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Well, it's a harem. So it's normal to give it a 1 star rating. .......... ........................................................................................
so I'm on chapter 63 and I have a question. After the sports festival will we ever see ua or anyone else other than his girls? Saying that after the sports festival will be different from cannon is a massive understatement. After ua SF the story is just the characters in the Truman show 1998 brought to you by all God's pantheons.
Dropped at chapter 54 Its decently written and there is an incredibly funny chapter thrown in there as well. HOWEVER if you are reading this for the MHA then dont bother, the author decides to change the entire book at chapter 50 or so and turns it into a whole thing about gods and cultivation of mana and kaiju which was incredibly disappointing. Author, if you ever change your mind and want to write a different story, just drop it a d write a new one. Kaiju, gods, and earth expanding 11x the size will throw practically all readers off big time.
very bad story, 👎[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
I was excited about this concept and looking forward to the story but when I check and saw that their was a harem list I couldn’t read this anymore. Vegeta had 1 wife in canon so why have 1,000 harem members. Maybe I was too hopeful expecting the harem to have at most 2 members but once again authors have to lean into that harem side to please certain viewers. I may read this again but I’ll definitely skip all those harem parts do to it not making any sense nor does it helps a story.
Simplemente no es mi tipo de Historia, por alguna razón no importa cuanto lea no puede llegar a gustarme. Mas que emocionarme me cansa y sinceramente ni yo entiendo porque me pasa
The dialogue is like Im reading a movie script it’ so bad, I genuinely don’t understand how people enjoy reading this garbage. . . . . . . .
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Mc is not well made. His personality is not consistent. He acts different all the times. And the story is pretty boring.
It got so annoying. The author keeps using g the N word at the beginning of every chapter (doesn't start until like ch 80) but that's just a minor issue. What I hate is the MC's constant change in character. He's actually just a huge joke at this point. In one of the early chapters I jokes that he switched from :Vegeta- I shall kill anyone who disrespect me. to Deadpool- the comedic release that can't break the 4th wall. well jokes on me every 5 chapters or so he switches back between a goofy comedic character to a murderous dictator. and he eventually did break the 4th wall smh
ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
En serio, solo las novelas parodias como "Invisible Dragon" son peores, bueno, capaz que son mejores ya que el objetivo es ser malas.....................
-------------------------------------------------- Lido até o cap 12! até agora o conceito é bom, se conseguir evoluir a escrita, personagens / personalidade / falas vai ficar muito bom.... se eu terminar de ler eu farei outra avaliação. --------------------------------------------------
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that some sit right there, writing for the sake of writing, no patience, no image, no curtsy, just bullying because he is powerful thats it.. no hard feelings author but think a little or people will see your MC as a tool that is hammering everyone like beating and bullying men and at the same time you are making him very attrevtive to girls...
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the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot
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Revelar Spoiler
Author, u really never let me down about mc saiyans powers, u kept his powers very originals to real dbz, i really appreciate it, Recently i i wanted to read a fanfics and mc has saiyans blood but he couldn't even defeat tier 6 in ssj 4 .weak asf, TBH that author made the saiyans name like joke unforgivable ...so far ut story is good keep it up, thx
Le MC a une relation avec ça sis à 10 ans🤢🤮 Et l'histoire et nul est générique au possible. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Maneiro...................................................................................................................................................
Very difficult to read, filled with random irrelvent "Authors Notes" like its a youtube video and uses a play style dialogue format instead of book style.
Well, it's a harem. So it's normal to give it a 1 star rating. .......... ........................................................................................
so I'm on chapter 63 and I have a question. After the sports festival will we ever see ua or anyone else other than his girls? Saying that after the sports festival will be different from cannon is a massive understatement. After ua SF the story is just the characters in the Truman show 1998 brought to you by all God's pantheons.
Dropped at chapter 54 Its decently written and there is an incredibly funny chapter thrown in there as well. HOWEVER if you are reading this for the MHA then dont bother, the author decides to change the entire book at chapter 50 or so and turns it into a whole thing about gods and cultivation of mana and kaiju which was incredibly disappointing. Author, if you ever change your mind and want to write a different story, just drop it a d write a new one. Kaiju, gods, and earth expanding 11x the size will throw practically all readers off big time.
very bad story, 👎[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
I was excited about this concept and looking forward to the story but when I check and saw that their was a harem list I couldn’t read this anymore. Vegeta had 1 wife in canon so why have 1,000 harem members. Maybe I was too hopeful expecting the harem to have at most 2 members but once again authors have to lean into that harem side to please certain viewers. I may read this again but I’ll definitely skip all those harem parts do to it not making any sense nor does it helps a story.
Simplemente no es mi tipo de Historia, por alguna razón no importa cuanto lea no puede llegar a gustarme. Mas que emocionarme me cansa y sinceramente ni yo entiendo porque me pasa
The dialogue is like Im reading a movie script it’ so bad, I genuinely don’t understand how people enjoy reading this garbage. . . . . . . .
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Mc is not well made. His personality is not consistent. He acts different all the times. And the story is pretty boring.
It got so annoying. The author keeps using g the N word at the beginning of every chapter (doesn't start until like ch 80) but that's just a minor issue. What I hate is the MC's constant change in character. He's actually just a huge joke at this point. In one of the early chapters I jokes that he switched from :Vegeta- I shall kill anyone who disrespect me. to Deadpool- the comedic release that can't break the 4th wall. well jokes on me every 5 chapters or so he switches back between a goofy comedic character to a murderous dictator. and he eventually did break the 4th wall smh
ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC ARROGANT, CRINGY, CRAZY MC 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
En serio, solo las novelas parodias como "Invisible Dragon" son peores, bueno, capaz que son mejores ya que el objetivo es ser malas.....................
-------------------------------------------------- Lido até o cap 12! até agora o conceito é bom, se conseguir evoluir a escrita, personagens / personalidade / falas vai ficar muito bom.... se eu terminar de ler eu farei outra avaliação. --------------------------------------------------
NiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNice
that some sit right there, writing for the sake of writing, no patience, no image, no curtsy, just bullying because he is powerful thats it.. no hard feelings author but think a little or people will see your MC as a tool that is hammering everyone like beating and bullying men and at the same time you are making him very attrevtive to girls...
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judgingthe novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging the novel is very ignore the posts of those who did not read all and was judging
i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot i like the plot
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Revelar Spoiler Author, u really never let me down about mc saiyans powers, u kept his powers very originals to real dbz, i really appreciate it, Recently i i wanted to read a fanfics and mc has saiyans blood but he couldn't even defeat tier 6 in ssj 4 .weak asf, TBH that author made the saiyans name like joke unforgivable ...so far ut story is good keep it up, thx
Le MC a une relation avec ça sis à 10 ans🤢🤮 Et l'histoire et nul est générique au possible. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Maneiro...................................................................................................................................................
Very difficult to read, filled with random irrelvent "Authors Notes" like its a youtube video and uses a play style dialogue format instead of book style.