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Roran A retired Marine Scout Sniper finds a VR system that gives him a second life in the Walking Dead world. Follow Roran on his rise to be an Apocalyptic Overlord. (This is my first time writing a story, I will appreciate any advise or criticism. Also I do not own the cover picture, if you're the owner and want it taken down just tell me.)
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Good start not rushed I hope the author plans ahead and doesn’t ruin the story, so far this is an interesting idea I hope the author can bring the best out of it.
Nine fucking chapters without quotation marks, you don't know when they are talking it's annoying as ****. PM me when you fix this and I'll remove this bad review. I don't know why you thought it was a good idea to not put some form of sign to show the reader when the characters are talking.
Dropped on chapter 6. The first nine chapters, quotation marks are used LITERALLY twice... And it's only when people are thinking two 5 word sentences... He doesn't even use a ',(,[,{,:. Literally anything that can differentiate the narration that tells us what happened and the dialogue. The only thing you will get is (character name) after some long a$$ dialogue and narration literally touching the dialogue sometimes. So its impossible to confirm if it's dialogue unless you skip to the end of it to read the name of the character talking. Author said that he's going to change it starting on chapter 9, but since he didn't understand how quotation marks are supposed to be used until he got bombarded in the comments, I don't trust him to use them right moving forward. Author, reply to me if you ever decide to fix the earlier chapters and I will delete my review, try the story again, and at the very least give ste story a one star better review
Very well written and the plot is really well thought out too. I was hesitant to read this at first since it's walking dead and system, thinking it would be boring but when I tried it, I couldn't help but wanting more. I recommend trying this fanfic.
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As a reader keep commenting: QUOTATIONS MARKS!!! Is it so hard to put those little things that allow the reader to know the difference between narrative and speech? Really? A heavy construction company needing a compound for employees and their families? Why not just a technological research company, with the compound for privacy and secrecy? The headhunting of the others main characters is too obvious. They can be recruited when the outbreak is impossible to hide. He should have focused on really important people: doctor, biologist, virologist, engineers, mechanics, programmers, security.
This might be the best fanfiction so far, yes it doesn't have many chapters. But give it a few weeks and this novel will be in the top, thank you author for giving me something to enjoy, hope for more enjoyable chapters further ahead.
The writing quality is good, storyline is interesting, characters are well thought out and the inclusion of Mutated zombies is a great twist. Only chapter updates is slow but with Covid 19 and everything happening right now it is understandable and forgivable. Thank you for writing this I am enjoying it quite a bit. Stay safe and hope to read the next chapter soon.
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Its a great story and idea worth the read. However, it is not for me. I was expecting from the description the mc being a vet sniper with elements of vr in the walking dead. Didnt like him taking over the character rick. I think I wouldn't have minded the transferring part if he was his own character in the walking dead not taking over one of the mc of that world. If this makes sense ?
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So far so good. Would like to see more on how the stats of the mc evolve through the story though. Only 11 chapters out so far, but as long as you read them you will be wanting more.
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Hey this is the author here. Figured I would write a shameless review. Please give my story a shot. It has a slow start but it is going to pick up in a few chapters. And I plan on having alot of action and some sexy stuffs too. Anyways thanks for reading. Hope you like it.