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Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
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Woke up as Yuji Itadori
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it's rare for a good jjk fic and from you author I can only imagine it being good
So, I'd sadly not recommend reading this: the story's pacing is absurd (seriously, this was just bad storytelling), the characters are about as bland as they come, scene and character description are almost completely absent, and the author is thinking about accelerating the pacing even more (I'm on chapter 13). I'm kinda annoyed that I got my expectations up when reading the first chapter; it had pretty good spelling, an enjoyable writing style, and was just... interesting.
The story is very good! I recommend it to anyone who wants to read it! I think the only point that didn't make the story 5 stars for me but 4.6 is because the story has no stability in writing and the author hasn't updated for more than 20 days.....
Didn't had any hope but man, the fights are done great yes sometimes pacing is just fine but NOT BAD, yuji has very well developed character in here, realistic THERE IS ONLY 1 PROBLEM, give other chracter more depth i mean you already have with their fights but try to slow down a little giving the reader more about their personal views and day to day problems it will help them connect better, (STILL TOP LEVEL JJK FAN-FIC)
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Incredibly bland. That is how I would summarise this story. Mind numbing start with a lifeless mc who, I admit, does get a bit more tolerable over the course of the story, yet simply feels like a more mature, not stupid yuji. There is no individuality to him at all. The power progression is good, if put in a vacuum. Give it context and the battles are TERRIBLE. Excessively drawn out so as to keep cannon the same. He doesn't learn from his mistakes, yaps constantly, no sense of urgency when he should know better, doesn't capitalise on opportunities, and then complains when shit doesn't go his way. No planning before the shibuya incident at all that could circumvent 90% of the problems he encountered. Would background is not expanded on at all, and the world feels incredibly small. The writing quality is average, nothing much to say there. I found myself skipping the next three chapters the moment kinjaku appeared (during yuji and mahito fight), it was so forced that I couldn't bear to read it. So overall, a bit below average in terms of plot (however little there is lol) with acceptable writing quality and a lacklustre mc who doesn't seem to impact the story at all even with his tremendous boost in power compared to Canon yuji. Very disappointing, but expected.
The biggest problem is that it reads like a translation, or perhaps the authors first language isn't english. There are loads of inconsistencies with the characters- speech being the biggest. Gojo speaks OOC, the MC overcomplicating sentences etc. It's a glaring issue, but one you can sort of ignore if you try hard enough.
The story at the start mostly follows canon,The shibuya arc is where the real changes begin and there will be a lot of yuji glazing,overall I really like this story,The only complaint is that the author does not update consistently and the chapters are rather short
good story. really interesting. only problem i have is the inconsistent uploading and the fact that the author cant get genders right. good story would recommend otherwise
i read 25 chapters. this is a case of way to close to main story and pretending to deviate only to use some boring excuse to mask the unwillingness to try something new. how can you praise itadori learning techniques when it's not even slightly earned. the writing is good at least so i clearly understand what is going on. it's already aged poorly lore wise. ultimately why read this when you can just reread the manga or watch the anime. at least you get likeable, actually relatable characters whom you can see.
Я уже ранее писал отзыв, но решил немного его отредактировать. Ваша работа действительно интересна - я искал не мало рассказов по JJK или с самоставкой, но ваша, на мой взгляд, одна из лучших. Не могу дать комментарий по поводу орфографии или пунктуации, так как сам читаю работу, переведенную на русский язык. Поэтому автор, тебе вдохновения, и чтобы все у тебя было хорошо. И большое спасибо за работу, которая даёт возможность отдохнуть
I need more of this story, I think it's one of the best jujutsu stories right now, so author, don't be discouraged, it's a great story, continue it :D
Author please make a My Hero Academia story with Midorya as MC because his ending in the manga was so horrible that I won't even watch the anime 😓😓
The story is very good but the chapters are short and the author sometimes doesn't update regularly
No originality whatsoever the author of this fanfic just follows the anime 99% of the story. No new arcs or events happening, the MC who got reincarnated acts as if he is Yuji. I am too disappointed. Except for the writing quality which I will give five star, everything else received one star.