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what is your username on Wattpad I tried looking up the book but could not find it
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Muy buena historia la escritura es buena fluida espero que no se heche a perder como hacen con otros fanfiction donde hacen que el protagonista le haga el delicioso a toda mujer que encuentre siempre lo arruinan asi
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Haven,t read or the synopsis. Looks like it might already be dropped, but for title alone 5 stars all the way. Please make more chapters something this grand must survive!
Good............... Darth Vader the best [img=recomendar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
It is really good so far. I believe it truly is a gem that is in the process of being refined. I can’t wait for more chapters and to see how this story unfolds.
I really like how this story is going the future of Vader and his apprentice seems one worth reading, and watching the denizens Danmachi tremble before Vader is very entertaining.
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The story is very good to read! I'm looking forward to the next chapters with enthusiasm. Thanks for the content author, keep up the good work. I hope Lord Vader is truly powerful.
well I came expecting nothing and I'm happily surprised, keep the excellent job author, and please don't drop it
moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar
i hope you handle the redemption of vader and his trasformation in Anakin well. the story is progressing well,good job.[img=recommend]
A work that deserves 5 🌟. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a amazing story and I would highly recommend it!!!!!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I'm doing 5 stars cause I am interested by this fic, also author got hit by a car, so he gets instant 5 stars fir that Jtsktsjta 8rsiteto
more is needed. Vader I'm danmachi is a great idea as a fanfic. your writing is also good enough to comfortably enjoy it and the story matches up to Canon events so far. Please write more and try to finish it. This fanficnof yours is already very good.
It's an amazing story, I hope you can keep updating constantly.......................................................................................
love it can't wait for more ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Well constructed story so far, some words here and there are misspelled but I understand which words you meant to write. Can't wait to see more.
overall from the three chapters i have read so far, i think this should go a long way. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
The force is strong with this one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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what is your username on Wattpad I tried looking up the book but could not find it
YEEEEESSSSSS- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -— - - - - - - - - - -— - - - - - - -— - - - - - - - - - - - -— - - - - -— - - - - -
Muy buena historia la escritura es buena fluida espero que no se heche a perder como hacen con otros fanfiction donde hacen que el protagonista le haga el delicioso a toda mujer que encuentre siempre lo arruinan asi
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Haven,t read or the synopsis. Looks like it might already be dropped, but for title alone 5 stars all the way. Please make more chapters something this grand must survive!
Good............... Darth Vader the best [img=recomendar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
It is really good so far. I believe it truly is a gem that is in the process of being refined. I can’t wait for more chapters and to see how this story unfolds.
I really like how this story is going the future of Vader and his apprentice seems one worth reading, and watching the denizens Danmachi tremble before Vader is very entertaining.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story is very good to read! I'm looking forward to the next chapters with enthusiasm. Thanks for the content author, keep up the good work. I hope Lord Vader is truly powerful.
well I came expecting nothing and I'm happily surprised, keep the excellent job author, and please don't drop it
moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar
i hope you handle the redemption of vader and his trasformation in Anakin well. the story is progressing well,good job.[img=recommend]
A work that deserves 5 🌟. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a amazing story and I would highly recommend it!!!!!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I'm doing 5 stars cause I am interested by this fic, also author got hit by a car, so he gets instant 5 stars fir that Jtsktsjta 8rsiteto
more is needed. Vader I'm danmachi is a great idea as a fanfic. your writing is also good enough to comfortably enjoy it and the story matches up to Canon events so far. Please write more and try to finish it. This fanficnof yours is already very good.
It's an amazing story, I hope you can keep updating constantly.......................................................................................
love it can't wait for more ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Well constructed story so far, some words here and there are misspelled but I understand which words you meant to write. Can't wait to see more.
overall from the three chapters i have read so far, i think this should go a long way. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
The force is strong with this one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
are you going to make more? ----+++++-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-