HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error.

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SpaceZeph

1. Heads up for newcomers The MC, Loki, doesn't know the HP Plot, but a lot of LOTM lore. The beginning can feel sluggish and weird, maybe even annoying at times, but give it time until chapter 10, that's where the fun begins! Loki doesn't have a cheat in the traditional kind of way... no system, no goldenfinger, no wishes. Instead he seems to be the only Error Pathway Beyonder. Also, personality wise, Loki feels like the love child of Danitz & Amon. 2. Review / My opinion So far (star of year 3) we still haven't seen much of the beyonder world, but it has started, I reckon this year is the prelude to beyonder shenanigans. The incorporation of Beyonder into Wizarding World is greatly executed. The interactions and bonds between the supporting cast and the MC feel genuine and well done. A little bit of plot armor here and there, but that's also a bit of "Adam's" fault. xD There are a lot of similarities between Loki and Klein, paying homage to the "original" by taking fan-favourite mysteries, names, items, etc. The story is highly addictive! I'm really bad at this but yea... TL;DR - Give the story at least 10 chapters to get you hooked. Follow Loki, the personality love-child of Danitz & Amon, on his shenanigans and adventures to liberate the money of other people, while living Ash Ketchum's wet dream by petting all the XXXXX-Creatures along the way! Highly recommended, but sadly severely underestimated story. Dunno how to end this, sooo bye?

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A_Sleepless_dream

Good story cool ideas but story overall: Mc doesn’t know the world he is in nor have any understanding of magic / HP kinda get annoying when he says it 100 times and demonstrates that over and over again…. He let himself be murrdered and beaten down with his sister threatened and almost raped. Mc doesn’t look to have any guts or understanding or plan forward it is all riding on beyonders and lord of mysteries Great set up for what you have

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Dcap_Nslapaho

MC doesn't know HP..he only knows LOTM...MC gets pass around beaten like a dog and get away by plot armor..this repeats throughout. if you're into MC's that gets beatdown then plot armor saves him..then this is for you. in short he did a ritual cause he wants to be isekied then he did just to suffer.

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LKingu

Review: Quality (3) | Stability (4) | Story Development (2) | Character Design (2) | World-Building (2) The first ten chapters were relatively enjoyable, with some writing flaws and an occasionally irritating protagonist, but it served as a decent casual read. Unfortunately, the story started to decline after that. I follow the "rule of three strikes” on bad stories, and this story hits all I. Forced Character Actions:The characters often feel contrived, with decisions made to serve the plot rather than develop naturally. II. Poor World Integration: The mix of settings between LOTM nd Harry Potter was mishandled. I would’ve preferred a clearer, more consistent world-building approach by stricking being HP or at least introducing the LOTM more gradually. III. Overly Forced Plot: The story's progression feels too artificial, with key events like the MC’s accidental encounters, a sudden death of a potential adoptive parent, and the mentor’s untimely demise all leading to an abrupt introduction of a lady who expected the MC’s arrival, has heard a prophecy involving him, and who is also apparently a High Sequence Beyonder. This was honestly the one that ticked me off the most. The rushed pacing really detracts from the narrative, and all the “hints” and “foreshadowing” are awkward and offer no sibstance to the story — far too superficial. A more effective approach would have been to gradually introduce some aspects of LOTM, rather than overwhelming the reader with them early on. In comparison, THE DIRECT INSPIRATIONS, Harry Potter and LOTM subtly build toward their prophecies over time, which creates a more engaging and immersive experience than this fanfic. Overall, while this story isn’t for me, it’s still an improvement over some other works, like that dawn awfull **** **** stupid Isekai Dimensional Cube novel (I hate that novel).

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_Solomon_

It's an excellent story imo, as this is my first lotm x hp read and you may find the story boring or edgy in the start but it gets better and we do not have much world building as of now but so far it's good and the incorporation of lotm and hp verse is also going well... the update schedule is also quite good with more than one chapter usually... I would recommend you to try reading this book

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Spelloyal

It's a good read, but it's marred by the protagonist and frequent errors in details such as continuity errors. The worldbuilding and stability of the updates are really good, but unfortunately it's all marred by a protagonist who starts out with negative intelligence in the first few chapters, literally betting his life and a likely fate worse than death to find out whether the world he was transmigrated to was or wasn't LoM by speaking the true names of various deities and beings to see if any would show up to kill or torture him. After that he continues with several acts of negative intelligence, although this finally improves around chapter 50 and his intelligence increases to 0. At some point he finally reaches below average intelligence and more or less stabilizes with some moments of peak intelligence or stupidity. So although I really liked a lot of things about this fic and intend to continue reading, I can't give it a rating higher than 3.4 due to the problem with the MC's intelligence and the continuity errors.

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Sin_of_sloth

the first few chapters felt like a slog but after that it just got better and better, at chapter 30 I couldn't wait to read more of this. i love the concept and the way the author combined the world's. to the author: if you need help or ideas for stuff like the rituals be sure to ask us readers or just look up ideas on the internet. I'm sure that can get pretty difficult.

