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Second Awakening?
A System?
Having lost the battle of the Dark Catastrophe to the demons—spawns of the Dark Gods— humanity is given a chance at making things right once again.
Born as a twin into a family of high ranking talent awakeners, Damien Terrace is met with trouble when it is his turn to perform the ritual. After awakening the E-Rank Summoner talent, Damien loses everything to his twin.
Exiled by his father to perish away from them, Damien goes through a second awakening that changes the play field for him.
Ding!
[The God of Summons is furious and has blessed you with a system!]
[You have fused with the Mythics Summoning System—A system that only allows you to summon mythical beasts!]
[Obtain nineteen Magic Essence Cores to boost your core to the next level!]
[Slay 200 more demons to unlock another summon!]
Damien's only option is to evolve!
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A/N: I'd be happy to get feedback as this is my first book. This will show that I actually have readers. Thanks.
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เขียนรีวิวHello dear readers, it is I, the author. After having written so far, I feel llike I can finally leave a review(shamelessly hehehe...) I just want to say the book's world background, character design, story develop, and writing quality are all great, although this is my first webnovel, I really writing it just as much as you enjoy reading it. I'm going to write more and y'all are going to be reading more. I'm working on improving certain aspects like writing quality and update stability. Regardless, it's a great read so please, TRY IT OUT!!
The story is good, it starts off a bit slow but around chapter 10 it starts to kick it up. The reason I say writing is low, is the author needs to use spell check or proof read the work. I’m 48 chapters in and there is so many spelling/grammar issues that takes me a second to decipher their intentions. They also have several areas where they forget what was mention in last chapter or even at beginning of current chapter making contradictory statements, for example they mention the MC was unconscious for nearly 24 hours and half a chapter later that 24 hours has been changed to an hour. All in all it’s a good read, just need to take some time and decipher the author’s intentions for the story. Hopefully this will be seen by author and they can adjust some in the future as it is a great story so far and I want to see it improve and continue.
first off according to author this world has a war every 20 years after 3 years of red skies for at least 3 generations. yet they act like this has never happened before in their preparing even with the speeding up. why wouldnt ur soldiers already have special training? why wait until last minute. next the family thing. so he gets killed off by his fathers decree for his brothers crime. thats what happened. yet the mother is still kissing this dude? without any comment either by author to explain the reasoning. she went from trying to fight him to lets have an anniversary party a few months after u killed our son. this could be a good book but also the forest arc and him staying out there without trying to get out is crazy especially when he could leave continent
I do not care for Damon or ashbourne, so why do they have more chapters than our MC?? The author dug himself a hole by putting the MC alone in the woods, so he has no one to talk to. This means you will need to skip atleast 30 chapters to get back to the MC. Do not read this story and if you do, wait until plenty has been released because this is the ultimate slow burn.
The MC might aswell not be the MC all he does is stay in the forrest and everyone else is the getting the MC treatment he's is the support character at this point this is a waste of potential
Like the idea of the story but the shit writing skills makes it unbearable to read as im spending more time processing what ur tryna say hope u can fix up the gramma as rn its unbearable
The story is good, the plot is good, the world development is also good...... but may I know who the actual mc is? It feels like the novel's own mc is shadowed by the side characters, to the point it frustrates me. I totally liked the story but because of this single thing, this novel ain't cup of my tea...
I hope that it's not those conquering, and too much overpowered mc from the start of the story, because those things are getting boring. but either way, i like this one
i like the power system i like the main character and his powers. the novel is quite good besides the interactions in the Terrace family and the reason the head send the mc to his death, it's abysmally bad like come on the head of the family sent the mc to his death because he felt threatened by him by the way his talent is the lowest it can be E-rank, and supposedly the mc's mother and uncle love him a lot, but i don't see it, the mother she is she doesn't go to save him despite being really strong sometimes she hates the mc's father because he sent him to his death and most of the time she doesn't care about it. i don't know what to say anymore, i tried to read it i really did but every time the interactions happen I'm turned off like it's so inconsistent like how could you claim to love your son/nephew and do shit about him. bye
Alright. Before I get into the review, I want to speak on how long I subtly and directly put off reading this novel because of the other reviews. About 3 weeks ago I believe is when I first added this to my library, but the reviews put me off. During this time, naturally I read many other novels, and reviewed even more. Today I decided that I would give this novel a chance, and what do you know? The negative reviews have to be created by people with a waterlogged brain. ColumbusOhio raises complaints about the lack of special training of units despite knowing the war is coming and the treatment of the MC’s mother toward his father despite what happened (will try not to spoil). The first part is simply answered with: Resources. They don’t have an infinite holy grail to raise people. The next is simply human greed. Humans are always shitty, you can count on that, even during times of near-war. As for his mother; this is just….men who have power tend to always treat women poorly. Even in our world this is true throughout history. It’s expected that a woman still performs her “duty” even if the father cuts down his son and eats his heart. Although the father is not to that point, that’s just the expectations of women. Learn and be better idk. Sea_detective_85 and DJ_Titus have nearly identical complaints and they are the primary reason I put off reading this novel for so long, and they, in my opinion, severely undermine and give awful reviews. Yes, the MC is in a forest for a long time. No, he can’t “just leave the continent” you seem to have not paid attention or underestimate the problem of leaving the forest. No the brother is not “basically the MC”. I’ve read past when he gets out of the forest, and we saw plenty of Damien, Damon, and overarching events. I usually also dislike time spent away from the MC, but I found it was done pretty well here. It’s incredibly common for MCs to go on training arcs where they have no one to talk to, yet it’s suddenly a problem here? Also, everyone else is getting the MC treatment? Genuinely I’d like to say some very unkind words towards this person’s intelligence. The MC in the current chapter of where I am has dwarfed his younger brother and everyone I have met, except for the obvious older generation. Slight spoiler; Damon has slayed 50ish monsters, with the majority being mana beasts and demons accounting for 12 I think. Damien has killed well over a thousand of both at this point. Academies are good and all, but flowers grown in greenhouses don’t always last in the wild. My only real complaint is that there are some spelling typos within the novel which I can easily read past, and that i’m running out of chapters :(
this story focuses on way to many people. you start getting into one part then author leaves the person to focus on someone else. mc does not have any intelligence, the system is useless, mc father is a piece of trash, but everyone respects him and treats him the same. the author wants to tell 12 stories at the same time and it ruins the story. after chapter 67 the story doesnt focus on mc for 33 chapters then still jumps around. i tried only reading the chapters where i saw mc name at in the first couple paragraphs and it is mostly him getting beat up and slime coming to the rescue. my biggest issue is that the father gets too many chapters focusing on him. the shitty father gets more chapters than mc.
