Transmigration: Wake Up as an Annoying Concubine

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yumi_0000

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lovely_spring_14

I super love it!! like oh my gosh!! the characters interactions with each other are so interesting, mc is nice but knows how to scheme but at the same time he's so adorably innocent like! like!

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E_M_3

Really good and cute novel! Would definitely recommend as a short and sweet read. I hope the author writes more stories in the future!!! ☺😍🙏

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Axcella_Zed_3744

Very fulfilling story with a lot of drama action love scenes passion.Cheering on the side for the characters. This was a marathon reading . Worth the extra money spent on it.

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Claudia_Nunez

So far the story is interesting, I do like how the main character doesn't immediately fall in love however it makes it seem like he won't ever fall in love with the king, which is not an ideal romance story. Gets confusing when he suddenly starts having feelings for him even if it's mostly sympathy. It's a good concept when done right, but it is a difficult one to achieve. Basically a bland story with predictable plot, but interesting nonetheless.

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Okami_Aquila

Ah, I was going to wait until I've read the entire book, but I can barely get past chapter 3 without some critiques. Proper address of the servants and masters are a given, this is a period piece set in ancient China even though I haven't seen a dynasty mentioned still the manner in which the people speak is off putting. Have you ever watched or read a Chinese period novel or drama? It's a great story and plot but the voice I get from it is 'modern American'. Please consider revisions if you haven't already and you might benefit from reading 'From Ceo to Concubine' by Queeniecat on here bc that is a well written Ye Dynasty transmigration piece.

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Priyanshi_Rajput_0389

first ever review after reading dozans of novel it's a masterpiece 😍🤩 no nonsense or extra drama 🥳🥳 it's just a cute little story one should definitely read ☺️☺️😉 ohh my gosh I read it 2-3 times already 🥰 dear author waiting for more novel like this 🥳🥳😘😘

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Jenif_Lee

The language was kind of lacking, but it was good overall 🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕

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Ahsodeska29

The storyline and character development were great and you can actuslly feel the feelings of the characters. I reslly enjoyed reading your novel. However, frequent grammar mistakes have become tripping points or stumbling blocks that hinder your reader from following your flow of your story. May I suggest that you get a native English speaker to help you edit this. So that your English reader will totally enjoy your story without constantly correcting the grammar or idiom usage in some of your paragraphs. Keep on writing. You have potential. Let your creativity and imagination flow. I anticipate your next novel. Please note : Your English translator of your novel should not be your English language editor of your work. This will ensure a better quality and a steadier reading flow. Good Luck and Happy Writing!

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Lioreriol

There were certain tropes that, I feel, weren't properly explored, most being left forgotten. Some things worked out miraculously, with almost no effort, understandable if there was a prophet or a system spilling all the secrets and answers, but that was not the case. At least the protagonists were distracting enough for me to ignore most of the mistakes.

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DaoistDK1WE7

SAUR GOOD I NEED NORE ARGHHHHHHI LOVE THEM BABIES WUWUUUU

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Noo_Min

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Noo_Min

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Twilight_Reader

I've read this multiple times, and each time I have a hard time putting it down once I start it.

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Reicicus

just finished. had so much fun reading it, thank you for your hard work dear author! hope to read more works! I liked the characters very much, the story is interesting too, loved the general and his little wife too 😏 it is a pity it ended so soon 😅

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Noo_Min

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RajahMujer

i liked it. i think the author would benefit from a beta reader. otherwise the story and characters are great. :)