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As the author, I know this story isn’t perfect yet, but I’m working hard to make it better with each chapter! This is my first serious attempt at storytelling, and while there’s room for improvement, I can already see the world and characters starting to take shape. The story is packed with humor, action, and a protagonist who's relatable and flawed, but driven to rise above his circumstances. I know the pacing, details, and even some dialogue could be polished, but I’m determined to grow as a writer and make this an adventure worth your time. Thank you for supporting my journey as both an author and a storyteller! I promise to keep refining and delivering a story that I hope you’ll love as much as I love creating it." As the author, I can see where the story shines and where it still needs improvement. The one thing holding me back right now is my English. It's not perfect, and I know it might show in my writing. But rest assured, I’m working hard to improve it and aim to be better within a month! That said, I hope the humor, action, and heart in the story make up for any shortcomings. The characters and plot are what I’m truly passionate about, and I’m excited to share this journey with you as both my storytelling and my English evolve. Thank you for your patience, feedback, and encouragement—it fuels me to keep going. Let’s grow together with each chapter!
awsomeeee
Alright, This is The End Of the Outside the walls Arc. Six chapters in. Let me know how well the FF is so far.
Anime & Comics · PcaNovels
how disgusting
As the ship disappeared, Kaito noted something with mild frustration. "Hancock's favorability is at 67. Still not enough to bind her."
Anime & Comics · Coreal
well even if everything is okey but the point is this story feels hollow cause our mc just lacks motivation or doesn't have good motivation for story to progress. he just want to watch anime and that is his overall motivation. mc action is compeltly driven by other people choice and story instead of other way around. for example mc won't do anything unless some forced plot is upon him. he just want to maintain status quo and story is compeletly driven by author putting problem in his way.
nah this is fate
The Humans are the best, and there is no Human in this plane, Then I will create the Human(Terran) race.
Sci-fi · Ghost_D_writer_
this is good .. I just hope author continue this novel. Also I hope autyhor doesn t make the mc too much powerful
well you are right .. when you are poor even a Doller is worth a forturne for you.........
He wasn't dense so he knew that Alice liked him.
Games · ShadowKatake
well , I can say the same thing about your reply. I am here sharing what I feel which is the same pupose review section is for. and yet you are coming criticizing me 🤣🤣
Rejected by Aether
Fantasy · Ghost_D_writer_