My Elf System

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Lucky0_0

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

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Wrathdg

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

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Valyrxa

Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

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SWORDGOD_ETERNITY

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

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Aayann_

Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

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Jordzfml_7

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

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ULTIMATE_BEING

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

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Noguenko

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

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Santy_Melay

The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

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PizzaDeliveryGuy

I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

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Haruto17

can give a link to discord server

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Yueliang_Haizi

This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.

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Yassine_0928

i lost braincells reading this garbage ,

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Rishav_Yadav_8247

please mia mother is in harem I want author preeeetyy please 🙏 😢 😭 😫 😔

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HYDRASIR_GAMING

hey author! I have a few questions 1. did you drop this novel [ no uploades for many days(almost a month)] 2. how many fmc and going to be in MC's harem 3.if the novel is on hiatus then when will you start uploading again? *thanks for the reply in advance 🙂*

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Sathish_Annarapu

It's the besttttt the story is good thanks for the author xD

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Angelic_Throne80

Loving the all round story please keep up the awesome story.

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MonsterGirlHarem

I love this book. it's well written, it's mostly slice of life up to where I'm currently at which I'm perfectly happy with. there's some good spicy chapters. this is one of my favorite books currently and I will definitely keep reading it until it's completed. and if people start complaining about the content then piss off and read something else.

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Anish_Deshmukh_4989

@Author: I am struck at ch 194 in web novel and I can not read ch 195. Where can I read ch 195?

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pusan_chowdhury

very good book must read enjoyed very much