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A boy dies and get reincarnated in Vegeta body and get his soul merged with the original. Now follow his history of dominance and how he put not only Vegeta name but also his Saiyan race at the top of all universe.

I do not own the Dragon Ball series. All rights are reserved to Akira Toriyama.

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4.26

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Dark_PersonJJ

Nice story.~ PS for you. Im glad your Vegeta will not treat Bulma like OG did. Lets be honest OG Vegeta treated Bulma terrible.

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1yr
ดู 7 การตอบกลับ
Dark_PersonJJ

Hello. i just started reading this story. And i realy like it. But im not sure if im fine with MC stealing Android:18 from Krillin. I know he is punching bag and slap stick humor of Dragon Ball series.But he deserve to be happy. so let him have at least Maron. You know.Bulma look like girl.

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1yr
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Golden_Dragoon

l like it so, have a meme.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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1yr
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EvilBlueCrystal

The first chapter is where the protagonist spends his time getting some pointless wishes from God, And then the second chapter, the protagonist reincarnates without including any description of the surroundings, where It then turns into a mess of harem and boring conversation with Bulma. The battle training consists of lackluster descriptions, replaced with bland and monotonous words. Where's the excitement? Where's the tension? Then a random mention of Beerus in the distant future, that has nothing to do with current events. The protagonist just wishes for regeneration without any balance. The lack of progression in the first six chapters is like reading the descriptions of filler episodes. And even after that, when happens, it's just a copy of the original story. It fails to bring anything new to the table and instead relies on pointless conversations and badly written training sessions to fill the chapters. The dialogue is bad and completely unnatural, The protagonist acts more like Vegeta than an actual reincarnated MC, completely lacking any potential for a unique character, Not to mention the protagonist's uninteresting abilities.

1yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
ScottyTheD

Terrible grammar, terrible sentence structure, bad character design, bad story telling and an excuse of English isnt my first language. Don't release a public story if you haven't got an english speaking editor or your english isn't even as good as a 7th graders.

1yr
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some_writer

Please be consistent and update regularly. The story has great potential. I believe that if you keep up the work, you'll be able to overtake the highest rated DBZ fanfics.

1yr
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Anubismark

fun fact, one of the easiest ways to loose readers is to ignore basic rules for writing, such as don't write conversations in a fic like you would in a screenplay. don't identify who's speaking by just writing their name. if you must specify who said what, use descriptors.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Haku_Ouroboros

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1yr
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Bladeash

The plot isn’t bad, but the grammar isn’t worth pushing through.

1yr
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Dark_PersonJJ

Super Sayan 4 Royal BLUE.!!!! This would put Ichigo close to Grand Priest power.~

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1yr
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Herohero

so far the things are ok here (good grammar, good plot and the world building is going well) i recommend it……………………. …………………. …………………. …………………. …………………. ………………….

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1yr
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LuciferFallenStar

it's interesting, keep up the good work 👏

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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LeonardoJrjr

Up to date chap 43 im liking this very much the overall story is fun and well structured the only nitpick for me would be the update stability is a bit random sometimes Besides that 10/10 would recomend

1yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Javier_jp95

I'm liking how the story goes, keep going so you're doing well. I always hope a new chapter comes out and that you upload this story more often 10/10 super recommended to read

1yr
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MaxI
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I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this I like this

1yr
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Lizrock

El desarrollo de la personalidad del personaje es muy decepcionante[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
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Lyson
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1yr
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Strongest_Rrs

Es muy buena. Ya no puedo esperar para leer los siguientes capitulos

1yr
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รุ่นล่าสุด:
Chapter 51: Galatic Torunament[final] 1 years ago

จำนวน 1

  1. 1
    Beginning 1 years ago
  2. 2
    Trunks Saga 1 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Trunks Saga 2 1 years ago
  4. 4
    Trunks Saga 3 1 years ago
  5. 5
    Trunks Saga 4 1 years ago
  6. 6
    Trunks Saga 5 1 years ago
  7. 7
    Frieza Revenge 1 1 years ago
  8. 8
    Frieza Revenge 2 1 years ago
  9. 9
    Frieza Revenge 3 1 years ago
  10. 10
    Trunks Saga 6 1 years ago
  11. 11
    Trunks Saga 7 (+18) 1 years ago
  12. 12
    Trunks Saga 8 (+18) 1 years ago
  13. 13
    Cooler Saga 1 1 years ago
  14. 14
    Cooler Saga 2 1 years ago
  15. 15
    Cooler Saga 3 1 years ago
  16. 16
    Cooler Saga 4 1 years ago
  17. 17
    Cooler Saga 5 1 years ago
  18. 18
    Cooler Saga 6 1 years ago
  19. 19
    Cooler Saga 7 1 years ago
  20. 20
    Cooler Saga 8 1 years ago
  21. 21
    Cooler Saga End(+18) 1 years ago
  22. 22
    The 3 Years 1 1 years ago
  23. 23
    The 3 Years [2] 1 years ago
  24. 24
    The 3 Years [3] 1 years ago
  25. 25
    The 3 Years [4] +18 1 years ago
  26. 26
    The 3 Years [5] +18 1 years ago
  27. 27
    Android Saga [1] 1 years ago
  28. 28
    Android Saga [2] 1 years ago
  29. 29
    Android Saga [3] 1 years ago
  30. 30
    Andorid Saga[4] 1 years ago
  31. 31
    Android Saga[5] 1 years ago
  32. 32
    Android Saga[6] 1 years ago
  33. 33
    Android Saga[7] 1 years ago
  34. 34
    Tournament Saga [1] 1 years ago
  35. 35
    Tournament Saga[2] 1 years ago
  36. 36
    Tournament Saga[3] 1 years ago
  37. 37
    Tournament Saga[4] 1 years ago
  38. 38
    Future[1] 1 years ago
  39. 39
    Future[2] 1 years ago
  40. 40
    Future[3]+18 1 years ago
  41. 41
    Future[4] 1 years ago
  42. 42
    Future [5]+18 1 years ago
  43. 43
    Peace times[1] 1 years ago
  44. 44
    Peace Times[2] 1 years ago
  45. 45
    Galactic Tournament[1] 1 years ago
  46. 46
    Galactic Tournament[2] 1 years ago
  47. 47
    Galactic Tournament[3] 1 years ago
  48. 48
    Galatic tournament[4] 1 years ago
  49. 49
    Galactic tournament[5] 1 years ago
  50. 50
    Galatic Torunament[6] 1 years ago
  51. 51
    Galatic Torunament[final] 1 years ago

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