Primordial Kryptonian Across the Omniverse

LV 1

Infinite999

great love it hopes author continue it.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

QuaziY

Just imagine superman but many times stronger in stone age without any alien invasion and any super powered individuals, wearing his dress all time, using his powers against humans at every turn to solve every problem. And everyone likes and accepts him. Only Lady Stark's actions and fears make some sense. **It doesn't suit my taste.**

LV 14

Potatowned

I'll give it a 5 because I was entertained but this isn't for everyone. A lot of the story is just a retelling of the original GoT story. Like imagine a decent author wrote a summary about GoT but every now and then his OC shows up and changes things around. If it weren't for the fact that I've read all the GoT books and enjoyed them I don't think I would've liked this. Still though, grammar isn't bad, MC is likeable although he's a little too much of a protagonist sometimes.

LV 6

SetteXIII

The history is very well writed, the grammar was without any noticeable issue, world building was good as long as you have some knowledge of the histories the fanfic are based, even thou normally would be underwhelming see such a OP Mc in a low powered world, the way it was writed in fact make the history flow smoothly; the only complain I would have is that the history was marked as a "R18" but until now all such scenes had been writed off-screen, I would like to know if it will be all like this or If the author just didn't want to write such scenes with side-characters.

LV 2

Stanie_Thomas

Good as always mate👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 2

DrOpMeOuT

you cant give a story the title "across the omni verse" if he stays in Westeros for the entirety of the story, its misleading, i mean over 70 chapters and still in one world? nope

LV 13

Matthew_Dickson

Please come back! This is an incredible story!

LV 3

Choejhulkp

Excellent story. One of the best works done. Was a little worried about the crossover with Superman lore and Game of Thrones but it works. Things changed and for the better. Want more and more!

LV 15

Artoriastheabyssen

I am enjoying so far(about 30 chapters in), the character is not superman as he doesn’t have the no kill rule. Overall i feel like his early childhood could have been developed more and shown another side of rule under aerys as some got ffs have done. Overall it’s not bad for some easy reading, it has good grammer and dialogue so I will definitely keep reading 😉