is great, and i think the whole beginning was well written. the author clearly knows what he's doing. I'm looking forward to the academy arc. highly recommend.

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ULLMANthe1APOSTLE

Well, the story till now was very eye-catching and was great to read the concept of not being a normal mob but a mafia mob who is not free but heavily restricted from the start is also new. And as I see it this story have tremendous amount of capaycity to grow, and i don't know about the future but till now the explaining of the characters and their side story did not make me feel like that the story is detached from the mc because in most story when showing side character story they detached themselves from the main story frame. The grammar is good 👍. Story devlopment till now was also good. But I did think that the chapters are a bit small but the update stability is fare so Idk. If you haven't decided upon reading this than give it a try.

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md_rizvi

It's actually quite good, the writing and it's style is quite good. To the readers I would say give it a try....

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MarAuthor

The story so far has been amazing, the mc is likable and not annoying, and the side characters are also very well-made. I would write more but unfortunately there arent many chapters yet, hence I am left hanging for now. I look forwards to more chapters in the future. And also, I agree Egnishez, make sure you don't overwork yourself author!

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Haizenberg

did I just spent coins in a dropped book?

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SETKO

one of my favorites so far !!👻👻🫱🥺🥜🍑⭐️🥊🫱👻