Seduce the hero's mother (GL)

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RHEI

Been waiting for a new update on Webtoon (kelan ka pala mag update sa Webtoon author?)

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AnonReviewer

Love it, love the webtoon as well. Just wish the translation was localized a bit more, sometimes gendered pronouns are used for inanimate objects and some turns of phrase send me to google for context.

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Great read and fantastic story telling up until chapter 48, MC suddenly becomes incredibly stupid, through out the first volume MC changes her future and recognises it, not only that she makes promises to never betray FL and shows to be developing feelings for FL, however 3 chapters later after seeing a new future on her current path she betrays FL even though she knows why the future she saw happened. MC should have instead allied her and FL houses, and used the first princes self destruction to boost second princes power and support, so when the the first prince comes into power (if he still could at that point as he should be a national embarrassment at this point) his demand for MC to marry him will have no support from his supporters as they would deem hostile action against MC’s family political suicide at best. I’m sorry to say that I dropped this book due to actions of MC which I find incomprehensible. But I wish the author the best for the book’s future

Best isekai I've ever read, love the charaters (except phillipe), love the world they are in, love that the main charater doesn't know what's happening despite reading the source material cause I hate them in isekais.

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Adalfarus

A Compelling Novel with Missed Opportunities in Story Development The novel under review, set in a vividly imagined medieval world, presents a gripping storyline and well-developed characters that make for an overall enjoyable reading experience. However, it is not without its flaws. The story development takes an unfortunate turn at the end of the first volume, as pivotal decisions made by the author on behalf of the characters seem to lack coherence and emotional resonance. One such decision involves the treatment of Rachel, a crucial character in the narrative. The choice to abandon her and label her as a monster, as dictated by the author, is not only heart-wrenching but also conflicts with the promise made to her and her father. This betrayal not only shatters Rachel's trust but also seems to be an unnecessary plot device that detracts from the emotional impact of the story. An alternative path that the protagonist could have considered would have been to take Rachel with them when escaping from the clutches of the crown prince. This course of action might have prevented the devastating consequences that followed, such as Rachel losing one of her flower petals and a significant amount of life. Additionally, the choice to betray Rachel has far-reaching implications, as it strains the relationship between two influential families and potentially the imperial family as well. The King might choose to side with Leriana's father, a close friend. This alliance is likely to start a feud with Rachel's father over the broken promise, further intensifying the conflict surrounding their families, which could lead to much bloodshed, as they control half the military of the empire. While the novel's overall quality is commendable, the storyline at the end of the first volume, and subsequently all volumes thereafter, could have benefitted from more thoughtful development by the author. By exploring alternative paths for the characters and maintaining consistency in their actions, the narrative would have been more engaging and emotionally satisfying. Nonetheless, readers who appreciate intricate plotlines and rich character development will still find much to enjoy in this fascinating tale. The novel leaves us questioning the author's choices, but eager to see how the story unfolds in subsequent volumes. Total score 3.4, because all criteria except story development are good. Suggested Revision: A simple solution to address this issue could be to alter the protagonist's actions towards Rachel. Instead of explicitly calling her a monster, the protagonist could choose to leave without saying anything. As a result, the events surrounding the loss of Rachel's flower petal could unfold differently. For instance, Rachel might feel betrayed because the protagonist left without an explanation, or someone else could spread lies about the protagonist's reasons for leaving, leading to a more reasonable portrayal of the protagonist's actions. This adjustment could strengthen the emotional resonance of the story and maintain the protagonist's integrity.

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Prothanis

I was enjoying the read up until chapter 48, although I was sure MC was mentally retarted long before that, but i still enjoyed it and was anticipating how the story will further unfold. Only to be hit in the face with a poorly thought out ‘twist’. This story could have been something great. One of the most disappointing reads thus far, mostly because I was actually looking forward for what lay ahead. Anyway, I don’t recommend reading this and wasting your time like I did.

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Unknownisthetruth

Author you really need a proofread for this good novel. She to he, herself to himself. Other than the part of proofreading the novel is very good Author please read the comment once a while and edit the problem that comments are saying. Please update it after solving the issues.

