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2020-02-25 Unido India
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Emblemas 8

Moments 738
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Kpnovellover
1 months ago
Commented

quick updates please. waiting 15 days for an update breaks the flow

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Kpnovellover
11 months ago
Commented

this story is awesome!!!!!!

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Kpnovellover
11 months ago
Commented

Simon?

Out of the fourteen Battle Master class bandit heads, Simon had already killed half of them out. What's more all of them were either Six Star Battle Master or Seven, they provided ample experience for his growth.

The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect

The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect

Eastern · ViciousPepper

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Kpnovellover
11 months ago
Commented

it seems there's a typo in this paragraph

"Well, I know what to do," Reaves concluded, his decision crystallizing in the recesses of his thoughts. "I will keep watching t Selina's eyes flared with anger at the woman's audacious remark. he Russell family for now before choosing whether to draw them in or alienate them." His gaze lingered on the now-empty doorway, the weight of uncertainty settling over the lavish hall.

Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic

Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic

Fantasy · Taosnothing

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Kpnovellover
1 years ago
Commented

before it was 2 minutes right ?

Bruce checked his watch. Ten more minutes.

Batman x Arc Reactor

Batman x Arc Reactor

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

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Kpnovellover
1 years ago
Commented

first of all,I'm no expert.this is just my opinion as a reader.author you are doing a good job writing the scene.but you are dragging this scene across multiple chapters.your description of the situation paints a vivid picture.but i think you should add some sounds as well.like moaning sounds or something.because after a while just readers will lose interest in it.

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Kpnovellover
1 years ago
Commented

can you add more details in the character list?atleast add affiliations. It's hard to keep track.and maybe something like a relationship status at least?ex. lover, friend, enemy, etc.

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Kpnovellover
1 years ago
Commented

if this is the way the story will keep going, then the author should put the ntr tag.

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