I would like it to just continue, but if you plan to rewrite this then I would recommend removing everything that has to do with Draco, Hermione and focusing more on the relationships with the people from the marauders' time like Narcissa!, I remember I was hoping to see a deeper relationship with her. Or Bellatrix, etc…
He also has an older sister named Silvia Ashburn, who is also the reincarnated mother of his past life. He doesn't know whether she has her past memories. But Rayne intends on supporting her. With his knowledge of the plot, it is not too hard for him to get some good resources to support her. And he still has a system. Although it seems to be a simple system without any specific focus, it still gives rewards for the possible quests given. The rewards should be fairly good.
I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.
Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Sovereign
😂😂 Good one
Martial Soul: Blue Silver Grass
I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.
Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Sovereign
So he didn't accept the offer of the strange girl(?) right away. Surprisingly, the strange girl(?) agreed to reincarnate his mother along with him as his family in another world. Although, unlike him, his mother wouldn't have any gifts or preferential treatment of sorts. But Rayne was satisfied. Even without any gifts for his mother, he can support her himself.
I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.
Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Sovereign
'This girl lasted ten minutes longer than the last one,' thought Luke, slightly disappointed. With the remote, he turned off the TV and went to sleep. He wouldn't wake Kat up to kick her out. He wasn't that bastard.
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07
Ever since he experienced his first time with the normie named Emily, Luke wanted to continue to have an active sex life as much as possible. With his fame as a writer and his last name in the world of outcasts, it's not hard to find a girl who wants to sleep with him.
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07
In the dark depths of the forest outside Jericho, in a cave hidden in the undergrowth, a sinister act is taking place.
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07
She herself had been bred to be a weapon. To do naught but kill and kill without asking any questions. She did not accept this fate, she did not want it and she fought for change. Then she gained it, she did not have to be a weapon. She did not need to be the person her mother or father wanted her to be. She chose to walk a path to actively avoid killing, to avoid being a monster.
As Satoru Gojo in the DC Universe
Anime & Comics · Ekisdaiou
I really enjoy the idea and how you are developing the story, it's interesting and unusual. My only complaint is that there are still only a few chapters
DC: BY NIGHT ONE WAY, BY DAY ANOTHER(Young Justice SI-Atlante)(Shazam)
Anime & Comics · Adam007