Fire Mage

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Ak02

Shameless Author here. This is my second book and I wrote novel mainly to improve my writing skills. If you find it interesting, comment or give me a honest review. It will be very helpful to me. That's it guys, have fun reading!

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RAARguin

End of Volume 1 review: Both setting and world building are intriguing and told in a way that blends in the story. Slowly building up everything along the plot and not impeding the flow of the storytelling. The plot is well thought and well planned from the beginning to end. So far the whole volume is cohesive and not episodic. Every detail is connected and not wasted. Characters are always thinking, plotting and motivated in each of their own. They don't feel like being there just to prove that the MC is awesome. You can feel that each of them have their own story to tell. They have their own purpose and their actions tell you who they are. MC's character, background and motivations are well established. He isn't bumbling around doing stuff just because. He is the calculative and plotting type MC and not a typical "goody two shoes trust everyone has a good side" MC. He learns to fight in the new power system and doesn't really defeat higher tier opponents through brute force. In a way the power tier system is maintained and he doesn't defeat enemy just because of system. The system helps him grow stronger faster than normal but so far that's it. Great web novel so far.

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Easy_Tiger

This is great entertainment. Uses the system to great effect without relying on it too much to structure the story like so many other web fictions out there. Really digging the story so far. It's been action-packed and exciting from the very first chapter. Love how the protagonist is just thrown right into the drama from the start and must make sense of his world alongside the reader as the story progresses. Top quality web fiction right here with a fast-paced story and great action scenes. Everyone should get a piece of this!

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Electron

This is my second comment about this novel. Just finished Volume 1. It is easily one of the top novels in the original section. You can feel the LOTM influence especially during the scenes where MC is thinking a lot. But, at the same time only real talent can let you write this. This story develops in it's own way and I'm so happy for that.

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Last_Lost

Finally a fire mage not some space, time, dream or dragon tired of this kind of novels. Great book really enjoying reading the story. Also will author introduce romance in the story ? Great work author !

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algrife93

This is an updated review after reading 60 chapters, Previously i felt the MC stupid for focusing on subclass as i believed it was a bad investment, But thankfully the mc did change and has now focused more on becoming stronger(not as much as i want but good enough for now), Considering the mc situation ill say his choices weren’t too bad(can’t expect him to be smart from the get go i suppose), Although i still don’t like trickster/disguiser path as i dont like cheap tricks and prefer frontal battle where you simply crush and dominate your enemies, But thats just an opinion and i like that the mc started to slowly focus on his main occupation (although ill still say he could be much stronger if he learns how to grind exp) anyway the story is going in a good direction at the moment, hopefully the mc keeps on his path and doesn’t become a goody two shoes self sacrificing selfless hero as i already have a phobia from these types of dense stupid MC’s( so far the NC has shown no signs whatsover that he will follow that crazy path thankfully) Anyway good luck author I’ll Follow this story(occasionally ill give comments, i only give comments when im annoyed by the mc or a lead character, i cant help myself sometimes to rant whenever the mc makes a choice contrary to what i believe is a better choice and so it’s probably often,,,) Anyway thanks for reading my lenthy unobstructive review. Sorry for writing a review that is more of an opinion than a proper review.

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newthings

5 stars because of lord of mysteries vibe! ///////////..............////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////.........................//////////////////////

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Electron

Really good novel. I love the flow. You could also see some of LOTM vibes in parts of the story. The fights are awesome, written really well. I should mention even though you get the vibes you do get other original aspects as well. However, it's a system novel at the end of the day so it will be used as a crutch imo. Otherwise why even have the thing.

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Casper_Mist

one of the best novel in this app for me .... ......................................... .......... ............. ......... ..... . .... ..

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lordseven

in one word amazing. one of the rare novels that gets better and better as times goes on and the ONLY novel that makes me spend real money on this website. if you liked lord of the mysteries, you might like this even better since it's slightly more fast paced. I remember having things to nitpick about in the first 100 chapters, but it has been an amazing ride where the only thing I look forward to now is new chapters daily. kudos author

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Vistarion

It's a copy of Lord of mysteries, but author used RPG class system fused with mystic. It's original and interesting idea. The problem is author is not doing it properly, it don't feel like 1world it feels like 2world fused forcefully. The so called mystery in this novel don't feel like mystery, its more like author is throwing a lot of unknown characters at the reader and then solve them one by one(and the concept of numbered artifact is 100% copy of LoM). So I would call it confusing characters rather than mystery plot. I hope author don't take it wrong way. I like it! But I just wish it could be better so I can love it. (I hope novel with perfect fusion of RPG and Mystic of LoM happens sooner or later).

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lordseven

the story is great and very entertaining. it has a strong "Lord of the mysteries" vibe so if you are a fan, this book will be right in your alley. characters are well designed and not shallow. Plot is well thought and complex. The only con is the English which is not perfect, otherwise this would deserve a 5/5.

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lludba

lord of the mysteries inspired so the background is good waiting to see how it goes prety good so far.

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Arlemit

Really great job! The author created a really good story and character! I really like MC and the world he got into.

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Sculp

Author-san I loved your first work and I will ask something about this novel. Will there be a romance in it? Good work keep it up author 🙏👍

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sin_abysswatcher

I don't know who you are or where you are but out of manyyy webnovels that I have read this one is piece of art the story Is awesome and the sense of mystery and interconnectivity of characters it's fabulous

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QueenRani6

I am not one to be intrigued by game worlds or those stuff but the way you wrote this book was really simple and easy to understand . You have a vivid imagination of what you are writing and you display it very well. You also have the tendency to repeat words like in chapter 1, you kept in repeating MIND whereas you can interchange with the synonyms of mind. And this genre is not fantasy, it should sci-fi or another.

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Roronoazoro

A good premise. Need more chappies! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