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Yuri_is_Life

Who should read and pay for this work? Only those who are in ABSOLUTE despair to read completed Yuri novel, despite its poor quality. 1) It is worth saying right away that the author has absolutely no respect for readers. She obviously does not know English, so she writes in her native language and then uses an online translator. This is not a problem in general, many people do it... But author did not even bother to correct the basic pronouns errors. This is not only disrespectful to readers, but also just stupid!!! Many who could potentially buy this just drop it halfway!!! 2) Our heroine, Leriane, is the most hated character in this story (I would even say on the whole webnovell). She's dumb, naive and useless (but everyone loves her). She's the kind of person who doesn't deserve a happy ending. There was a scene in the book when Leriane was being held hostage and the maids wanted to disfigure her face. My reaction: fair, maybe it will teach her something!!! 3) The story could have been more or less Ok if the author had adhered to the spirit of the first volume. Then it seemed that this was a typical Mary Sue story with dense MC and comedic undertone. But then the author decided that she wanted to write a serious story with all sorts of betrayals, hidden villains, visions of the future and so on... But you can't just WANT to write a masterpiece. That requires talent or a hard work... 4) Most of the story we have a one-sided romance. For most of the story, Leriane feels asexual-aromantic and only at the end she begin to be more proactive. If you are one of those who are satisfied with the fact that high-quality mutual yuri will only be at the end, then Ok. But I prefer that the main couple become an official at least in the middle of the story. If not, then there must be at least passion and tension between them. And I'm not talking about smut. But at least something. But alas. Dense asexual-aromantic, remember?

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OhAri

I’ m sorry but this story is really mid . The beginning of the story was pretty good so I bought the rest of thr chapters legit it was so boring to read , the pacing is really slow overall the story isn’t bad but it’ no where good in my opinion

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DaoistxFOWIF

I’ll say one thing, I’ve never spent any amount of funds towards reading a novel, after reading up to chapter 53, this novel has overtaken me so much emotionally and mentally, I immediately spent any funds necessary in order to unlock it in its entirety for me to read. One of the best novels I’ve read in quite a bit of time. Keep up the good work, this novel is magnificent in every aspect! [img=update]

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Ficklepickle783

So read a little bit ahead on the chapter titles I am some of the beginnings of those chapters and boy when the main character describes in that first chapter on how the novel the East Chi is based on that she read took on a different path that no one expected in such well that is very very true. Spoilers ahead of you don’t want to know So when main character leaves off with the prince, it’s two different country as we know, but in the time she somehow gets to where the Windsors are, and during the time she has to break something off her connection to Rachel and her family and Miguel manners first kind of is that that whole relationship development with Rachel is gone because author decides to give her a romance with the common girl. My opinion, it feels like the author decided to do the truth, because she didn’t know how to write continuously with Rachel as the main love while getting to some of the different plot points in her book, such as meeting the Windsors, even though they’re the enemies of her, Rachel’s family, and I guess this is what the illusion alluded to twists and plots the most Raiders don’t take one mentioning the sky world book that the main character fell into

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Iga_Adamus

So far best book i've read :) Very interesting world and characters.

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THE_4TH

cant wait for more. we will all be waiting

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Fu_Hua_

Good ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Hello_Hi_Goodbye

Ok, I am still stuck at the synopsis. The title "Seduce the hero's mother" implies that the MC's goal is to seduce the hero's mother. The first line "I am reborn as a minor character and the mother of the main character, the deposed ruler Leriana Ashford." says, MC is the hero's mother. This line" Queen Leriane faces a bleak end. According to the plot, my heroine will sacrifice her life during the rebellion to save her children." implies heroine= Queen Leriane. And this line "Except she won't! Dying at twenty-seven is too soon for me and I'm going to change the tragic plot of this novella." implies, heroine= Queen Leriane= MC. So, MC goal is to seduce the hero's mother, while being the hero's mother and also being the hero's wife? I think I got that right... Pls help me out, I'm kinda bad at english but this doesn't make sense to me at all....

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Satsuyo_Kizumamono

I love it. one of the best yuri novels I've ever read.

I will not read past volume 1. However volume 1 as a self contained story (ignoring the last few chapters) was so good and genuinely funny that I still have to give high praise.

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R_H_69

Best book I read so far. The characters….I would die of them the fact that I cried and laughed it was a like being in an emotionl rollercoaster. Love it 10/10 every thing was perfect and I made like 3 accounts just to finish it as fast as possible.

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CosmoMoon

This book here is so good that if I had money I would have bought it but I am broke so if you have money read this all the way and you will have a great time I have never wrote something so lone in my life but for this book and many others I will do so So if you like yuri and you see me writing a review then it is going to be good thank you for reading this but you should read the void

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cozyatbed

simply finger licking good 👍🏻[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]