I'm not one for reading recently released fanfictions but this one got me hooked in the first chapter.
I don't really have any criticism, I just want more.
Happy to see this fic continued ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A X104 though....
Ajax (Base): 1,150,000
Dragon Ball Alternative
Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
The listed power levels isn't what the cast is currently at, just how strong they are at full power
Frieza (Final Form): 120,000,000
Dragon Ball Alternative
Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
Kai is going to go so fa past 'Well Done' they'll call it 'Congratulations'
Author : 💀💀💀 On the scale of 1-10, how cooked is Kai?
More than a Dragon Warrior
Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
Nappa is laying on HIS side, one ball down and begging for death
Vegeta, already furious, snapped at Nappa, "Nappa, shut up! Whose side are you even on?!" He couldn't believe the absurdity of what was happening.
Dragon Ball Alternative
Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
First off, surprised that there aren't more reviews, second, the chapters are a bit short and if you were to combine every second chapter, it would give a longer read.
That was an incredible introduction to the story, well done to you good sir! ---------------------------------------------------------------
I'm really liking this so far, we got cool different races and a wholly human MC, the system is pretty bare bones but still helping a great deal with their development.
Dragon Ball: Enlisted
Anime & Comics · Khaall