Vegeta in MHA!

LV 4

MoldyGuacamole

MC: wished to be Vegeta Also MC: wished to be more handsome (looks like Vegito) and taller. Lol if you're gonna make him look like Vegito, then might as well make him actually Vegito, it would have been a better wish overall. No need to pretend that you want to be Vegeta if you're gonna alter him this much.

LV 2

Qoh

I’m sorry author but this is not my sip of tea... I’ve read too many stories where the mc is an orphan like change it up once in awhile also I’ve seen hella stories where the mc always gets adopted by momo’s family? Like the family is overrated bro be original man like make him be adopted as bakugo’s brother or something man just be different!

LV 12

Vassago

it's a saiyan with shadow clones. but the power levels are a bit screw balled because it took him until the age of 6 to get 100 power level and in general alsaiyans are born with that level of power if not more so I mean goku's being the exception at 6 or so at birth

LV 12

WiLeYBiGhEaD

This novel is rather messy. The story jumps from event to event without any meaningful character building in a story that borrows heavely from other common fanfic ideas. While using some of these ideas is not bad as in a fanfic they can make sense(i.e. the momo family mha stuff and many others). But without any additional story to go with it, everything here just feels empty and like i have read it before many times in other works. The power scalling is also all over the place and the author has recently decided to add monsterverse and gods and even more to the world because they made the mc op but refuse to add anything to the story but training/Power increases/fight scenes/adding harem members who fell in love in 2 chapters. I.e. the author just noted he will be killing the mc so he can experience character growth which is unnecessary. Overall, it is unorganized, unoriginal, and seems to be going in the wrong direction. I think a different setting may have suited this writing style better such as the dragonball universe, but the lack of character development outside or power increases or tempering arrogance is a big issue.

LV 11

SalsitaHabanera2k

just by having a huge harem, I give you 5 stars, lmfao [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 3

richy_ket

Goku could literaly destroy the moon at age 7 (and he did), and he grew up with a weaker power level then Vageta. The only reason why he defeated Vageta in the anime was becuase he used kio-ken which was tuaght to him by Master Roshi. And your telling me his power level is bareley fucking 100 after so long??? You might as well titled it Krillin in MHA bruh. 5 stars anyways becuase I understand in a story telling stand point you cannot make him op. But still as a DB, DBZ fan I am greatly dissapointed.

LV 2

Gogeta_Blue_123

I mean, it’s not terrible. It’s right there in the middle of the deep dark end of webnovel. And like at least make the character make sense. He wants to be vegeta but want to look like vegito, that doesn’t comprehend with me.

LV 4

Zeroland_Guide

that some sit right there, writing for the sake of writing, no patience, no image, no curtsy, just bullying because he is powerful thats it.. no hard feelings author but think a little or people will see your MC as a tool that is hammering everyone like beating and bullying men and at the same time you are making him very attrevtive to girls...

LV 2

GoldCrownz

MY STOMACH HURT GEMINI? IS THE SAME START OF NOVEL :( no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense no sense

LV 5

Jhonathan_Carrasco

I love the different powers with the mc as vegeta and how you can still make the mc act exactly the same as vegeta,then story is doing great so far,so so please keep it up I love this story please.

LV 4

LordFangYuan5

the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging

LV 14

mihaita98

it was a very interesting and entertaining novel till it got gotzila and other overgrown lizards in there. to be honest, that move from the author disapointed me greatly as even if im a very easy going person, to trow up such beasts in a modern-super power world without any sings prior is equivalent with trashing up your own story it could be acceptable if it was post apocaliptic or some beasts to appear or even dungeons till godzila level creatures to be introducesd, but i will drop it even when there are aditional chapters there i mean even breaging friza and his army or another anime crossover would be more acceptable

LV 5

Areize

don't recommend this novel past chapter 40the author realized that the power level was too op so he turned on the novel to cultivation one then upted up the scale of is to make the situation of the MC more desperate honestly I was expecting this since the moment the author started asking for money the novel was wasckey at best with very cringe moment in the first chapters while the author respond was Im writing and focusing on interaction and romance between the MC and his loved ones yet he has gone back I. his word since he realised that soon enough his novel will gone down now it's very shit

LV 4

Madara_Otsutsuki_

ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

LV 10

AndrewUchiha

-------------------------------------------------- Lido até o cap 12! até agora o conceito é bom, se conseguir evoluir a escrita, personagens / personalidade / falas vai ficar muito bom.... se eu terminar de ler eu farei outra avaliação. --------------------------------------------------

LV 1

Kingvin_Ordinary

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LV 2

Nafsu_geass28

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

LV 5

Kpnovellover

interesting ...... a plot twist . ...... godzilla . ...... and other monsters..... . .will this affect todoroki's character growth..... according to canon he was supposed to use his fire in the sports festival ........but now? ?

LV 3

michael_cerna

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LV 4

RemoteRomance

Dropped at chapter 54 Its decently written and there is an incredibly funny chapter thrown in there as well. HOWEVER if you are reading this for the MHA then dont bother, the author decides to change the entire book at chapter 50 or so and turns it into a whole thing about gods and cultivation of mana and kaiju which was incredibly disappointing. Author, if you ever change your mind and want to write a different story, just drop it a d write a new one. Kaiju, gods, and earth expanding 11x the size will throw practically all readers off big time.