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Started off very good, but like 30 chapters in the quality drops off a ton and it turns into mindless rambling. It is like it started as a nice slice of life, but each chapter the author took a bite from the slice until they ended up just rambling aimlessly
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 1.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Stupid
My name is ralon bacalskiy and I LOVE this book and all its "suggestive content" ;) and i just want to say to ReyKale you go girl. BUT the world background is UUUUm ok i guess um pretty tubular - Ralon Bacalskiy
man, this is so chaotic got me cracking with laughing fits constantly sheeeeeesh
Ce n'est pas une mauvaise fan fiction, l'auteur est original, le personnage principal est original, l'évolution de l'histoire aussi est sympa, mais c'est un trop gros bordel pour être lisible sur la longue durée, au bout d'un moment ce livre est fatiguant à lire.
love this it's so fun huh[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
The story is fun and dumb, just like dragon ball should be! The pacing is alright and the story keeps moving. There’s a lot of mumei references which I don’t understand, but I’m not gonna give a bad review because of that. Where this story struggles is the english. It’s pretty broken, but understandable for the most part. It’s definitely improved since the start, because it was nigh unreadable when I first gave it a try. Overall, not a bad story, but it would benefit incredibly from a bit more english work.
Man, this is good, ignoring the fast pace that is not too fast considering we have omni powers and beyond at play. Well to the review I go, the story is really good, with the fights, the character interactions, and the plot, boi oh the plot thickens like Broly and Muun muscles, first off as I said the story is not only dbz verse, there's even the interference of other works in webnovel that aren't that major at the start, "the start" because later it becomes way more important, with some inferences to more collaboration between the author's works, and yes, it is hololive but not hololive, they're new characters with a story different than their counterparts but with really close or the same personalities to them, excluding mum and kro that are not the same but there's a reason for it. Another thing that makes this work unique compared to others is that the author draws for this story, making drawings of the transformations, characters, or things that are happening. What I love about this is that you can see the author getting better and better at drawing, at first the author had difficulties with the dimensions of the characters but now the drawings are really good and no problems with that, the ships please me too and there are more good things about the fic but I forgor and I really need to stop before I get called a bootlicker and my English is bad too. Overall this fic pleases the Rat.
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I loved this story and and starting to reread it again. I hope that people are not discouraged from reading this because of the lower end of rating.
Good story, love Hololive. Love Mumei. Love Kroni. Love KronMei. Love KronFau. Love FauMei. Love KronMeiFau(??? I wrote this right?). Love lilies.(>_<). And How much i love you'r ART! More Drip for Mumei!
For the most part, this is a great story so far! It's well written, and the pace is more than adequate in my eyes. The MC may rapidly grow in power, but that's expected honestly, and to her credit, the MC is trying not to go out of her way to power up to fast. Her love for fighting is keeping the power creep down (For now :3).
Well, second review: First of all, the grammar has improved drastically and it's actually readable. There are still some errors but nobody is perfect. This story still isn't for me as I have tried it several times because I was bored but I still think that it is a interesting concept. MC is extremely talented but doesn't want to train before Freeza because idk (forgot the reason, it was mentioned somewhere) and because of her the original characters train more and are stronger. Yeah that's about it, like I said I don't get far when I try to read this but it could be intersting for other people.
Haven’t Really read the story (and I’ll Probably Won’t Since I’m Not a huge fan of Hololive) but I’ll Give it 5 star only because The author is nice. Hope people find your fanfic and enjoy it
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it's a good story if i say.... because i'am a fan of Hololive i gave you all the star i have. >w<)/
Started great then turned into a acid trip. Great idea that fell into a crack-fic hole. Real shame. Almost feels like dbz fused with a failed attempt at a gamer forced into the whacky races.
I am shameless, ya know, but what's shameful then me? Kronii's addiction to subway.
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I like it so far it isn't like other dragon ball fic where the mc basically born with 100k power but can still but damaged by conventional means in this they are still relatively weak but they are about as strong as goku when the saiyan saga arc happens I also got into vtuber cuz of this anyways the plot is good and I don't think this novel has some weird cultivation novel villains and stuff good book :)
This has been a trip, for me it was a long learning Experience in Building World Lore as well getting a better grasp over English. At the end of the day I'm still a shameless Author/Artist like many, but I can't help but love what I created and had fun writing, so who cares? I made this story's MC(Mumei) to be fun to read and write, so if I ever felt like reading it I would laugh at it again similar to when I was writing, so like the Synopsis says. A MC who likes to play around most of the time but has her own twists and problems to solve along her journey. That's this Owl of mine's story.