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ILove_Hayan048

My main problem with this novel is the main character. To put it bluntly he is a retard. He is a transmigrator so don't give me the "but he is still 11 years old and is weak" I do not hate the fact that he knows nothing of the HP world in fact I love it as I am sick and tired of fanfic MCs doing the same thing over and over because they have meta knowledge but what I have issues with is his stupidity. In the early chapters he is a street urchin with a 4 year old sister but then instead of doing whatever is necessary so he and his sister would survive and be safe the retarded son of gun decided that holding on to his modern day saintly morals is the right thing to do. They are struggling but instead of using the money to at least secure themselves he donates it to charity and orphanages like wtf also even if he is an average joe, the mere fact that he came from the modern world already gave him innate advantages even I could think of a few things that would earn me enough money to at least not live in the streets. At least until the chapter where I stopped he feels like a brainless character being dragged around by the plot, he doesn't take charge of his and his sister's life sustained by his massive plot armor. In summary, he is like a classic JP isekai MC. If it were any other person they would have long been taken advantage of as they won't suddenly have a thief who was angry at them for stealing in their territory as their teacher for stealing because coincidentally they lack a partner. He complains that his sufferings are unfair which in fact if only he stopped and thought about what he was going to do for a while he could have totally avoided the shit he finds himself in. If his attitude changes in the future or he remains as a retard then tell me. I can't bring myself to read a story following someone like this even if he becomes overpowered in the future what is the use when it all comes down to plot convenience and luck. The thing that drew me to LoTM is the sheer effort Klein had to do with the hand he is dealt with, he thinks and thinks as one wrong step he could die, I think the author is aiming for something similar but messed up the execution which resulted to this.....anyways I am usually not so critical about fanfics as I treat them as Junkfood but being one of the few LoTM fanfics and it's even a rare cross over with a franchise I also really like (Harry Potter) I can't help but have some expectations then they were dashed by the MC which is why I am now ranting so much due to my frustration. Anyways that is all.

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CTHULHU_YOGSOTHOTH

Ok so I'll be honest here the Start may be a little bit rough since he doesn't have any knowledge about the HP verse and thinks he is in LOTM but it gets good from chapter 10 I haven't seen any grammatical errors or anything like that here and mc isn't someone that goes I'll become Ash and gotta catch them all type he is cautious and does things that is actually possible and doesn't become powerful in day 1 and the side characters aren't brainless idiots or anything like that So all In one I would say this is one of the best LOTM X HP fanfiction on this app So thank u author for this

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Mr_Aryan_Pradhan

in starting he knows about Harry Potter World and lord of mysteries but overtime shows he doesn't know about Harry Potter novel like he doesn't know Cerberus is hagrid pet but if read the novel he would know in starting few chapters with the black matriac he shared his knowledge of Harry Potter

Не варто витраченого часу. Головний герой ідіот. Персонажі-просто декорації. Весь світ крутиться навколо бажань головного героя, він не отримує ніяких негативних наслідків від своїх дій. Діалоги написані так, ніби автор ніколи не чув як розмовляють реальні люди. Нікому не рекомендую це читати.

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Absurd_Idiot

A unique crossover of HP and LOTM, one of the best LOTM fanfiction novels I have read that isn't a Translation. 10/10 for me. I'll give it a 5 star in everything except world background which I gave a 4 star since much isn't written yet about it.

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mido_3957

Really good crossover between HP and Lotm, the novel is at first but I see the potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Mamdouh_mohamed

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Time_walker

The story has good LOTM/HP the main character is quite enjoyable to follow so far the story seems smooth as the author has structured the story quite nicely. My only issue is the pacing can feel a bit slow but it’s fine if you binge read the story. The update stability is good as the author is consistent with it.

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Mamdouh_mohamed

Mr. Author, can you separate the fourth and fifth volumes as you separated the first four volumes? I have been following the novel since about the first 10 chapters, but I am waiting until the volume is finished and I read it completely. I left the novel until I felt something was wrong with the length of the volume, and I discovered that the fourth volume and the third year had finished a long time ago, and the fifth volume was about to finish as well.

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Poleshco

I would like to say that I liked the story Like the idea of HP/LOTM itself, the idea of not knowing the world of HP, although it is not very logical from the point of view of an ordinary reader of novels, adds liveliness to the story. I was also pleased with how the system of powers of the Lord of Secrets is written in, there are quite a lot of shortcomings in my opinion, but overall I was very pleased with the story, although the beginning is really too drawn out and did not reveal much of anything. Finally, I want to note that I cannot correctly assess the level of writing, because I do not speak English at the level to read and understand everything correctly.

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wisdomseeker

I'm really surprised tbh, this HP x LOTM fanfic was good. The only downside was MC is not smart enough, okay maybe because i always compare him with Amon but yeah my fault. Thanks for the fanfic tho