Soul Eater in DxD

LV 14

Killler_Queen

It’s alright, but I recommend the author to either use grammarly the free version to help with the writing and to make sure you put “ or something to indicate that somebody is talking, it’s being confusing and annoying. The story itself is fine just writing errors. No hate tho

LV 6

Djabilong

It's bad, but I appreciate the enthusiasm.

LV 12

Sevennamed

This has to be one of the absolute worst Fanfictions I have ever read. Irredeemably horrible grammar and incredibly terrible character development.

LV 2

KainVampir

Well, the first review is written, as usual, by the author. In fact, I decided to post a fanfiction here just for the sake of it. I got bored and started posting fanfiction. As I said, the grammar is very bad, because I am even now writing this review in Google translator. I don't know English at all. Anyway, I hope someone likes my fanfic. Happy reading everyone!

LV 5

ratuzin

author... if you write like this your stories will lose more than half of the readers before they finish the 1st chapter... the paragraphs are too big and it has about 15-20 lines... the best would be to divide and write each paragraph with at most 4 lines if it's not boring to read... it gets even worse if you don't read in the language that is and use googletranlate as I do but because if the paragraph is too long it bugs and doesn't translate everything.

LV 1

NeaCambelt

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LV 4

John_Rex_98

the fewer good stuff and the massive horrible stuffs..... that's alll