The story got better. Of the complaints, the chapters are short. From wishes, I would like the story to focus more on the main character. Sometimes there are chapters with a plot that don't affect the main plot at all.
I have enjoyed the story so far but there is one thing that constantly pulls me out of the immersion. "Spoilers" His father's willingness to kill him after only two weeks because his little brother didn't adapt to be the heir instantly and went against his will. No other forms of punishment or exile just have him killed. Then the lukewarm response from everyone when they find out what happened. "You possibly murdered your son and stole his abilities for the other son how dare you! No, I just had him killed by leaving him to die. Oh, that's okay then." "My poor son is dead, but after blowing up at my husband once, I still miss my son but get all lovey dovey on my husband whenever I see him. Even if you say he is a family leader who has to be strict to protect humanity, the fact that not a single character seems to more than mildly disagrees with him and even reveres him just feels jarring.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์In this novel Story the Mc Pet is so strong💪 and more training of it self will become op.[img=strong]
as a fan of summoning novels , this is honestly great. The writing = impeccable, the story is very interesting and i havent found a single chapter where i was bored , the potential stuff with the summon irritated me a little considering the name but the wolf is still strong asf so there isn't much problem with it. There are alot of twins in this novel though... I see that harem tag , GIVE THE MC TWIN BADDIES NOW !!!
The novel starts strong and builds a solid foundation... Only to build the story in a completely different area. Interesting premise and writing style. The author focuses on the 2 brother's storline utilizing the different circumstances of each to build the world and write the lore. The contrast is further used to go from micro to macro and from personal to political. Great usage and contrast. The concept is similar to RR Martin's Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) though this one is a web novel version and isnt as professionally done. Thats it for the good parts of this novel. Where this novel falls short is on focus and continuity. The set up at the start was great and would have been interesting if there was a follow through. The abandonment and trechery with lies should have had more impact on the characters but apart for setting there doesnt seem to be much effect on their personalities and character development. 1 MC was sentenced to death and seems to quickly recover and is too trusting too fast with people, there seems to be little to no trauma considering all that abuse and injustice. Its almost the same with the 2nd MC with everything being resolved by his bilief and hope that his brother survived and the flimsy and simple justification of 'would you have allowed it' reasoning for filicide (parent killing their child). Then theres the setting, sending a child to an academy and underutilizing the theme. The academy setting felt wasted and unnecessary quickly followed by politics meetings to arrange meeting. The forest of death quickly became the forest of looting and levelling up and all the built up tension was lost. In short the author planted too many seeds too early resulting in what feels like forgettable chapters and mini arcs. The beasts are unique from each other but familiar in lore which is the result of good choices from the author. Theres personality with each one but not enough that it fills the novel excessively. The author also doesnt fall into the temptation of making them too overpowered or pulling out world breaking mythical beasts left and right. This novel has great potential and I am invested in reading further in hopes of it getting better. Planning for main and subplots and relating that to character development definitely needs work however the writing style and world building leaves enough room to recover. The strengths definitely make up for the foils.
I truly did enjoy a large amount of the current chapters but I only really enjoyed a lot of the parts in the forest and after I wasn’t ever interested enough in the family lords to warrant so many chapters given to them for what amounts to very little right now. Don’t get me wrong I see the importance of both world building and trying to understand more of the world but I would rather see that through the lens of A singular main lead or 2 max not the 3 the author seems to have gone with. If you wish to read this story be prepared to skip around a bit of the filler when you get bored and the 30 chapter gap where we see none of our MC at all. For those that enjoy the above however I do highly recommend the book as it does have appeal for your interests.
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Pretty good I like supporting new writings and this one has a lot of potential.