Started off very good, but like 30 chapters in the quality drops off a ton and it turns into mindless rambling. It is like it started as a nice slice of life, but each chapter the author took a bite from the slice until they ended up just rambling aimlessly
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 1.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Stupid
My name is ralon bacalskiy and I LOVE this book and all its "suggestive content" ;) and i just want to say to ReyKale you go girl. BUT the world background is UUUUm ok i guess um pretty tubular - Ralon Bacalskiy
man, this is so chaotic got me cracking with laughing fits constantly sheeeeeesh
Ce n'est pas une mauvaise fan fiction, l'auteur est original, le personnage principal est original, l'évolution de l'histoire aussi est sympa, mais c'est un trop gros bordel pour être lisible sur la longue durée, au bout d'un moment ce livre est fatiguant à lire.
love this it's so fun huh[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
The story is fun and dumb, just like dragon ball should be! The pacing is alright and the story keeps moving. There’s a lot of mumei references which I don’t understand, but I’m not gonna give a bad review because of that. Where this story struggles is the english. It’s pretty broken, but understandable for the most part. It’s definitely improved since the start, because it was nigh unreadable when I first gave it a try. Overall, not a bad story, but it would benefit incredibly from a bit more english work.
Man, this is good, ignoring the fast pace that is not too fast considering we have omni powers and beyond at play. Well to the review I go, the story is really good, with the fights, the character interactions, and the plot, boi oh the plot thickens like Broly and Muun muscles, first off as I said the story is not only dbz verse, there's even the interference of other works in webnovel that aren't that major at the start, "the start" because later it becomes way more important, with some inferences to more collaboration between the author's works, and yes, it is hololive but not hololive, they're new characters with a story different than their counterparts but with really close or the same personalities to them, excluding mum and kro that are not the same but there's a reason for it. Another thing that makes this work unique compared to others is that the author draws for this story, making drawings of the transformations, characters, or things that are happening. What I love about this is that you can see the author getting better and better at drawing, at first the author had difficulties with the dimensions of the characters but now the drawings are really good and no problems with that, the ships please me too and there are more good things about the fic but I forgor and I really need to stop before I get called a bootlicker and my English is bad too. Overall this fic pleases the Rat.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I loved this story and and starting to reread it again. I hope that people are not discouraged from reading this because of the lower end of rating.
Good story, love Hololive. Love Mumei. Love Kroni. Love KronMei. Love KronFau. Love FauMei. Love KronMeiFau(??? I wrote this right?). Love lilies.(>_<). And How much i love you'r ART! More Drip for Mumei!
For the most part, this is a great story so far! It's well written, and the pace is more than adequate in my eyes. The MC may rapidly grow in power, but that's expected honestly, and to her credit, the MC is trying not to go out of her way to power up to fast. Her love for fighting is keeping the power creep down (For now :3).
Well, second review: First of all, the grammar has improved drastically and it's actually readable. There are still some errors but nobody is perfect. This story still isn't for me as I have tried it several times because I was bored but I still think that it is a interesting concept. MC is extremely talented but doesn't want to train before Freeza because idk (forgot the reason, it was mentioned somewhere) and because of her the original characters train more and are stronger. Yeah that's about it, like I said I don't get far when I try to read this but it could be intersting for other people.
Haven’t Really read the story (and I’ll Probably Won’t Since I’m Not a huge fan of Hololive) but I’ll Give it 5 star only because The author is nice. Hope people find your fanfic and enjoy it
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it's a good story if i say.... because i'am a fan of Hololive i gave you all the star i have. >w<)/
Started great then turned into a acid trip. Great idea that fell into a crack-fic hole. Real shame. Almost feels like dbz fused with a failed attempt at a gamer forced into the whacky races.
I am shameless, ya know, but what's shameful then me? Kronii's addiction to subway.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I like it so far it isn't like other dragon ball fic where the mc basically born with 100k power but can still but damaged by conventional means in this they are still relatively weak but they are about as strong as goku when the saiyan saga arc happens I also got into vtuber cuz of this anyways the plot is good and I don't think this novel has some weird cultivation novel villains and stuff good book :)
This has been a trip, for me it was a long learning Experience in Building World Lore as well getting a better grasp over English. At the end of the day I'm still a shameless Author/Artist like many, but I can't help but love what I created and had fun writing, so who cares? I made this story's MC(Mumei) to be fun to read and write, so if I ever felt like reading it I would laugh at it again similar to when I was writing, so like the Synopsis says. A MC who likes to play around most of the time but has her own twists and problems to solve along her journey. That's this Owl of mine's story.