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Albino*
The Oozaru stood victorious over the lifeless body of the colossal worm that had challenged them. They roared triumphantly, the Albuni Oozaru, still crackling with energy from its final blast, beat its chest with pride.
Dragon Ball: Rise of the Saiyan
Anime & Comics · EchoingDusk
Jorgen's* not Crocker's.
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
...why she* never had... ...interest in Amy when she* met...
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
...to being around her*, to asking her* questions... ...wanted most was to hear her* talk about... ...that fascinated her*...
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
This sentence needs to change the 'he' in 'she'.
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
This entire paragraph needs to be redone with S/she* instead of H/he.
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
she*
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
'She* said...' '...she* wants to...'
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
"...a stroke."*
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
This is something that just felt off but you should put - at the end of skin just to have it look 'completed'. Great chapter though!
Awakenings- Mortal: Blood, Bone marrow, Internal organs, Reproductive system, Skin
RWBY: Dragon's Heart
Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
You need to rework this entire paragraph to have female pronouns.
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
right*
As she looked into his eyes, all she saw was someone that was already dead, devoid of any hope to live. Without any further words, she made blood gauntlets on her righ hand, and plunged two of the clawed fingers into his skull, causing bits of his brains and blood to come out of it.
MHA: The Fresh Blood
Anime & Comics · The_Fae_Child
OD*
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
...an* outpost...
"I've found and outpost belonging to one of them by interrogating one of their Clansmen. Now, since their is a decent amount of them, I'm planning on gatheirng all four of us to deal with them." Jörmungandr explained.
Naruto: The Sorcerer Supreme
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
"*Can I..."
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Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
Azmuth*
This feat was the foolish act of absorbing not only the DNA, genetic information, genetic code, genetic history, and genetic modification of the aliens in Ben's Omnitrix, but a reasonable amount of energy from the Omnitrix. The Omnitrix is said to be a device created by the Galvans, Azmith to be precise. It is a device that can scan and store at most any DNA, genetic code, genetic history, modify collected genetics, and genetic evolution. The energy stored in this great creation would make modern applied biologists or any scientist at all commit ANY act to get their hands on that device. The energy stored in the Omnitrix is said to be enough to destroy their universe.
The Crazy Adventures of Kevin
TV · Heavenly_Enel