I have already written the first two chapters of the rewrite, and it is different. I feel like there is a lot of potential that was missed due to my naive mindset when I first started writing. I will definitely keep the Ilvermorny arc, since it is very important towards the end goal of the story. but there will be massive changes in the story. Things that would make the story much more enjoyable I would say. look forward to it.
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Already wrote it. Gonna upload it in a couple of hours
The crowd's cheers reached a fever pitch as the two trainers prepared for the final clash, the electrifying atmosphere of the stadium filled with the promise of an unforgettable battle.
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I can agree with this. I saw a video of a full hazards build, absolutely horrendous. made his opponent quit lol.
The crowd erupted into deafening cheers, the sound reverberating through the stadium. Ash aimed the Pokeball at Pidgeot, watching as a red light enveloped his friend. "You did great, Pidgeot. Rest now," he whispered.
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You always have the best comments. Thank you, I really appreciate the engagement
"Charizard, Seismic Toss!" Ash commanded. Charizard caught Scizor mid-air, spinning it around before hurling it towards the ground with tremendous force. The stadium floor shook as Scizor hit the ground, creating a cloud of dust.
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It would be an interesting concept. I can see it being like a pressurised water blade, capable of cutting through almost anything. Instead of the millions of microscopic needles that attack a person's very cells like rasenshuriken. But that's a problem for the future LOL.
"Charizard, use Dragon Claw!" Ash commanded, desperation creeping into his voice. Charizard's claws glowed with a fierce aura as it lunged at Victreebell.
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Just finishing off my assessments for uni, I'll get right on the next chapter! Ty for your patience.
"And there we have it folks, the first win of the battle goes to Rex and his Scizor. That is not to say Pikachu did not perform exceptionally, after all, this is the most damage Scizor has ever take." James said passionately.
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Completely understandable. That's why I'm currently in the process of rewriting it all from scratch, then replacing everything at once. Look forward to it, as there won't be any of the issues you have aptly pointed out. Thank you for your input, I value honesty and criticism as it helps me identify problems.
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I'm glad! I hope to read your comments and thoughts when I post the new version.
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in progress :)
Nah, I just had one last chapter saved that needed posting. I'm fully focused on rewriting now.
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I haven't decided yet. I initially wanted to replace the chapters, but I might make it an entirely different novel.
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Those are all amazing ideas, thank you!
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