Peace offering to the cursed prince

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉 ADVICE I wanted to tell that few edits has to made. The typos not the grammar. You have fluid narration for me but the typos were the dilemma of its quality. Few edits has to be made for my advice. Capital letters, punctuations. Dialogues not starting with a capital letter and not ending with a comma or period. Welp, this is a wonderful story so I want it to be edited as I like it as a reader. It was normal to see these problems just when I started. But I overcome it, so you can do it too! 🙏 😉 Peace ✌️

LV 10

MizA

I was recommended this story and in spite of a few chapters available, you will discover it's a lovely tale and the author has a strong narrator voice. It's easy to overlook some typos and immerse yourself in the introduction of a promising story. It starts with a princess having her destiny turned upside down by an arranged marriage! I'm curious to discover what is the prince's curse! It gets more interesting as the chapters go! Good luck author!

LV 15

Lalalilih

I loved the plot twist of this novel. It has unexpected storyline and characters. Definitely has huge potential for more exciting story along the way. I am waiting for the updates everyday.

LV 13

kpthe1

This book has an interesting plotline. Though there are only few chapters when I'm reading this, I can already see a potentially big romance novel. There are still some spelling mistakes but with a general proof reading can rectify them. Overall, it's an excellent book with very immersive story.

LV 4

MayDreamer

This is my honest review, First Author your novel is a chefs kiss, it really interesting and has a unique plot, the story goes with flow and the description are wonderful. ( Don't mind me I just love the author whose description are clear) And tbou there were some grammatical and punctuation mistakes here and there. still no worries ( I do that too 😅) It will be better with time. And keep writing, your novel is just great!!

LV 4

nova_bei1702

The story is very engaging and entertaining. I literally read through from chapter 1 to 270 in 3 days. If you can overlook the grammatical errors, this book is well worth the time.

LV 1

Kikiyobear

I mean what does this book not have? Intriguing characters, evil step-mother of the west. I know she liked the king before he died. No one can tell me she didn't. ANyways lovely writing. Can't wait for more.

LV 15

CassieT

I am on chapter 333. I am enjoying the story and you will too if you can overlook the grammatical errors. Then again, they're not grammatical errors, the entirely wrong word is used. It's like the words were chosen based off of phonetics not meaning. You will have a gist of what the author is saying so you're able to follow along and keep reading. Despite that, I highly recommend reading this novel. You will not be disappointed .

LV 14

Candie_Lovejoy

I really loved this story. The characters and the storyline were excellent and well developed. I enjoyed the relationship between the main characters the most. The only thing that I would recommend is to have someone proofread the chapters. The grammar and spelling were often times frustrating and would take away from enjoying the story fully.

You had me after I read the first chapter! I am NOT a fan of the step-monster. Her father is a wimp. And Princess Ellen is a hero! I'm looking forward to more chapters

LV 2

Samcrowned00

This book is so interesting. I think I reviewed it once, here I am do so again. The book cover is enough to lure one to read this book and in the opening of this book has the diction right for this book. Great work author. Good work

LV 1

ihatepower_45

I'm curious about what place this is set in. minus that small issue I like the story so far. the main character is a little too side line but with time it will change.

LV 4

books_n_coffee

this is a cute story. A few tweaks on the baddie who's really a goodie and the poor gal sacrificed by her parents to become his wife. The problem is the writing: the translator cannot spell. hence there are traces instead of truces and the palaces have no servants but are teaming with savants, not to mention the princes who defile their parents rather than defy them. honestly, in two minutes an English speaker could turn this into a brilliant read. I'm only at ch 100 but I'll do it for free!

LV 3

PriyaRawat

fl and ml both r amazing 😍 nice couple.... cunning nd have leadership qualities.... avalo live long ...[img=coins][img=fp] I also loved the character of sebastian's mom what a lady i would love to read a book about her nd prince edward love story ....

LV 2

Blackpaint

A story of great potential. The first few chapters already introduced me to immersing content. The characters are well crafted and the pace is just great. Hoping for a good result for this book.

LV 1

Brian_Hanes_117

Phenomenal story with great characters and dialogue. There are a few minor grammar mistakes here and there. I would also like to see a bit more description about how the characters look. I'd also like a bit more description about what the environment looks like. What the palace looks like. How the nobles dress. Things like that and what the weather is like. I want to feel like I'm there. But anyway, I look forward to seeing what happens next. The African story and the cultural context is intriguing.

LV 2

Epyonnn

Great read! I quite liked the characters and the solid introduction to the world. Although, there were quite a lot of words that weren't capitalized. It's not too big of an issue, though, because it doesn't disrupt the flow of the story. Good stuff so far. Keep up the good work!

LV 2

Rudia_Estelle

Interesting characters and that narritive plot line is really awesome! I really love that smooth story telling style of yours! Hope to get more of these chapters! Fighting!!

LV 1

JustLikeWriting777

I find the story quite addicting. The plot can easily lure a reader in and so can the entire story of course. I find the characters very intriguing and mysterious and I am curious to know what will happen to them in the future. Overall, i see potential in this story and will definitely keep on reading! count me as a fan!

LV 2

meixiaolian

The author hooked me with the emotions that the author put on the characters. A good author could make their readers felt the characters and the author did it. I read no errors from the author's writing. I can sense that the author really did a great job by polishing the chapters. Readers would be hooked just by reading the prologue. Give this a read!